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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Khawaish Season 2


Originally posted by taahir004

Part 15
Maan and Geet still shopping and she decides to take for the family Maan
agrees but when she wants to take for him he says he only chooses for himself
but than Geet tells him that her Di once bought gifts for him and Maan
says he never got them as maybe Nitiya returned them
that is strange as he still loves his first wife but never took any gifts from her
Abhi phones Geet and wants to take her out for dinner and she too knows that
she has to let him know about her marriage to Maan
she knows that she has lost so many loved ones and now it will be Abhi but she has
to break his heart so that he can move on its only fair to let him know she is married
as its not her fault circumstances were such of course he been someone that loves her
will not understand her and still feel she cheated him
Geet should also tell her friends now that she is married to Maan
Precap both Maan and Geet in the same restaurant that will be amazing
and I hope finally Maan also realize that not only he lost his love but Geet too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

You are mine


Originally posted by Drashtilove

maan is very dangerous he gets what he wants poor geet she couldnt stop the marriage maan planned very well but why he doesnt love his daughter cant wait for next thnx 4 update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan


Originally posted by nishamna

It's amazing. So maan is thinking about only geet and about her demand of having conform.action about their relationship. Maan still having doubt. His patents also gave him advice but still he couldn't able to decide anything. Next.morning geet didn't come at.office. maan went.to Raman's place and their he gets to know.she left.for her home town. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan


Originally posted by pinku04

part 19
ab maan ko pata chalega ki door rehna kya hota hai...
aur i am just waiting for that time when maan will get to know geet's reality...
tab use pyaar and apne so called perfection ka matlab samajh aayega... 😡😡
continue soon...

for this you have to wait little longer 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

You are mine


Originally posted by -lakshmi-

part 2

ye tumne kya kiya p2... meri comment saamne rakhkar counter strike jaisa likha kya ye waala part...hahaha

u definitely did made geet in the goody side with this update... in the first part i hadnt felt that...

maan is so selfish and cruel yaar... he wished geet to be his and is doing all these mean acts... he is marrying geet in front of his first wife... he even convinced brij... almost emotionally blackmailed him... and is now forcing geet literally to marry him... am sure he is behind ranajis absence in the marrriage ...

maan ko ithna bura kyu banaaya p2...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

You are mine

Originally posted by -lakshmi-

part 3

ye tumne kya kya kiya p2... maan ko villian se bhi daraawna bana diya...

how did he drugged geet? and ye kaisa drug ki upper body is like paralysed? kaash geet koi ishaara deti kisiko to explain she dont want that marriage...

at last meri entry hui... yehhh...

dadi is after all msks dadi... she now doubts maan... she knows now that maan had planned all this...

but ab kya... ek maan do biwi aur mein... 😆

will be waiting to see how u will take this story ahead... maan mein heropanti aayegi kya? and if so how ?

ps:loved that necklace


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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Khawaish Season 2


Originally posted by sagorika93

Awesome story ...really liked the concept . read in one go ...superbbb ...!!!
Maan geet se shadi karta hai apne maa n ruhani ke liye ...but shadi ke baad geet ko misunderstnd karta hai badimaa ke baato mei aakar . badimaa bohot kamini typ hai ...Geet ke maa se badla lene ke liye geet ki life khrb karna chahati thi ..geet ko nitya ke place mei bejh ke geet ke liye srf pain Likhna chahati thi but uss kamini ko kya pata usne anjane mei geet ke liye sabse accha kam kiya .
Jb usne dekha maan geet ko ek mouka de raha hai tb usne phirse maan ko past ki yaad dilake guilty feel karwana chahati thi ...grrr ..thnk god avantika waha aagyi . I think avantika ko pata hoga badimaa ke irade issliye unko dur bejh diya :p
Now coming to geet ...she is sweet n adjusting type of gal Jo sabki khusi ke liye apne pyar ko sacrifice kar di .
Kbhi kbhi geet pe mujhe gussa bhi aata hai coz sab Jo order dete hai geet woh puri karti hai chupchap ..chahe usme usse kitni bhi taklif kyu na ho ? Avantika maan ki khusi chahati hai but kbhi usne janne ki kosis ki geet iss rishte se khus hai yea nehi ? Maan apni pain dekh raha hai ...jaise iss shadi se srf usne sab khoya hai but geet se pucha kbhi ? N geet bhi chupchap saheti hai ...
N lastly maaneet's relation n avi's entry
Maan geet dono ek dusre ke sath comfortable feel krte hai ab ..pehele jaise ..n now maan geet ko pasnd bhi karne laga hai ..but he is unaware of that ...
Avi ko geet ke sath dekhke he is feeling jealous but offcoz he won't admit that . n dusri taraf geet avi ko sach batana chahati hai but maan se kuch nehi bolna chahati coz she don't want to hurt maan...
Precp looks really interesting ...can't wait for next...plz continue soon...
P.s. sorry for the long post ..but could not control myself :p n thnx for the pm priya :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

You are mine


Originally posted by GC_TheKing

The story getting interesting and I am loving it. On the way to KM Maan warned Geet not to create scene in car. They reached and Maan asked Priya to do the aarti . Geet kick the kalash strongly and it hurt Lakshmi . Maan got angry and warned her not to do this kind of act ever. Then he took her in his arms and gone to their room. Geet said she don't like him but Maan said one day she will love her. Maan said he will give a project to her father which will help him in his business but in return he wants her acceptance for this marriage.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

You are mine


Originally posted by hottyangel

interesting update... maan is forcing geet and blackmailing her in all ways... how can someone love with force... maan just likes geet and obsessed of her... feeling sad for priya and geet... what is geets future, maan is already married and has a child...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon


Originally posted by tamanna1391

awsemmpast effecting present maan not ready to believe geet

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