Thanks for the pm and update
Part 7
Good update…excellently written
Thank God Vicky saved Maan
seems like Maan did find Shruthi
of cos she was annoyed
her dad understands so well
oh Shanti wants Shruthi to marry Vicky
alas she is not interested
at least Shruthi's dad supported her
update soon
Poor Maan. He tried to help and he is under suspicion now. And he can't even defend himself.
Now Maan got it. Telling a girl that he is looking for a beautiful girl and its not her was a little too rude.
Maan saved Shruthi? And she is being set up with Vicky because he likes her. But she is mad as hell now.
If she leaves, what will Maan and Vicky do? She is the one who knows the project.
Part 7
Is Shruti the girl that Maan helped cover her head
she at least was suppose to be grateful but instead she is angry
why does every one think he is some kind of stalker or something
Part – 8
Maan has left the temple…
Pradeep is driving without knowing about where Maan wants to go…
Maan is lost in his thoughts..
Pradeep is scared to disturb Maan, but he can’t keep driving with nowhere to go…
Pradeep gains his courage and asks Maan…
Pradeep: sir, are you going back to the hotel?
Pradeep is disappointed that his ride is ending so soon…
Maan: you can go if you have work, I will find a cab with a better driver
Pradeep: sir, no sir, where should we go sir? I will take you wherever you want, just tell me the address sir
Maan: I don’t know the address, you should find the address for me
Pradeep is confused, but he is also scared to loose his customer…
Pradeep: I will find the address sir
Maan: fine, where are we going next?
Pradeep doesn’t have an answer…
Pradeep: sir, actually where do you think you should go?
Maan thinks for a while…
Maan: any residential area
Pradeep is worried, if they go to residential places without proper address or reason then they both will end up in jail for sure…
Why is Maan always ready to get into trouble?
Pradeep takes Maan to some crowded residences so that no one will suspect them ..
Maan keeps looking at the people, specially young women…
Pradeep understands what Maan is looking for, did he not find a good girl in his place?
Maan is looking for a girl, maybe for marriage!!!!
Pradeep: sir, what kind of a girl do you want?
Maan: what?
Pradeep: sir, I understand that you are looking for someone
Maan: yes, a dear friend
Pradeep: what kind of friend sir?
Maan stares Pradeep…
Maan: what do you mean?
Pradeep: sir, people of different places are different, sir, I will take you to the right place then
Maan: a very very different person, not the normal types
Pradeep: ohh, mentallla sir? we should go to keelpakkam (famous for mentally challenged people’s hospital) then sir
Maan: you just shut your mouth and keep going as I direct
While Maan is busy in his meaningless conversation with Pradeep he missed to notice that his dear friend was just there watching him from their hideout….
Maan is not so lucky this time…
Maybe he will have to wait longer…
After an unsuccessful day’s search Maan returns to the hotel….
Geet’s apartment….
Geet is actually here in Chennai protecting something that is the reason of her existence… .
Geet has a huge responsibility on her shoulders, she is determined not to let anyone ruin everything… .
She has to face her threat someday, there is no use running from it and hiding… .
Why should Geet hide?
She has not done anything wrong?
Whatever Geet has done is the right thing to do according to her knowledge..
Geet was forced to take that huge decision because of the situations…
Geet didn’t wish for anything for herself, Geet has always lived selflessly… .
Geet only wanted to help others in whatever way possible…
Now also Geet is not worried about herself, she is worried about something she took responsibility of….
Many a times Geet has questioned herself about her decision…
Geet knows that no one has any rights to question her decision , she did what was expected of her to do and no one but Geet is the rightful person to take that decision…
Geet did what she had to do…
Geet is only worried about that one person who is giving her nightmares again and again…
Geet is very upset…
Geet has seen HIM today…
Now Geet knows that HE has definitely come for her…
Geet has a huge responsibility on her shoulder, she has to do something quickly else HE will snatch Geet’s life from her again…
Geet won’t let HIM do whatever HE wants…
She gave him a chance already but HE messed up big time…
Geet can’t trust HIM again…
Once a loser, always a loser…
HE had his chances for a wonderful life that anyone would envy but HE didn’t know it’s values but HE thinks Geet will give HIM what he wants after what he has done!!
What a fool HE is!!!! Haina?
But how will Geet escape this time?
Geet wants to know why HE is here…
For that she has to spy on him without getting caught…
Next day…
Vicky asks Maan to come to that famous restaurant…
They have breakfast there ….
Vicky takes Maan to a tender coconut vendor and gets him a cool refreshing coconut for him…
Maan needed a shot or two to cool down for the awesome welcome he had, but this also seems to work for the scorching Sun…
Welcome to Chennai Maan!!!
Maan is here looking for something important, but he forgot about it in all this chaos…
They have come to the main street, away from the crowd…
This place is also buzzing with busy people going to work in the morning…
Vicky: have a sip, it’s totally refreshing, you need to keep yourself hydrated when you are here, I will be back with more refreshments
Vicky leaves…
As Maan is enjoying the tender coconut water he sees Pradeep conversing with the man at the other stall, Maan calls his driver Pradeep to join them..
Pradeep comes running for he becomes emotional by Maan’s gesture, somehow Maan likes Pradeep and Pradeep too gets attached to Maan easily…
When Pradeep comes looking at Maan itself, he dashes into someone who is in the two wheeler…
Its not completely Pradeep’s fault, that person was not looking forward, but looking at the tender coconut stall only…
Maybe they stopped for to quench their thirst too…
The bike rider loses their balance and the vehicle is about to fall over poor Pradeep…
Maan: Pradeep heyyyiiii, watch out
Pradeep panics and looks helpless…
Maan reaches forward and holds the vehicle when that person is just standing and staring them, nowhere do they seem to be bothered about what happened and are also unapologetic for their act ..
Maan gives a hand and stops them from falling..
Maan: careful, lagi toh nahi
“Nahi”
Maan didn’t hear that as that person is wearing a helmet…
Before Maan could step back, that person starts the bike and goes not bothered about the man who helped them..
Such selfish people…
Maan gets angry with Pradeep…
Maan: Pradeep , where’s your eyes? At the back of your head? Can’t you see what’s in front of you?
Pradeep : ssa ssa sorry sir, but I saw them coming, they were looking at you sir, I thought maybe they know you
Maan: what? Don’t blame others for your fault, first learn to accept your mistakes
Pradeep : ha ha, sorry sir
Poor Pradeep is now doubtful if he would get a tender coconut or not…
He looks at Maan sadly..
Maan: ok, come on, have it
Pradeep is happy: thank you sir
Maan is unaware that a pair of eyes are watching Maan secretly from a distance…
It looks like someone is not happy to welcome Maan to Chennai…
They leave in anger after seeing Maan again….
Vicky who went to get nungu(palm fruit) from the nearby shop for Maan comes back seeing the drama…
Vicky: Maan, what happened?
Maan: nothing, it’s just an accident
Vicky: are you alright?
Maan: I’m good, how could your people be so selfish and ungrateful?
Vicky: our people? It could be anyone, maybe be someone like you who came to visit our place
The Tamil ego of Vicky is hurt…
Maan realizes his mistake…
Maan shouldn’t have said to, he uttered that word in anger without any intention…
Maan: I didn’t mean that Vicky, it’s just that because I am feeling a little out of place
Vicky: you loose your cool at the drop of a hat Maan, that’s not good for you
Maan: I am sorry, I don’t know what I am doing sometimes
Vicky: but I know what you should do, you must try this
Maan: what’s this?
Vicky: our summer special, it’s good for the heat, our jigar thanda, it also cools your mind
Maan tries it and likes it..
Vicky: wait, I will come
Maan: I am full, I can’t eat more
Vicky smiles…
Vicky: it’s for later
Maan: what now?
Vicky: palm liquor, drink a couple of rounds and you will fall flat
Maan: what?
Vicky laughs…
Vicky: it’s without alcohol, mom likes it, you must try too
Pradeep : yes sir, very tasty
Maan: get for Pradeep too , this one is on me
Pradeep : you are too good sir
Vicky: no no, Maan, you are not paying anything, You are my guest till you officially become a business partner
Vicky gets a parcel for everyone….
Maan did like it…
Maan and Vicky get along with each other very well…
Vicky is cordial and friendly…
Maan will have a good time at Chennai it seems…
Vicky is here to help Maan whenever Maan would need someone at this new place…
Maan is looking forward to join Vicky in business…
Part 8
Captivating update…brilliantly written
Who is Maan looking for?
who did Geet see and is hiding from?
wonder who was watching Maan and was angry?
Vicky is a great host
at least Vicky and Maan get along?
update soon
Part 8
Fabulous and Curious Update
Is Geet watching Maan
and is he looking for her too
Maan and Vicky now do get along which is good for Maan
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