REVENGE- Thread II (Last Part Page 45) : Update!!! - Page 11

Sorry for late response

Part B2

Fascinating Update

Geet finds herself been nervous and the fact that

Maan has everything as he is wealthy but he just seems so happy

having her there by him

as Geet thought his grandfather would be strict and perhaps cold towards her

but instead he gave her a warm smile

was Maan's sister's name not Annie then why is he now introducing her

as Charu

Part B3

Interesting Update

I like how Maan's grandfather speaks to Geet

explains her the bond between Maan and Charu

and the possessiveness between them

Charu is wrong to dislike Geet because she did love Ahkil

Charu herself was in love with Ahkil then how can she want

to dislike Geet

I liked that Maan was straight with Charu and told her he is serious

about Geet

it almost seems like Charu can cause issues for Geet in the future

Originally posted by: taahir004

Sorry for late response

Part B2

Fascinating Update

Geet finds herself been nervous and the fact that

Maan has everything as he is wealthy but he just seems so happy

having her there by him

as Geet thought his grandfather would be strict and perhaps cold towards her

but instead he gave her a warm smile

was Maan's sister's name not Annie then why is he now introducing her

as Charu

Coz i am terrible with names! sorry

Part B

Chapter 3

great update. well written

Geet finds its strange that Charu want to talk to Maan alone.

glad Maan's nanu explains their bond.

Nanu also gets to know Geet.

So Charu does not like Geet.

liked that Maan was firm and told Charu that he loves Geet and will marry her.

Hope Charu does not create any problems for Maan and Geet.

update soon

Part B

Chapter 4

C- You love me naa

M- of course I love you

Maan says hugging Charu back and patting on her head

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Geet is sitting on the huge bed inside Maan’s room

She is wondering, itni kya baat ho rahi hai behen se

In her thoughts she goes back to the time when 5 years back she decided to trust Maan….she decided to trust her heart more than her mind…..everybody said Maan was playing with her heart to destroy Akhil, but her heart believed that the love she felt was true….the man who taught the meaning of love cannot be an imposter

She had almost blindly trusted her heart that day when she let Maan go

She was risking being caught by Akhil

She was risking being used by Maan, where Maan could just disappear from her life

She was risking everything

Maan went that day

She didn’t know where he went or whether he will come back or not

Whether she did the right thing trusting him or not

In the meanwhile, she remained working with Akhil but also searching every detail about Maan Singh Khurana available

She got to know about his business, his family and the fateful accident of his sister and her friend

She started checking the phone that Maan gave diligently

Without fail started to check her mail and social media

But all in vain

It’s been 6 months without any contact from Maan

Her faith in Maan contacting her was fading; when she realized that she was 24x7 either with Akhil or with her family

Even Maan would want to contact her he won’t be able to

She told her family and Akhil that she is going to join aWomen’s yoga class on weekends

They agreed to it and believed her

But she was finding it hard to believe the craziness she was indulging in with just faith in her heart

Every weekend she decided to travel to outskirt of the city in lieu of her class and would wait in the dhaaba where Maan and Geet once went to have lunch

She knew it was their place, nobody else knew about it except Maan

It had been consecutive 4 weeks with no breakthrough and no contact

She was starting to question her life choices when the Dhaaba owner decided to abruptly keep an envelope and a phone near her and go about his chore

She takes the phone in her hand and plays the video she finds in it

The screen illuminates with Maan’s face

Her hands are clammy and shaking seeing Maan after so many months

In the Video, Maan is also teary eyed

It seems like he inside a office wearing a corporate suite

She relieved in her heart seeing then he is safe

Geet; who was zoned out with shock seeing Maan diverts her attention to the video trying to make out his words

Maan was teary eyed and she also felt a lump in her throat

Geet still remembers his words from the video:

“Geet! I…I am so proud of you!”

Those lines still make her emotional.

Nobody ever said that they were proud of her except Maan, not even her father

“I am so proud to be your boyfriend! My Geet…my brave Geet!I love you so much. I am sorry to have made you wait this much. I will tell you why…I will tell you everything. There is a letter with this video. The letter will tell you everything. I sent this video too to make you believe that its really me. We will contact through like this for now only…till I find a way todo what I came for. Geet, I miss you…worry about you…every moment…..but don’t worryI also keep an eye on you…nothing can harm you….nobody can treat you badly. I am there. But honestly I need some time to figure out how to finish what I came for…I beg for your patience….I will come and take you with me…I will I promise”

The video had ended. The letter contained all the history about him and why he came for revenge. She had researched about it thoroughly so knew most of it but Maan’s real emotions and motives she could understand clearly through the letter

The letter also stated what he truly felt about her and how truly he loved her

She was instructed to delete the video and give back the phone to the dhaaba owner and also destroy the letter

She didn’t need the letter, every letter she memorized by heart

But she decided to shoot a video on the phone and instructed the dhaaba owner about it

She knew it will reach Maan

In the video she shared her firm resolve to help Maan to finish what he came for and that she now had researched enough about the incident that what Akhil did was beyond forgivable

She even shared that she has now decided to continue Maan’s incomplete plan by being in the fore-front and do everything needed to take his revenge

After continuous weekly to and fro communication with Maan through video and letters she could even convince Maan, who was reluctant to use Geet for his plan that she was the perfect person to execute his plan because she knows Akhil very well and Akhil feels she is too weak and helpless to do any such thing so Akhil’s guards will be down in front of her

Maan had no other choice than to agree but with the condition that she will not any unnecessary risk and his people will always keep an eye on her for her safety

She comes out of her thoughts as Maan enters the room

G- Kya hua?

M- Kuch nahi

G- Pareshaan lag rahe ho. Charu ne kuch kaha?

Maan sighs and looks at Geet while sitting beside her

G- She doesn’t like me naa

Maan doesn’t know how to put it

M- Maine use samjha diya hai. Its just you are connected to Akhil and she has a past with Akhil so…but don’t worry she is very matured

Geet looks down

G- Your nanu told me how much your sis means to you….and I also know you decided to avenge Akhil just for her….and we…we met because of that….I…last think I want to do is come between you and your sister

Maan takes a deep breath

M- Geet, you have to understand that it is correct that my sister is very close to me. But that doesn’t mean you are not important me. I don’t understand where this aspect of choosing between you two comes and why does it come?

G- No…emm...I mean…we haven’t promised anything yet…so…..if…I mean I don’t want to make anyone from your family unhappy…specially if it’s your sister who is so valuable to you

M- Who said there is no promise? I must not have communicated it to you yet, but I have made a promise to you in my heart that I will marry you, Geet; and I will honor my promise not because of just my sense of responsibility and my gratitude for what you have done for me and for my family, but for the love that I have for you. And that love, if not greater but is not less than the love I have for my family. You are not an option Geet, you are my choice

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Chapter 4 Part B4

Fabulous Update

The past was rather interesting , Geet actually took a great risk

but going on her feelings for Maan she made that choice

and she kept hoping that he will contact her

until finally she gets to the dhaba and its there that she receives

a phone and letter

so Geet use to go every weekend just to get in touch with Maan

but I'm glad that Maan actually loves Geet and wants to spend

his life with her

Wonderful pt

Geet thinking about past how she trusted her heart she have risk on both side but believing heart over mind was her right decision maan genuinely loved her

Now she thinking about maan sister and trying to convey maan if his sis not happy then she not pressurize him listening her he clearly told he not going to leave her she's important fr him like his sister he want both and she is his choice

wonderful update fantastic

great update

geet remember how her heart is right n force her to believe maan is not wrong and using her

maan confess geet that she is equally important in his life like his family

Wonderful update dear

Geet thinking abaut her past

Maan and geet conversation are too good

Thanks for pm

Watting for update