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part 23
Maan has moved in close to Geet and she is not happy about it. Its a victory for him and a threat to her.
part 23
Maan has moved in close to Geet and she is not happy about it. Its a victory for him and a threat to her.
Maan's advice continues to go downhill. Shruti is getting more angry.
part 24
Pradeep is bringing them together in small ways. He got Geet to participate in the housewarming.
Part 23
well Pradeep helps Maan
of cos Geet assisted Pradeep knowing Maan's anger
oh where did Geet go?
as expected Maan wants to know more about his son
Maan's fears were reasonable
hope Geet did not leave with Rithan
wish Maan and Geet would talk
update soon
Geet was one move ahead this time. She has not come back to the apartment.
24
maan shifted in apartment with pradep's help
maan is worried as geet is missing for two days
Part – 25
A week later…
One morning…
Pradeep comes running and knocks…
Maan is in the wash room and gets irritated by the continuous knocking sound…
Maybe it’s Geet…
Maan comes to open excited…
Maan: Pradeep
Pradeep: sir sirrr
Maan gets angry…
Maan: can’t you wait?
Pradeep: sir, what were you doing sir?
Maan: what do you mean?
Pradeep: sir, he is here sir, and you were busy!!! What sir?
Maan: Pradeep, don’t irritate me early in the morning
Pradeep: sir, you first come with me sir
Pradeep holds Maan’s hand and tries to drag him…
Maan is in his track suit…
Maan: hey, stop it
Pradeep: sir ,he is so cute, he is just like you
Maan now understands a little… is it Rithan?
Maan: what? Pradeep, do you mean him?
Pradeep: yes sir, he has come back
Maan runs down without even waiting for the elevator…
By the time he goes down, Geet has left with Rithan ..
Pradeep comes….
Pradeep: sir, did you meet him? Where is he?
Maan is disappointed…
Maan: he has gone
Pradeep: sir, he must have gone to the school only, sir, I saw him in the uniform sir , come on sir, we will catch him
Pradeep jumps in the car…
Maan: wait, he is in the school only know
Maan gets ready and goes to the school….
Geet has returned dropping Rithan ..
Maan goes to the office and waits for Rithan..
Maan just says that he is a close relative and not his father…
He doesn’t want to scare his son, Maan doesn’t know what image Geet has printed about his father…
They were not ready to allow Maan to see Rithan… .
They say that they want Geet’s consent… .
Maan then says that he is actually the father and the boy doesn’t know about him… .
Maan just wants to meet his son once and he will not harm his own son… .
Infact he would not even disclose his identity as the father…
The old lady at the reception understands Maan’s plight and allows to see Rithan in front of everyone…
Maan is happy….
Rithan comes with the office boy…
Maan is so happy to see Rithan, he looks more like little MSK…
The old lady actually knew Rithan and Rithan’s resemblance to his father made her believe Maan…. .
The boy comes and is confused as who the stranger is … Maan was right, Geet has not yet introduced Maan to the boy…
Maan: halo Rithan
Rithan: halo
Maan: I am Maan, your friend
Rithan: no, you are not
Maan gets angry that Geet has said something bad about Maan…
Maan: why not?
Rithan: because you are not in my class, and you don’t even play with me
Maan: because I just met you and I want to be friends with you
Rithan: but who are you?
Maan: I am your
Maan stops… he can’t say that he is the father… how unfortunate he is, he can’t even own his son …
If Maan tells his name also, then Geet would restrict the boy from meeting Maan again…
Maan: I am your friend, special friend, I got this for you
Maan gives him chocolates..
Rithan is happy to see them…
But he hesitates….
Maan pulls him closer, he takes the boy’s little hands and puts the chocolates in them…
Rithan does like to have them…
Maan: I know you like them buddy, you can have them, they taste very delicious
Rithan: thank you
Rithan keeps looking at Maan…
Maan: you can call me buddy too, we are friends
Rithan: thank you buddy
Maan kisses his forehead…
Rithan: shall I go
Rithan wants to go and eat the chocolates…
Maan: but you have to return my gift
Rithan is disappointed… he looks at the chocolates in his hands….
Maan smiles…
Maan: not this buddy, the kiss, you should always give something back when you receive something, haina? Give and take, that’s what buddies do, right?
Rithan: right
Rithan is relieved…
Maan shows his cheeks …
Rithan kisses Maan and runs back to class to show his gift to his friends….
Maan is so happy, he just wants to take his son and run to some far place where there will be no one but only the two of them…
Maan thanks that old lady and leaves…
Pradeep is waiting…
Pradeep: sir, did you see him? He is just like you sir, I recognized him immediately as your son sir
Maan: you are right, he is Jr MSK, by all means
Pradeep: did you talk to him sir?
Maan: yes, he talked to me
For Maan his son talking to him is more precious…
Pradeep: did you tell him that you are his father? Did he recognize you?
Maan: no
Pradeep feels sorry for Maan…
Pradeep: don’t worry sir, we will bring back Rithan and akka home soon
Maan: you talk too much, just see the road and drive first
Pradeep doesn’t want to disturb Maan, let him enjoy this special moment, he has officially become a father, he has met his son and felt like a father in a true sense just then…
Maan returns to the apartment, he is happy to be friends with his son . .
It’s just a beginning and they will eventually become father and son one day…
Maan has to be a little more patient…
He has been waiting for so many years now, it’s just another few days .
He can wait, he just don’t want his son to feel any pressure because of what is going on between him and Geet…
That evening…
Geet goes to pick up Rithan..
Rithan shows him the chocolates…
He wouldn’t eat them without taking his mother’s permission…
Geet: where did you get them?
Rithan: my new buddy gave them
Geet: buddy?
Geet smiles. She thinks that it’s a new classmate…
Rithan: yes, he is so nice, I like him, I made friends with him
Geet: ohh, that’s nice, what’s his name?
Rithan: I don’t know
Geet: you don’t know ?
Rithan: I forgot to ask him
Geet: but you took his chocolates?
Rithan: is it wrong?
Rithan looks worried…
Geet: no, it’s not, it’s your buddy, you can have them
Rithan: mom, will you make some cookies tomorrow
Geet: you are just having the chocolates, why do you want cookies also? Too much sweets is not good for you
Rithan: it’s not for me
Geet: what?
Rithan: it’s for my buddy, I have to give him something in return for the chocolates
Geet: what? But why?
Rithan: because that’s what buddies do
Geet laughs….
Geet: ok ok Mr.Buddy
Geet bakes her special oats and almond cookies…
Rithan takes them to school the next day and waits for his buddy…
This time around Maan waits in the playground itself….
As soon as Geet leaves after dropping Rithan, Maan goes and meets him…
Maan: good morning buddy
Rithan is happy to see Maan…
Rithan: good morning buddy
Maan: did you like the chocolates?
Rithan: hmm, yummy, I got something for you
Rithan takes out the box of cookies and gives it to Maan…
Maan: is this for me?
Rithan: yes, it’s for you buddy
Maan takes one and tastes it…
It’s really tasty…
Rithan: my mom makes the best cookies
Rithan is so proud of his mother…
Maan: yes, they are the best, you have it, she made it specially for you
Rithan: no, she made them for you
Maan is surprised…
Maan: what?
Rithan: I asked her to make them for my buddy and she made them for you
Maan: hmm, ok buddy, thank you so much
Maan hugs and kisses him….
Rithan kisses him back and goes to class…
Maan waits and watches him until he goes out of his sight…
Part 25
Lovely Update
Oh I'm so pleased that Maan finally meets his son
and now both are buddies which is great
aww so sweet.
glad maan actually got to see his son and interact with him
but the way he is going about is not right..
hmm can you imagine geet's reaction when she comes to know this...she will absolutely fume and get away with her son...
really wish maan talks to geet properly and clears all misunderstandings....
but most adorable is pradeep....he is such a character....of course he recognized rithan easily as he looks like maan...
Part 25
so finally Maan met his son
all thanks to Pradeep
as expected Rithan does not know him
well Maan is also to blame for this
of cos Maan cannot tell Rithan that he is dad
now Maan and Rithan are friends
Geet is oblivious to this
she will indeed be furious when she finds out
hope Maan and Geet talk and sort of their issues for Rithan's sake
update soon
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