This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 18

Unless he is a total cad, he should be thankful for her help. Looks like he agreed to stop his revenge schemes. Will he actually do it? Why did he want her father's land?

Part 8

Wonderful update !!! 👏👏

Liked how this update took a twist & showed different facets of geet’s & maan’s personalities

Opposed to their usual childish revenge games .....which are very enjoyable

..... but it is nice to see maan as a doting, loving son..... his concern & worry is very evident maybe even doubled b/c he has already lost his dad 💕

...... also geet’s professional nature as a Doctor is amazing ...,.. it is like she transforms into another individual. 👍🏼

Our sass queen has so many different sides to her ...., she definitely is the full package. 👍🏼

Nice how geet asked maan to drop the revenge game

Liked maan’s admission to not being a bad guy

The whole driving part was cute from maan offering her a ride & even offered that she could drive & geet’s witty response that she wanted to be chauffeured .... her actually napping on the way shows how much she trusts him

So geet lives by herself in a little lane ....

who calls maan at the end ??? Is his mom ok??? Or was it geet??? So curious to know.

Thank you so much for the pm & wonderful update & runner up award but I think I would agree with the rest of the readers when I say you should receive the award 🥇 for your incredible work for writing such an enjoyable story ...., all we do is read which is easy & writing a comment is the least we can do .

Thank you 🤗

Star Commentor Award (Part 8)

Winner: Creampuff

Runnerups: Taahir004

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups 👏

Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 9

Maan starts to drive back when his phone rings

M-Hello

G-Can you come back please? I am kind of locked out

M-Oh Okay

Maan turns his car without hanging up on Geet

M- But I don’t know your place

G- So walk straight into the lane from the place you dropped me, you will be able to see me

Maan follows her instruction

He locates Geet

She is standing outside her apartment building

M-Kya hua?

G- I think security bhaiya gate lock karke kahin chale gaye yaa so gaye, maine awaaz bhi lagai kisi ne suna hi nahi

M-hmm

He inspects the iron gate

Jab kuch karke kuch nahi hua toh he climbs on the gate and reaches on the other side

M- Good news! It’s not locked, just latched from inside

Maan undoes the latch and pulls open the gate

Geet walks in

G- Thanks

M- No problem. So you live in this building?

G-Yeah

M- Which floor?

G-The rooftop room

He nods

M-Okay then, I should get going. Good night

G- Good night

He walks away while Geet walks into the building

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A usual week passes by; as Geet had asked Maan to update heron his mother’s condition so she would text him back suggesting some medicines and all after Maan updates her that his mother is fine

Maan receives a text from Geet

‘So, you mentioned you are going to Piyush’s wedding, right?’

He frowns ki achanak ye kyun puch rahi hai

He replies ‘Yes’

Again, his phone rings with Geet’s message

‘When is it? Where is it?

Maan replies: ‘This weekend.' and shares the location

Geet again texts: ‘This is place is 2 hours drive from here…cool…I will take my car. I wanted to take my new car for a long drive anyways. I will pick you up from your place’

Maan is flabbergasted.

Ab bole bhi toh kya bole samajh nahi aa raha coz when he asked her to join the wedding then his intentions were completely different. He wanted revenge from her and his uska plan tha waha jaakar Geet ki beizzati karne ka ki look she can't get over Piyush she is despo and all

Ab samajh nahi aa raha kya bole

Backout bhi nahi kar sakta, as abhi backout karega toh Geet ko pata chal jayega ki uska plan kya tha and he doesn’t want to create anymore bitterness

So, he decided not to tell anything to Geet and go along with it

But Geet ko haan toh bol diya but his guilt was killing him

So, he decides to get her a gift to get rid of his guilt

He buys a beautiful diamond necklace

The wedding was Christian, so he though Geet ki dress ke saath acha jayega

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He is waiting for Geet to pick him up

Geet drives in with her convertible car

Maan is surprised ki isko toh middle class samajh raha tha

She stops near Maan and giggles at his happing face

G-Get in

M-This is your car?

G-Kind of, EMI chal rahi hai abhi bhi. Second hand hai. Mera ye bachpann ka sapna tha, aisi car lene ka

M-So that’s why you wanted to take your car

G-Of course, itna paisa kharch kia hai aur ab mauka pada hai national highway pe drive karne ka, waste karenge kya?

Maan sits and Geet removes the top in style

Maan nods with appreciative gaze

She starts the car

M- Wait wait, I have something for you

Geet looks at him with surprise

The first part itself is quite promising... Geet here is quite different and has surprising effect on me. I guess quite different from your other female characters in her unique way.

Oops! Revenge is the dish best served cold

what a terrific line you got me hooked with their attitude great combined characters🤣

Hayee Allah!😲

Ye kaise besharmo wali revenge game Hain!

Ek se ek Kam nahi...

Baap re Baap! Ye Maan bahot chalu Hain ... Emotional batein karke Dil jitna chahta Hain. No.1 flirt bhi Hain batao pura fasa Rahi Hain and here geet has no idea. I don't trust him. Dal mein kuch toh kala Hain.

So finally it came out all this charade was for another revenge. Geet is quite smart too😎 Maan ki daal yaha nahi gal ne Bali.

I'm kinda in vacation for some days that's why got to read unless I don't get time to catch up.. but it was fun to read... Hope there were more to it

Nice pt

Geet ready to attend pyush wedding Maan have no other option than go with Geet she's happy about her car