REVENGE- Thread II (Part-B10 Page 55) : Update!!! - Page 28

Guess she is still intending to go to Africa.

Great story concept

Maaneet’s bond is so sweet

But charu is confusing hope she doesn’t create more problems

Cont soon

Part B

Chapter 7

The way…the way…Charu looks at Maan…is not …is not like a sister would

Geet thinks to herself

Charu knows she looks like a mess, she couldn’t sleep a wink last night

‘Things can’t go on like this’

Charu thinks to herself

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Next day

The whole family was sitting for a supper, but Geet was missing

C-She knows the supper time

M- Main use bulaake laata hoon

Tabhi Geet appears

G- Ye dekho

She hands over a shirt to Maan

G- Ye main tumhare liye laayi thi aur kal di nahi, socha sabko dikhaun

Maan smiles

G- Arre sabko dikhao pehle

C- emm… nice. But Bro hamesha designer pehenta hai….I mean designer toh tum…branded hi de deti…I mean not that its bad….jo jaisa afford lar sakta hai….I mean sure you tried your best Geet

M- Shirt as a gift has a special significance for us. We started talking because my shirt got ruined and this madam game me an horrendous shirt as a joke

Maan Geet laugh

C-Oh so you are trying to re-enact that prank. Now I get it

Geet could feel the tone

G-emm…no this I got for him to wear…nahi pasand hai toh

M-I love it, Geet. How could you say nahi pasand hai

C- Of course, when was your fashion choices great….or any choice. I mean I always have to choose clothes for him

M-Yeah, Charu is my personal wardrobe manager

Geet gives a formal smile

Grandpa breaks the conversation

Gramps- Food is getting cold

C- Sorry, Gramps. Sit Geet. Let’s eat. The chef has prepared an exquisite meal

Gramps- Don’t call her by her name. Show some respect

C- What should I call her? ‘Bhabhi’? She is not my Bhabhi…yet. Also she is not older than me. We are of same age

G- Its okay, you can call me Geet

After the supper Maan wears the shirt that Geet gifted him

Geet smiles happily and gives him an approving nod

Charu gives a disapproving shrug

C- It's not matching…not suiting you, Maan…bro

Geet looks at Charu thinking Maan acha toh lag raha hai

C- Aise office jaoge, clients se milne?

M- Koi baat nahi. Aaj ghar par hi hain sab. Kaun dekh raha. I think it looks good

But somehow soup got spilt on shirt when a servant tripped and ultimately sis said ki

C-Let's throw it away. It didn't look that good on you anyways

Geet felt hurt

Maan having no fashion sense said okay

Abhi Geet ne bhi ladayi nahi ki kehke ki ‘it looks good’, she thought maybe it looked bad

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Maan takes her for a stroll around the garden of his island

Geet was lost in her thoughts

M- Hey

G-Hmm?

M- I am sorry you felt bad about the gift. I know my sis is a bit spoilt…I admit money does go to one's head eventually a little bit….

She sighs

G- Nahi…koi baat nahi…ek shirt hi to hai…it costs nothing... kharab ho gai to nayi ajayegi. Aapko kya kami hai shirt ki….

M- But I treasure the gifts you give me

G- I know. Isiliye toh you wore it and flaunted it

Maan knows uska apni sis ke liye extra sensitive soft corner hai coz of her tragedy...Geet is abled naa

Maan ko hamesha laga ki sis is helping him with business and handling things well at home too

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Next day,

Maan had went to work

Charu enters Geet’s room

C-Hey

G-Hey. Come-Come

C-what’s up?

G-Nothing. Just unpacking

C-Just came to chit chat

G- Oh yes

Geet also sits

C- So you are liking it here?

G-Yeah, its wonderful.

Charu nods

C- So I heard you went for a stroll with bro last night. How was it?

G- Oh it was great. The island is beautiful. It was such a great experience

C-So, how are you feeling? I mean being with Bro after years

Geet smiles

G- I think I can’t explain in words

C- So what did you do? I mean did you hold hands and all…or something else…

Geet is uncomfortable hearing the question

C- We are like friends, right?

G- Yeah, It was nice

Charu is getting frustrated, so much shoveling and so little information

C- So glad. But I would have been anxious

Geet looks at the sister questioningly

C- You are strong. So many years….if my boyfriend would have stalled me for 5 years without even assurance of marriage or proposal I would have been anxious. I really admire your courage. You also took the first step and came here. That is also commendable. I can totally get your desperation. Years of waiting is not easy. But of course, what other option do you have

Charu plants a seed of doubt

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thank you for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Y Charu not happy with her bro happiness she can't see how happy is he

Maan to think Charu did wrong so he said she get spoil with too much money

Nice update

Hate chaaru , what is her problem

Poor geet , hope geet get to know chaaru motive and do something

Can't wait, update soon

Part 7 B

Awesome and Cunning Update

I'm already starting to dislike Charu

Maan on the other hand has always pleased his sister

and now she is getting jealous that Geet is getting Maan's time

and worst the fact that Geet gifted Maan , Charu dislikes that

though Geet felt hurt but she let it go

B7

nice update

I think charu is not maan's sister in real

she is trying her best to create misunderstanding between maan n geet

Nice update.

Thanks for pm🤗

thanks for the pm

Part B7

Terrific update.... nicely written

hate how Charu always intervenes

sad how she puts Geet down with her comment

glad that Maan liked the shirt

great that grandpa told Charu to respect Geet

as expected Charu says that the shirt does not suit Maan

dismayed that when the shirt get messed with soup Maan agreed with Charu to throw the shirt away

good that Maan and Geet spent time together

liked that Maan knew Geet felt bad about the gift and apologised

so he justifies Charu's behavior

pleased that he treasures Geet's gifts

loved that Geet knows this

Maan is oblivious of Charu's intentions

Gosh Charu is noisy

wonderful that Geet did not reveal their private moments

oh no she is trying to creating misunderstandings between Maan and Geet

hope Geet does not suspect Maan

update soon