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Who did Geet love? Its not Dev. Was it Maan? He left? Both think they were betrayed?
Who did Geet love? Its not Dev. Was it Maan? He left? Both think they were betrayed?
Part 11
Fabulous update….remarkably written
keen to know the past between Maan and Geet
why was she scared to see him?\
what does he want?
update soon
Part – 12
The driver Pradeep who is taking Maan around the city, helping Maan in his search, is a devotee of lord Kabaleeshwara, he starts his day by going to the temple in the morning….
Maan also goes to the temple…
Maan has his own reasons, else why would he want to go to the temple!!!!
Maan wants to try his luck to meet that girl again…
Maybe he can see her at the same place, same time… .
Maan goes inside the temple along with Pradeep to get the lord’s blessings to succeed in his original mission, but he is also interested in that girl, Maan wants to know more about her…
But Maan can’t find that girl…
No problem, Maan will be here only, if he is lucky enough he will meet her again…
Kabaleeshwara should bless Maan in finding Geet, and the lord might also bless Maan to find the temple girl if that’s what is in Maan's destiny…
Maybe babaji is pleased to see the MSK praying for the first time in his life…
There is always a first time for everything, maybe Maan will end up doing many things for the first time in his life…
Maan has not found anything yet, but in his search to find Geet, Maan has seen every place in
Chennai…
Pradeep takes Maan to every tourist spot…
But they couldn’t find even a clue..
They even went to Mahabalipuram in the weekend thinking that everyone would come there for the weekend…
Geet might have come had she not sen Maan the other day, now Geet will never leave her apartment…
Pradeep : sir, You don’t worry, we will go to Pondicherry tomorrow, maybe your friend is there
Maan: you want to go have fun there in my money? You will get everything there(drinks)
Pradeep : I don’t drink sir
Maan: My friend also doesn’t drink
Pradeep : girlfrienda sir?
Maan doesn’t answer…. But Pradeep has got his answer…
If Pradeep knew Maan is looking for a girl, then he wouldn’t have gone to Mahabalipuram at all…
Maan: what’s the difference?
Pradeep smiles..
Pradeep : we wasted our time for two days sir
Maan: what do you mean? You had a good time at the beach
Pradeep : ha ha ha sir, I meant your time sir
Maan: where should have we searched then?
Pradeep : at the mall and theatre sir, you will find every Chennai girl there in the weekend Sir
Poor Pradeep doesn’t know that Maan had already done that, Maan did see a lot of local girls busy doing nothing at the mall…
Geet is not like them… she is different…
Maan: but she is not a Chennai girl
Maan spills out his secret… ha ha ha.. Pradeep was right…
Pradeep : maybe your girlfriend found a new boyfriend in Chennai sir
Maan stares him…
Maan: she is not that kind
Pradeep : Then why did she leave you sir? Maan gets angry…
Maan: what?
Pradeep : maybe she went to Delhi to see you sir
Pradeep tries to cool down Maan…
Maan: I meant that she very intelligent, an IIT graduate
Pradeep : appa IIT ya sir? I know sir, why didn’t you tell me earlier sir? We will go there sir, just few kilometres from here
Maan is having a tough time explaining everything to Pradeep …
But Maan likes Pradeep, he is very hardworking, honest and innocent…
Maan: you won’t understand
Pradeep : I understood sir, padipalli(studious) girlfriend, what did you study sir?
Maan: I am an engineer
Pradeep : IIT love va sir? You are also a padipalli then, I knew it sir, I can see that from your serious face itself
Maan: what? I am not from IIT
Pradeep laughs out loud…
Maan gets irritated ..
Pradeep : dubakoor(name sake) engineera sir neenga?
Maan: what’s there to laugh? Pradeep : I am also an engineer sir Maan: engineer?
Pradeep : CS na ok sir, I am mechanical engineer
Maan: why are you driving then?
Pradeep : I am not that good to get a software job
Maan: why software?
Pradeep : there is placement only in software sir
Maan: mechanical jobs?
Pradeep : you have to be a topper like your girlfriend for that sir
Maan forgets his girlfriend (?) and is now into Pradeep ’s story..
Maan: you always confuse me, where were we?
Pradeep : we can search in the Tidal park sir
Maan: I don’t want your ideas, just take me to the hotel
Pradeep drops Maan at the hotel…
Pradeep : Tomorrow sir?
Maan: I will find another cab, with a less talkative driver
Pradeep : ayyo sir, i won’t talk sir, sorry sir
Maan: ok, will meet tomorrow Pradeep : thank you sir
Pradeep takes Maan to every nook and corner of the city, all the residential areas, Mylapore to Mambalam, the Kollywood area Kodambakkam, every noted actor’s house, ECR farmhouse and even the Marina monuments, now it’s only left to go door by door just like election canvas….
Pradeep: sir, you could win an election easily here, 50 percent of Chennai knows you, only Sun TV news is left out, shall we go there now?
Maan gets angry…. Is this some kind of a joke for you?
Maan stares Pradeep….
Maan: don’t ever try to use your crooked brain again, I know what I have to do
Pradeep: sir, I am sorry
Maan knows that even Pradeep is tired of the endless search…
Maan doesn’t know the address, not even the area…
Chennai is a metropolitan city and its not easy to find someone even with any details, now they have not even the tiniest clue about Geet’s whereabouts…
How could Maan expect a tourist taxi driver who takes tourists to only specific tourist spots to know about where the real Chennai lives?
Maan: you did everything you could, I think we are going nowhere like this wasting time
Pradeep: don’t loose hope sir, you just tell me more about akka(didi)
Maan: what?
Pradeep: do you have a photograph?
Maan shows a pic from his mobile….
Pradeep: sir, akka terror ra irukkanga sir!
Pradeep sees that Geet is not any girl next door types, she is looking like a gang leader….
The intensity in her eyes scares Pradeep to think any less about her…
Pradeep is now scared that if he gets caught along with Maan searching for her by the photo ‘akka', that will be the end of his existence…
Maan: what?
Pradeep: she looks like the perfect match for you sir, romba nalla jodi, terror king and queen
Maan: you talk too much
Pradeep: hmm, yedukkum sowkarpet pakkam parkalam sir, unga aalunga anga neraiya irukkanga(we can look in the area where your people live)
Maan: no thanks, I will find myself
Pradeep: sir, no sir, no sir
Maan: I mean we will take a break and begin the search after a couple of days
Pradeep: super idea sir, can we go to Mahabalipuram in the break sir?
Maan: no, two days holidays for you
Pradeep: sir, are you angry with me?
Maan: no, I want a break
Pradeep: ok sir, I also going to festival sir
Part 12
Pleasant update… outstandingly written
agree with Maan that Pradeep is talkative
so Pradeep helps Maan
update soon
12
very nice update
enjoyed reading
maan is not able to find geet after searching her every corner of chennai
he shows geet's phot to pradeep
maan took 2 days break in search of geet
hope he will find geet soon
Very confused
What is Maan geet connection fromPast
In her dreams Maan comes to geets place searching for something. What is he searching. For. Thought he is looking for her but no something which geet has???
so the girl in the temple is not geet
waitjngbfirmthjngs yo be revealed more to get the connections
poor driver. So confused with all this looking around. Maan not successful so far
Part 12
A Lovely Update
Maan still searching for Geet
while Pradeep keeps talking about everything that irritates Maan
Great part
Geet hiding from maan but what happened in past
Waiting to read next part soon
Cont soon
Part – 13
Next day…
Maan’s cab driver Pradeep has gone to his hometown and so Maan has to find another cab..
Maan is not feeling like taking a cab ..
You barely get to meet the public sitting in a cab…
Maybe Maan should try something else…a public transport? a local bus?
Instead Maan wants to ride the Chennai metro, good choice Maan… .
Working women use the metro more, and Geet must also be working…
Maan gets the tickets for the last station and boards the metro…
It’s the early morning peak hours and there is mad rush just like it was at the temple…
This is public transport and Maan needs to be careful, he knows how good the Chennai police is, he has experienced it, haina?
Maan keeps looking outside the window to be safer…
But he can’t stop looking for her everywhere…
Maan is lucky this time, he has just spotted her, yes, it’s definitely her, Geet Handa…
Maan tries to.ake his way through the crowd to reach her…
Maan is very close, but she gets down at the next station …
Maan also gets down at the station itself…
Maan runs after her forgetting that it’s a public place…
Maan and Chennai police seem to have a special attraction….
A police man sees him running after the ladies and stops Maan…
Geet disappears inn front 6his eyes…
P.O.: halo, Mr, what are you doing?
Maan: I am going to see a friend, please leave me sir, they have just left
P.O.: if it’s a friend then call them
Maan: I don’t know their number sir
P.O.: then how come they are your friend?
Maan: I lost the number sir
P.O.: give me your ticket
Maan gives the ticket…
P.O.: you are at the wrong place Mr
Maan: I know, but I just saw the friend
P.O.: Mr, which place did you get the ticket?
Maan doesn’t know…
Maan: I don’t know sir
P.O.: tell me which station you are standing now
Maan thinks for a while…
Maan: I have no idea sir
P.O.: are you kidding me Mr?
Maan: sir, I can explain
P.O: come to our station and explain Mr
Maan: sir, no sir, you have mistaken
Maan calls Vicky, his saviour….
Maan: halo, Vicky, I need a favour
Vicky: yes, what is it?
Maan: just tell the police officer who I am
Vicky: what? Again? What happened?
Maan says how he wanted to explore Chennai more and got into the train as Pradeep was not available…
Maan tells Vicky about seeing an old friend and getting off in the middle to meet them…
Vicky uses his father’s name this time to get Maan out of trouble.. .
Shiva Kumar is such an influential person in Chennai…
Maan then goes and waits for the cab that left with his friend…
Maan had seen Geet leave in the cab and saw the number the cab…
After an hour the same cab comes back…. .
Maan tips the driver and asks him to drop Maan at the previous customer’s dropping point…
The cab driver hesitates initially but Maan says that she is an old friend and wants to meet her….
Then the driver drops Maan at a residential building…
Its huge… how would Maan find the door number… .
The security is very strict…
Maan convinces the security by telling that he knows Mr. Shiva Kumar and he is a friend of Mr. Shiva Kumar’s son, maybe it will work this time too…
Maan is right, Mr.Shiva Kumar is as popular as Mr.Rajinikanth in Chennai…
The security is convinced by looking at Maan’s gentlemen dress and honest eyes… .
The security people do have the power to know whom to trust and whom not to …
Maan gets in finally…
Maan finds a grocery store in the building…
Maan gets in to see if he can find her anywhere near…
People do grocery shopping while returning home..
And Geet has no one else to do the shopping for her…
Maan gets in and takes a basket…
He is strolling with an empty basket….
Maan is looking at the billing counter…
She is there…. Yes, Geet is here… She doesn’t know that Maan is here…
Maan doesn’t want to make a scene in front of everyone…
He waits till she gets to her apartment…
Maan secretly follows her….
Maan then goes and rings the door bell…
Geet comes and opens the door…
She can’t believe her eyes…
She thinks that it must be her imagination again and shuts the door immediately…
Maan knocks continuously until she opens the door again…
Geet: why are you here? You have no business here? Go back to Delhi
Maan: you know very well why I am here Geet
Geet: how would I know? Anyways you have made a big mistake coming here
Maan: you need not worry about that, I know what I am doing
Geet: you do whatever you want, just leave me alone
Maan: I am not here to trouble you Geet, just give me what I want and I will go my way without disturbing you
Geet: what are you talking about?
Maan: Geet, don’t act innocent, you know what I have come for, give me back what you took from me, sorry, you stole from me
Geet: I didn’t take anything from you, you never cared to own and so you don’t have any rights whatsoever
Maan: Geeeet
Geet: I don’t understand why you have come to me? Go and look where you lost
Maan loses his patience… that’s it, Maan has to show Geet who the MSK is…
Maan: Geeeeet, where’s my son?
Geet: what are you talking about?
Maan: don’t try to fool me again, I know everything
Geet: no, you don’t
Maan: where is my son?
Maan shouts angrily…
Geet: So you remember that you have a son after three years? Forget about him, he was never yours, you have no rights to call him your son
Maan: Geet, I am asking you for the last time, where is my son?
Geet: are you mad or what? You only lost him, How would I know?
Maan: Geeeet, I know he is here only
Geet: what? Don’t waste your time searching at the wrong place, he is not here
Maan gets angry, he pushes Geet and tries to get in…
Geet anticipated that already and she had pressed the emergency button to alarm the security….
The security comes and Maan had to leave….
Maan has found Geet, it’s a good start…
Maan will find his son soon, he knows that his son is with Geet only….
Maan has struggled hard to find Geet’s hideout, and now it’s just a matter of a few days before he could get his son back…
Yes, Maan Singh Khurana is a father, his marriage might have failed, but he wants his son, his son is a part of his life, Maan has not even seen his son ..
The boy was with Geet for the first six months after birth, then she came to KM and left the boy with Maan’s family…
The boy went missing from there…
Geet planned everything cleverly….
Maan thought that he lost his son because of his carelessness, but later he found out that he has been fooled all the while by Geet who literally kidnapped his son without his knowledge…
How dare Geet? She herself kidnapped the boy and came to Maan accusing him for being responsible for the missing of the child…
How foolish of Maan to believe Geet and blame himself for no fault of his?
Maan almost went into depression thinking that he lost his dear son because of his carelessness….
Maan wasted two years before he found out about Geet’s betrayal… .
Then Maan decided to find Geet and get his son back, it took him another six months to find about Geet’s hideout…
And now he has tracked down the whereabouts of his son, he will soon get his son…
Geet didn’t even let him see his son…
Maan is really very angry, he could easily break open the door and take away his son, but he is not like Geet…
Maan is always a gentleman…
Geet is desperate because she is in the wrong side, Maan will get what is rightfully his…
Maan needs to be patient for he doesn’t want to become a bad father in front of his son…
God only knows what that Geet has told about Maan to his beloved son…
Did she even mention about Maan?
Why would she?
She thinks that she would hide the truth about his father to the boy, haina?
But Maan won’t let her do that….
Maan has to first establish himself as the caring father before he could get back his son…
The boy has to first trust Maan to go with Maan to Delhi…
Maan knows that it’s not an easy job, but he is ready to do everything necessary…
Maan can go the legal way, but that would hurt the boy and only make the situation worse…
Maan wants it to be smooth, he wants his son to know his father and Maan is sure that the boy will automatically come with Maan after that…
Maan will come back soon, Maan has to stay close to Geet’s apartment to find his son, Geet can’t keep the boy hidden for long…
Maan has to plan wisely to take his boy home…
Maan knows that this is a very delicate matter and he has to handle it with utmost caution, any wrong step would separate Maan permanently from his son…
Maan has to be at his best behavior of he wants his son…
Maan is ready to do anything for he his son, but he will have to respect Geet for taking care of his son all these years…
But that doesn’t mean that only she has the right over him…
Maan is the father, he has equal rights if not more …
Maan has to prove to be a good father if he wants his son…
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