Throwback scenes from my fictions - Scene 8 pg 9 Jul 31 - Page 5

Roothe piya manaoo kase 😍

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Of course this is my most favorite story

Roothe Piya Manaoo Kaise

In this part Geet had no idea the pain Maan has in his heart

and the place his Misty has in his heart

This is scene of Roothe Piya

My favourite one

I read it so many times

Once again this scene touch my heart and bring tears in my eyes because of the pain Maan is bearing

I have read many times (RPMK)roothe piya. This is where geet realises what misthy is for maan.

A heart touching scene from one of my favs.... roothe piya manoon kyase

Hi, Roothe piya manau kaise, u know what I read this maaneet story of ur many times, l love this story also. And u recall the story one time more.

Hey Anu,

This was a very interesting intense scene. It reminds me of the OG show's track where Maan was very angry at Geet after she said no to marrying him in front of the press.
He was hurt and wasn't letting her tend to him.
Uff the hotness, yearning! I so much love those episodes that I couldn't stop writing stories over those parts. Whenever there was Maaneet separation track there used to be some other magic, I must be one of those few who absolutely loved the intense chemistry and passion during all of their fight tracks lol. And reading those shades in the maaneet stories have always been so much fun & nostalgia.

I loved the way you incorporated the concept of Maan and MSK. I personally love to differentiate like this as well. With Geet, he is her Maan, the softer, misunderstood passionate lover.

MSK is the shrewd outer/official side for his work profile who melts down in front of his Mishty.

In this scene his hurt and anger are portrayed very nicely along with Geet's apprehension.

"Itnee jaldi himat haar gayee. Mishty apne Maan ko aise chor ker nahi jatee but again, nor you are Mishty nor I am Maan" - ouch that sting.
What did Geet do that he is saying these?

Lastly, Replying to your comment here as well - "My other favorite genre.. which I learnt recently is your favorite as well- Maaneet childhood love story.."

Yes, I started with this genre as Mortal Promises. And I can probably write thousand stories on this exact genre but kept myself away to avoid exerting the same genre

Childhood love is very different and has an unparalleled pureness.
Maaneet had such a beautiful connection which strangely matches that flavor of childhood pull IMO despite being very different.

Thanks for sharing the lovely scenes. 🤗💜

Hi Anu.... trust that you and your family are well.

Thanks for tagging me....

Another one of my fav stories......

I now I have to read this story again

you have an amazing collection of stories

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Emotional Scene.... beautifully written

Maan's pain was evident

he clearly yearns for his Mishty

he indeed has this imagine of his Mishty

alas Geet trampled all over it and broke Maan

of cos Geet felt his pain

as expected she was upset and could not face Maan

it was sad that he said that he is MSK and Maan is buried in the ground

well Maan dreams were football and Mishty

however both are gone

not surprised that Geet was also in pain

she realised that Maan is in immense pain

well he told that she is Geet Khurana and he is Maan Singh Khurana

now he wants to end this game of Maan and Mishty!

waiting for next scene

appreciate your efforts in keeping this forum going

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very emotional

Nice idea ... Scene from enchanted repost..