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Posted: 4 years ago
#91

Part B

Chapter 2

marvelous update. greatly written

glad that Geet and Maan are together.

of cos Maan meets Geet to meet his family.

can understand that Geet is overwhelmed seeing how rich Maan is.

great that she meets his grandfather and sister.

well Geet feels something is not right when she meets Charu

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

B2

maan took geet home

geet is very much nervous to meet maan's family which has grand father n sister

geet's sister met with little bit distance

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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

Woah this was totally unexpected 😃

So Geet and Maan were in this together? How? Wanna know all the details!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Sorry for late reply

As I miss to read privious part ,so both have planned together for trap akhil and they succeeded.after five long years they meet.nice parts.maan introduce her to his family.waiting for next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Wonderful pt

Geet getting nerves seeing his richness but his warm welcome make her comfortable around him he intro her to his family

Edited by sanum23 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part B

Special Thanks to Meghna (Meggs) for helping me with the Part B of the story. This belongs to you

Shout out to anmirza for going back and reading my previous creation- Jaded Prince

Chapter 3

G- And then here is my sweet sis Charu

Geet looks and Charu and gives her a huge grin but is only returned a plastic smile

Geet feels something is not right but can’t exactly put a finger what

She sits for the supper and Maan sites beside her

They have an uneventful and silent lunch

Charu turns her automatic wheelchair towards her room calling Maan on the way

C- Bhai Idhar aana

Maan follows her to the room

Geet looks as Maan leaves

Nanu- Dono bhai behen mein bohot pyaar hai

Geet turns her head towards nanu as he gives her a warm smile

She also smiles back and nods

Nanu- Dono ne bachpann se apni zindagi sirf ek dusre ke bharose pe bitayi hain

G- Matlab?

Nanu sighs

Nanu- Matlab yeh ki Maan ki maa aur meri beti ne uske pitase bhaag ke shaadi Karli. Maan’s father was not wealthy…you could say almost poor. Humlogon se unka koi rishtaa nahi tha, India mein the who. Phir Maanpaida hua, phir Charu. Sab theek tha, I guess. Par mujhe kayi saalon baad ye khabar aayi ki Maan ke parents chal base and the kids are alone in an orphanage. Maan bada tha who he took all the responsibility of his sister and survive in poverty. Jab wo mere paas aaye toh Maan teenager tha Charu aur chotti

He pauses remembering those days

Nanu- Maan ko kaabu mein karna aur uska trust jeetna ki mainunka family member hoon aur unka bhala chahta hoon was like a war. Kitna ziddi hai, tum toh jaanti hi hogi

She smiles in acknowledgment

Nanu- So Bhai behen ka eka lag sa hi bond hai. Waise tumhare kitne bhai behen hain?

Geet starts to answer

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In Charu’s room, she is in foul mood

C- Bhai isko yahan kyun leke aa gaye?

Maan frowns

M- Matlab?

C- Matlab ye ki I knew you met her India, but I thought ki Akhil ke wahan kaam karti hai toh you are just using her for…

She stops seeing her brother’s stoic expression

Maan says with a calm yet strong voice

M- Charu, I am serious about Geet

Charu’s eyebrows her furrowed

She is struggling to make out her words

C- Are you planning to marry her?

M- Yes

Maan says very seriously

Charu loses her cool and patience

C-What? Why? How could you???

She yells accusingly

M- How could I, what? You knew I was in relationship with Geet; it’s been more than 5 years

Charu is frustrated now

C- But bhai, I thought it’s for revenge on Akhil and what about me…..what about Sonia who dies in that dreadful accident…she was your fiancé….you lost your unborn child and I lost my legs….all because of Akhil

M- I know. What all this has to do with Geet and my relationship?

C- emm..I mean…Geet is related to Akhil…she was so close tohim….seeing Geet every time will not let me forget my past pains….and I know she loved Akhil herself and so…

M- Enough Charu! I love Geet and she loves me. What Geet has done for us and against Akhil nobody can even think of. So instead of complaining, you should be grateful to her. And she is almost your age, so I think she will be a good companion and a friend to you. Geet is family

Charu looks down and bites her lips

She realized Geet has so much effect on her brother

He is almost hypnotized by her

Charu moves towards her brother as he leans and holds his hand

C- I am sorry bhai, I know Geet means so much to you. I am sorry to have hurt you

Maan gives a reassuring smile

M- its ok

Charu hugs onto Maan

C- You love me naa

M- of course I love you

Maan says hugging Charu back and patting on her head


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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

B3

charu is not comfortable n agree to accept geet as a family member but seeing maan very much serious she ask sorry n accept geet

nanu is sharing maan's past with geet also asking about geet's family

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Posted: 4 years ago
#98

Geet feel charu not happy to meet hr charu took maan separately to talk him she share about her doubt and her not liking her but maan seriously told his feelings frgeet then charu get silent maan nanu shared maan past and maan charu bonding

nanu know if maan trust geet then she right fr maan

Edited by sanum23 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Charu isn’t going to get convinced that easily; I can see trouble ahead for Geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Charu isn’t going to get convinced that easily; I can see trouble ahead for Geet


Ahaa! you have an eye of a detective! But yeah, I can also feel the same

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