MG FF ~DIRTY REVENGE(PURE LOVE)~PART 16~PG 143~THREAD 2 added

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~ PROLOGUE ~


"congratulations MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA u have successfully killed baby and this geet too" spoke geet before closing her eyes . She can feel liquid flowing in her lower part very well knowing that she has lost her last hope in the form of baby even in her unconcious state.

Maan was totally numb hearing geet wordings..He is not able to believe that he lost his baby about whom he doesn't even know and geet whom he always love but not able accept as he was totally blinded by his revenge no no not revenge but DIRTY REVENGE...Today only he come to know that geet's father was not at all fault but it was his mother who snatched all his happiness,his childhood everything and now his geet,his love,his life,his baby too and all bcoz of his mother...



Here is the prologue do give me ur views about this.

For charater sketch right now only maaneet and office staff same as GHSP will gonna be there for initial parts of this story .

P.S-Plz bookmark this thread as there can be delay in pms or follow deepa di daily updates thread...
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Maan Singh Khurana

Geet Handa
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congrats for new story
nice prolgue
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will be quite happy if you could continue.ye the story



will only comment wen you update it
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congrats on the new story
interesting concept
continue soon
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nice prologue waiting for update
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waiting for updates😃
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nice... continue n do pm me...
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congrates for new story
interesting concept
continue soon
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congrats on the new FF! Lovely interesting prologue! Feeling 4 Maaneet! update soon

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