Jagdish never liked Maan. What right did he have to promise he would marry someone?
Jagdish never liked Maan. What right did he have to promise he would marry someone?
Darji just adopted Geet for namesake. Just to fulfill his own desire for a better position. But it still helped Geet.
What threat has emerged for Geet? Hope that family is not after her.
Glad Geet is highly educated. She can make a good life for herself.
Interesting update. Let's see how the story moved on.
Part 1
Great update… well written
Maan is the apple of the Khurana family
great that he two moms that love and care for him
glad that Sheetal gives Naina equal rights over Maan
upset that Jagdish did not accept Maan as his heir
sad that Maan's parents passed away
at least he has Naina
hate that he trusted a cunning astrologer
dismayed that he got remarried
feeling for Naina
well she moves to the OH
angry that Jagdish promised Pummy that Maan would marry Sameera
he had no right to do so
oh Geet was an orphanage
good that she was adopted
alas it was for his benefit
disgusted with his relatives
pleased he did something for Geet
his regrets were reasonable
worried for Geet
update soon
wow what a turn of events
jagdish is such a prick, how can he fix sameera for maan???
glad naina is with maan all this while
here geet too seems to have no body
wonder how these two are gonna meet
Superb part
JAGDISH his tauji is really gone mad
Poor naina
Waiting how maaneet going meet
Aha jealous jagdish causing trouble for all eh. And on top promisjng saneera will marry Maan. What a evil ordain he is
And still not getting a child. How vine he gif not divorce Pammi
interesting history about geet
Part – 2
Back to Maan’s life…
A few years later….
Maan has grown up into this handsome young dude that every girl would like to marry….
The Khurana Mansion….
At the OH….
MSK haina, OH mein hi rahega…
Just like our very own MSK from GHSP…..
Maan has freshly graduated and is ready for marriage according to his family…
Neither Naina nor Maan have any clue about the promise Jagdish made to Pummy…
Naina is in search of a bride for her ladla already…
She has spread the news among her friends and the hunt is on for Maan’s bride without Maan’s knowledge…
Maan is getting ready to go meet his friend, someone special…
Maan comes down and is in a hurry to leave, he is chatting on his mobile and doesn’t notice Naina who is eagerly waiting for him…
Naina : Maan, Maaaaaaan, ek minute, rukho Maan
Maan: bye maa
Naina : Maan, Ek minute toh rukho, mujhe kuch zaroori baat karni hai
Maan: later, I’m in a hurry
Naina : aaisa bhi kya jaldhi hai? Abhi college bhi katam ho gayi hai
Naina fakes to be angry… nakli gussa…
Maan: ok, what’s the matter?
Maan comes back to listen to her….
Naina : pehle beitjao
Maan sits on the couch beside her….
Maan: jaldhi bathao maa, kya baat hai? Aap ko kuch chahiye kya? Kaho, kya lekhe aaoon? Nizamuddin se prasad?
Naina : hummare bahu
Maan: what?
Maan is shocked to hear that…..
Naina : ye dekho, iss mein kaunsi ladhki tumme pasand hai?
Maan: maa, ye sab kya hai? Aap ne mujhe pooche bina ye sab kyun ki?
Naina : ab tum itne bade ho gaye ho ki mujhe tumse permission lena padega?
Maan: aaisa nahi hai, ye meri life hai aur ladhki bhi meri pasand ki hona chahiye na?
Naina : mein bhi wahi kehthi hoon, pehle photo dekho aur bathao ki kaunsi ladhki pasand hai, phir hum usse ek bar milthe hai, aur tumme pasand aayi toh hum baat karenge warna nahi
Maan: we are not in the 19th century, how can one decide to marry someone just by looking at their picture?
Naina: 19th century mein toh photo bhi nahi dikhate Maan bete
Maan: but mom, I can’t do that, I will only marry someone after having known them long enough
Naina: then you should marry only Ramu kaka, he is the one you have known for that long
Maan: but I have to get the feeling that I can’t live without the girl
Maan is lost in some thought…
His eyes are filled with beautiful dreams…
Naina smiles seeing that…. So that’s the matter….
Maan has actually grown up so much that he has started thinking about his dream girl!!
Maan: I have to spend time with the girl before I know that she is the one for Maan Singh Khurana
Naina: OK then, I’ll choose the girl and ask her to come and stay with us until you decide
Maan is taken aback…. He didn’t expect such an answer from his mom…
Maan just looks at her not knowing what to do …
Naina: what happened Maan bete? Why the silence? Ohhh, you are waiting for me to choose the girl, how good my boy is?
Naina takes out the photos to have a look….
Naina: this girl looks too innocent, she can’t handle you, haan, this girl looks good, but she doesn’t know to smile, at least one of you should have a smiling face
Maan snatches the photos from his mother…
Naina: what? You don’t like my choice? You want to choose?
Maan puts the pictures away…
Maan: aap ko itne talkeef lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
Maan can’t marry anyone just like that, he wants to marry his dream girl, someone who believes that Maan is her life and can’t live without him…
Maan wants to be the reason behind someone’s happiness….
That should be Sam only…
Maan is her happiness….
She lives with the dreams of a happy life with non other than Maan Singh Khurana…
Just then Pummy comes to the OH in search of Jagdish… Jagdish is not here though…
Pummy has been hearing their conversation….
Pummy: haan didi, Maan teek keh raha hai, aap ko takleef lene ki zaroorat nahi hai, ladhki toh yahi haina
Naina is not so happy by the intrusion….
Naina : Jagdish ji yahan nahi hai
She is indirectly asking Pummy to leave them alone….
Pummy: mein toh aap se milne hi aayi hoon
Naina : aaj achanak humari yaadh kaise aayi?
Pummy: mein bhi Maan ki shadhi ki baat karna hi chahthi hoon didi
Maan: maa, hum badh mein baat karenge, mujhe jaana hai
Maan just can’t stand that woman, he leaves immediately…
Pummy: lagtha hai Maan sharma gaya
Naina : Maan ke liye humne bahut sari rishthe aaye hai, ab toh Maan ko hi faisla karna hai, aakhir ye usski shadhi haina?
Naina tries to imply that Pummy has no rights in Maan’s life….
Pummy: hare didi, Maan ke liye ladhki kab se tayaar hai, ab bas humme hi jaldhi inki shadhi karwana hai, humme bhi DAdi banna haina?
Naina : tum kya keh rahe ho?
Pummy: didi, Sameera ko aap bhool gayi? Humne toh Maan aur Sameera ki shadhi bahut pehle hi tei kardhi, unhonne aap ko bathaya nahi?
Naina is shocked to hear that, what’s her useless husband has done this time? If it was about Naina, she would have remained silent like always, but this time it is about her Maan, she can’t keep quiet….
What’s this man thinking about himself ? Has he gone mad?
Who has given him the rights to take decisions in Maan’s life?
Naina : ye kya bakwaas hai?
Pummy: hare ye bakwaas nahi hai, yahi sach hai, aap ko koi shak hai toh unko hi poocho, lo woh bhi aagaye hai
Jagdish just enters….
Even Jagdish is surprised to see Pummy here….
Jagdish: kya baat hai? Aaj tum donno ek saath ho? Lagtha hai koi bahut bAdi mamla hai?
Pummy: haan ji, aap ko nahi lagtha ki ab humme Maan aur Sameera ki shadhi karwana chahiye
Jagdish remains silent for a while….
Jagdish: uski kya jaldhi hai, abhi Sameera aage padna chahthi haina?
Pummy: woh padke kya karegi? Ab toh shadhi karne ki sahi umar hai usski
Naina doesn’t like anything that’s going on…. She keeps looking at Jagdish angrily…
Jagdish notices that…. Naina ab Maan ki zindagi ko barbad hone nahi degi….
Jagdish: teek hai, teek hai, tum jao aur Sameera se baat karo, hum bhi Maan se baat karenge
Pummy leaves…..
Naina : koi Maan se baat nahi karega, aur Maan ki shadhi ki baat ko lekhe kissi ko bhi chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, waise bhi kissi ko koi haq nahi Maan ki zindagi pe
Jagdish: tumse kaun baat kartha? Hum Maan se hi baat karthe hai
Maan has forgotten his wallet and has come to take it….
He can’t see his mother being insulted…
Maan: maa, aap ne bahut sahi kaha, MSK ki zindagi pe sirf aur sirf aapko pura haq hai, aur kissi ko yahan koi kaam nahi hai, aap kamakaam pareshan kyun ho rahe ho?
Jagdish: Nainaiiiiiiiii, ye kya keh raha hai?
Maan: chilaoo mat, zara tameez se baat karo, aap MSK ke maa se baat kar rahe ho
Jagdish: tum ne issko mere barein mein kya ulta seedha bathaya? Ye aaise mujhse baat kaise kar saktha?
Jagdish shows his anger on Naina as usual….
Maan: mein koi bacha nahi hoon, mujhe sab samajh aatha hai, maa aap chup kyun ho? Iss aadmi se kaho ki ye abhi yahan se jaaye, warna
Jagdish: warna kyaaaaa?
Naina : Maan, aap jao bete, aap kamakaam iss mein kyun padthe ho? Aap ki sahdhi aap ki marzi se hi hogi
Maan: teek hai, aap kissi se bhi baat karke apna waqt barbad mat karo
Maan stares at Jagdish….
Jagdish had to leave silently…
Jagdish knows that he has no power when it comes to Maan, Maan never has any respect for him, having seen him ill treat his mother since childhood Maan slowly started losing his respect for him even as a human being….
Naina is very proud of her son, he is the perfect gentleman, he knows how to respect everyone equally(the lAdi es)….
That’s the gentleman raised by a woman….
Jagdish keeps insisting that Maan marries only Sameera for he had promised his wife….
Maan is no “Ram” and Jagdish is definitely no “Dasarath” for the son to keep up his father’s promises….
Naina is with her son in this matter, she will not tolerate any nonsense when it comes to Maan…
Naina backed Maan and gave him all the liberty to live his life in his own terms…
With his mother’s blessings, Maan successfully escaped from marrying Sameera…
Maan followed his heart ignoring Jagdish’s stupid promises….
Life is not just Sun Shines, and about dream come trues, there’s also the no moon days and scary dark nights, when your dreaded nightmares do come true…
Maan went through such a nightmare in his life t…
Maan had a very rough phase after that…
Maan learnt a lot from his bad experience…
Maan wants to put his past behind and move on…
But Maan is not ready to part with the past entirely, he knows that what has happened will stay with him forever, he wants that to be a part of his life, yes, he is not someone to forget the past and leave behind a part of his life, just for the sake of his future… haina?
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