Mg ss Pyar aisa bhi .hota hai part 9 and on page 9 -28/02/2024 - Page 7

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Mahi.... wish that you update

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Hi Mahi

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His heart thudding in crazy speed he have fear that what if she will heard his heartbeat …may be she will it like he have any disease …oh god Maan please slow down …other side Geet feel something really wired one side she feel good that he seat near her same time she feel little bit odd like she feel some gudgudi in her tummy …Maan somehow control all his thoughts he don’t want to scare her with his any action.. he slowly open his hand where chocolate on his palm. He know her weak point until now ….he make distance from both body ..in his own way its so needful and very hard for him to make this distance …next hour went like this and they reach to Maan father house in Lonawala ….weather is cool than Mumbai and they imm feel that Maan slowly ask Geet about her sweater …Geet feel good with his caring nature just like her papa…all come out from car and Maan and Geet pinky and adi take charge of luggage and all they made both parent to go to house they will look after luggage ….Maan and adi pick big one and come back for carry other things …

House is beautiful it two storage bungalow with tress around it ….its near to river area which giving fantastic view …Maan father invest here when the property rate very less in this area . pinky and adi went inside …Maan took last bag and Geet walking with some small bag she is front of Maan ….ma ask Maan to settle all things to first floor so Maan ask Geet to take steps which are from outside its old style little bit narrow in size ..geet taking steps slowly so she don’t get fall ..but after taking care also one step get miss from her and she almost going to fall but Maan handle situation cleverly he hold her with her shoulder and make her stable so she don’t fall. Geet get scare with sudden things ….she closed her eyes in fear ….

Other side Maan who almost forget to take breath with fear of her fall took long breath when he make her stand properly ..its closed call but thanks god he acted properly .. he slowly say u can open your eyes u are safe don’t get scared . Geet slowly open her eyes and saw that she is ok bothslowly entered in room..and put all things. Maan again ask Geet that she is ok or not .geet ans she is ok don’t worry just than Maan mother call Maaneet down side ..they ask MG get ready with some traditional dress so they can visit the temple,after that they will cook the lunch .both wear tradition dress Maan wear white kurta and Geet go with Punjabi dress both looking cute couple in every manner Maan mother say poojari about Maaneet rista and ask them to do pooja for this new couple for their new life ….

Poojari arrange a small puja for new couple and Maan get that he stepping in holy relation a relation where he have to share big responsibly …both looking so beautiful together and all are happy for them.

All come back from pooja and get busy in chit chat Mohinder and rano talking with Maan other , adi and pinky talking in huss tone which making restless to Maan he know both very well he getting scare with thought that what khichadi they are cooking .

Just than adi went to Mohinder side and say if u all don’t mind can we four want to visit river site ….the nature is so beautiful around …Maan almost skip his heart beat with thought of he is going to site seen with Geet …

Mohinder look to rano and nodded and once he look to Maan and Maan read Mohinder unspoken word he slowly nodded ..and all four changes in comfortable dress they took some food and water with them..

Geet is chirping like bird ..for this picnic ..pinky went to Maan side and mummer no anything Nouthy Mr.Maan singh Khurana ….a blush appear on Maan cheak he imm turn other side to hide it and pinky giggle on Maan reaction ..Adi and Maan get lead and pinky waling behind Geet .

The river flowing …..slowly with soft sound like its any musical instrument ….wind is cool and all around is greenery which is sohutting to their soul ..in mega city like Mumbai u cannot see such beauty …

There is small bridge on river so they can pass the river they got information that nearby there is one beautiful water fall is there ,they start to move that site only its almost half hour distance and Maan feel like Geet start to get tired with walk ..looking after her chubbiness he know that she don’t have habit of walk for sure …a soft chuckle come from his mouth and tairo give him wired look ..poor Maan nodded in no and start the walk ….

But when they reach all gasp the beauty its water fall surrounded by greenery ….its feel like mother nature crave that water fall with such beautiful that its giving feel of Haven ….Geet who is one who come out from shock stage …she hug pinky and said wow di look this is so beautiful…trio nodded with Geet statement it’s so speechless beauty …I want to go near water fall Geet declared and pinky lugah on Geet demand ok ok Geet Maan take u there I want to make tea for us so adi will help me uboth carry on ….

Poor Maan With Open mouth gap to pinky ….like silently asking do u write death sentence for me .and as ans Pinky grin Ear to ear .maan took deep breath and nodded to Geet and start to walk water fall site ..he feel his heartbeat’s racing to sky and knot on his stomach ..he mummer don’t do anything rubbish Maan …he remind countless time to himself.

Geet so much lost in beauty 2/3 time her shoulder brush to Maan body she don’t aware of that but ..other side Maan is all affected by that small touch …which wake up so many emotions and desire in him. That innocent touch wake up a fire on his body ..he gulped hard and make some distancein between them ….he is so lost in own desire he don’t notice what Geet up to he cried when a cold water fall on his face he jump and cried and Geet laugh loud she successful in make scare Maan ..its so sudden and as a reaction Maan run to Geet site with saying ohhhh devil Geet u are goan now ….poor Geet dash into water fall next moment Maan catch her …and both fall in water fall…. Geet cried when that cold water touch her bare skin …In fear she hug Maan …that is bad move for MAANEET.

She come very closed to him she is not aware of what situation he is facing after looking her all wet her lips sharving in cold that full lips taking attention of Maan with not so good way no one around them and upon that she almost glue to him like anything ....Maan totally try to control his not so good emotions which is full of desire...he hold Geet wrist in tight grip like controlling his own lawful desire. First Geet giggle with thought that she make him irritated but after few moment she start to get pain on her wrist .....bluish mark start get appear on her soft skin..... few tear gather on Geet eyes she cried softly ahhh its hurting please and that brought back Maan in his daze state.

Maan heart ach with Geet tear ..he mummer sorry and come out from water … he totally not look to Geet site and say ..wapas cahlte hai Geet ..nahi to thund lag jaaygi ..geet who want to spend time first but now shake and confused with Maan behavior ..she get that something went wrong she don’t argue and they both come to pinky site ….Geet don’t know why but don’t want toshow her mark on hand to anyone she open her sleeves and cover that mark and that make more guilty to Maan he feel like so much weight on his heart ..that he almost feel suffocated.

Pinky saw them come back so early she get tense but Geet manage situation and say di muje bhook lagi hai ..can we eat now …pinky want to ask them but adi hold her and nodded in no ..adi feel something happen in them but Geet don’t want to share and they have respect her wish .pinky pass both of them towel to dry themselves and she arranged dish for them ..the lunch went silently just than Maan get massage and his serious face turn in worry and tense for while and ..pinky and adi get that look its on Field …

Adi ask , how much time Maan …Maan once look to Geet and then to adi and reply one hour ..he feel like his throat is tightening with emotions ..he ruin their moment …he want to apologize her say sorry to her ..but he lost the guts and closed himself .after one hour he have to present nearby post to his work field with not good happen in water he mess everything in last hour of their trip that's also after enjoying so much good moment .

Other side Geet get that he have to go back she feel so miserable thou he hurt her her wiste is still paining but don’t know why but don’t feel any anger on him..she feel like he have all right to hold her like this but she don’t like the way he closed himself ..he don’t talk single word with her and that hurt her most . but she fail to give word to her emotions she give sad gaze to Maan and Maan mistook as hurt …

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and update


Part 7

Fantastic update.... nicely written

well Geet is affected by Maan's touch

nice that they attend the pooja

so Adi and Pinky ensured that Maaneet get to spend time together

liked that Geet's dad agreed

of cos Adi and Pinky tease Maan

great that Maaneet get to spend time together

oh no Maan unintentionally hurt Geet

as expected he wanted to apologise

sad that he did not get a chance to do so

hope they get to talk and clear any misunderstanding


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Amazing update dear, maaneet come to enjoy the picnic with adi and pinky, but unfortunately he hurts geet and where geet everything took as her shyness but maan mistook as she is sad because accidentally he hurts her



Happy new year mahi

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice story

Do continue

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Part 7


Fabulous Update


Great idea that both Adi and Pinky ensure

Maan and Geet spend time alone

but now there is a misunderstanding and Maan has to also leave

hope somehow both can at least speak or convey the fact that

they enjoyed each others company

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part 8 may be


Other side Geet get that he have to go back she feel so miserable thou he hurt her her wiste is still paining but don’t know why but don’t feel any anger on him..she feel like he have all right to hold her like this but she don’t like the way he closed himself ..he don’t talk single word with her and that hurt her most . but she fail to give word to her emotions she give sad gaze to Maan and Maan mistook as hurt …

All fail silent with news they so much looking for this two days outing buts alhas duty call first…

Adi and pinky sense something went wrong in between this two ..pinky so much want to ask them but adi make her stop ..this issue have to handle properly some time without intention people get hurt with some question rather words …adi ask Pinky to go with Geet he will come with Maan. Pinky feel so bad first so much silent the Mg and now Maan dépêche ..

Adi sense that something happen between MG …he slowly went to Maan and mummer in soft voice …Maan I know something happen between u and Geet ,Maan give shock look to adi ….where adi continued don’t be so shock its looking on both of your face u both turn so mute ….Maan try to talk but adi stop him….Maan don’t any mistook brought between any relation its so harmful to relation …one misunderstanding lead to another one and its deeply hurt to human feeling so talking is one solution for this Maan nothing eles …and your relation u have big part to make is successful because of age things …do u understand na what am saying ..adi ask softly . next moment Maan hug adi and almost run to Geet ,pinky side he very well know when he reach to home he is not getting chance to talk with Geet alone .

He run to pinky side and di main and Geet half hour main pouch jate hai ghar pe ,ma ko bolo mera packing karne ke liye with afcourse the Tiffin …and before pinky react any way Maan hold Geet other hand run to opssite site ….poor pinky stand there perfect O shape mouth ..like ye kya tha …so much mood swing just than adi appear their and Kis* pinky open mouth poor girl shutter with adi sudden act a red huappear on her cheek and she first check that no one watch them na…he slap in adi hand and kya kar rahe ho app …

Adi make innocent face and say kya loving my wife …is it any crime ?

Pinky roll her eyes …ya ya such innocent tone ok apne Maan ko konsi dwai di ke mood pura badal gaya…

Adi nooded and say chalo chale chalte baat karte hai …ghar main bhi jake Maan ki packing honi jarrori hai ..and with that both went to house .

Other side poor Geet so much in shock ye devdas se transform kaise ho gaya Maan ka ,and why the hell he making me runiing like that ..she atlast stop and say please ajj ke liye itni sexersize bas hai I cannot run more please ..

Maan once look to Geet her cuby cheek turn red with ran , breath is fast she looking like red big cheery ….he softly smile and next moment he take her in hug ….and mummer sorry sorry wo main unse lamba jana chatat and I want to say sorry ,I behave like idiot Geet ,wo tum pani main mere bahot pass aai thi and main dar gaya the ke in my desire for u kuch stupit na behave kar lu…khood ko control karne ke liye I behave like jerk I am so sorry Geet …

Geet look to Maan with her innocent eyes and ask softly desire …Maan gulp hard and say in soft wo I want to Kis* you Geet , Geet thought for while .what is wrong in ki** ,kal hi he kis* me na .she tiptop on her leg and give one small pick on Maan perfect lips …poor Maan groan on her act ..

Geet say in soft voice why u scare for this ki** …poor Maan took deep breath …and say camly aisa wala ki** nahi Geet wo kuch alag wala …I will talk about it next meeting after 6 month when I come back ok…

Geet get confused and thought kis8 main bhi variety hoti hai kya ..poor soul don’t know about all this …and ans ok ok I don’t want know what u saying about all this but apko agar sorry hi bolna tha to ek chocolate dena that whats the big deal aise devdas ku ban gaye thi app ….and next moment that place fill with Maan big laugh .. he once again hug Geet and mummer I am loving it my life going to more colorful with u Geet …he slowly took Geet hurted wrist in his hand and slowly uncover it he saw bluish mark ..and he feel more guilty …

Geet look to his sad face and she don’t like that ..she say its not that much paining wo muje thoda sa pain hua tha but don’t know why I dotn feel anger on u ..kisi aur ne aisa kiya hota to main to uska mhoo tod diya hota …Geet say in such way that Maan fear for while …he again say sorry ..

Geet nooded on his sorry . she make thinking face and say ..ok ok with one condition I forgive u ,Maan give her confused gaze …Geet reply with big smile face I want to come to your reporting place …and poor Maan eyes turn like football … all his devil friend face pass from his mind ..he cannot disclosed who is Geet and if anyone try to mess with her can he stop from give that person a hard punch ...not he stuck in such situation where he cannot say yes or no ..to Geet.

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