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EMOTIONAL UPDATE GEET INNER TURMOIL AND HIS FAMIY THINKING STILL THAT THEY WANT HIM TO MARRY THAT GIRL HOPE MAAN ANNOUNCED THAT GEET IS THE ONE SOON LOVED THEIR KNOCK JOKES AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM.
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Part 51



Maan was too shocked to take any initiative watching his pari in that life less position pricked his heart, it huts like anything. Rahul understood his emotional turmoil, Maan face lost the glow he had until last sec. "Maan lets take her to KH" Rahul broke the silence but he could listen nothing. Rahul knew what maan would be thinking he cont just cont let one part away from his life especially his loved ones. Knowing Maan and mansee bond he can relates to his pain easily. "Maan we should take her hospital hosh mai aavo for god sake" Rahul shook him to break his trance.

Maan gathered himself he cont broke off like that determined he took move to pick mansee. "Bhai" Maan screamed watching mansee breathing getting unusual she is having tough time to breathe in. "I will get the car bring her fast" Rahul didn't mind to console maan the more he concentrates on him the more he will break he knew maan's in and out. Maan shook his head to get away those stupid tears rolling out from his eyes while carrying manse, it was not time to cry.
"Raj inform Uncle and Amy and ask them to reach KH asap" Maan ordered while taking seat. Raj nodded closed the door he was shocked to see mansee in this condition. He is scared and worried for maan now knowing how much attached maan was with mansee. He witnessed other side of maan because of this little princessentry in his life being it in his lone moment or at KH there playing maan's childish heart when he was with her. He wished nothing could happen to mansee if it ... he don't want to think in those lines it will broke his boss heart.
Suddenly something stroked in his mind yeah geet she is here with maan, hmmm his boss special day with his special girl. He is first one to know about this as, he is the one who did all preparationswith his boss instructions he is indeed lucky. His boss was never into girl's type when whole world was ready to die for his one glance. Gk mad her entry the spark between them was proof he is damn happy for all these but he need to know if his boss confessed or not. Raj went to check on geet after sending Amy and Dean to KH, One look at geet made him sense everything. He didn't witness anything so coming to conclusions was not at all good and it was his boss personnel matter.
"Mam here is your food your all favorite dishes sir ordered everything the way you likes" Raj arranged table in front of her the way he did all ways when they were together. Maan never allowed anyone except Raj that's why he knew most of the story, but geet being indifferent makes him full confused. Geet gave deaf ears to him sat in same position motionless Raj signed he is used of all these from start, her silence her never ending attitude he wondered why his boos choose her, still she his boss love he is just working for him. Least he knew other side of story which she is going through. Geet throws the table away all plates and stuffs shattered like her heart. She care damn walked away feeling too much hurt and sad but she didn't cried she is mad totally mad at him.
"Mam it's my duty to drop you safe please" Raj requested her to sit in car holding car door open looking at ground. Geet walked away ignoring him she wants to leave from this place, she is belonged to darkness and its that bloody Kapoors palace sadly. She met Aniee to say bye her happiness had no bounds as Arjun broke her fast in very Dramatic DDLJ types. There is no confession yet she was simply accepting everything as she knew she loved Arjun yeah she realized it the sec he fed her in pretext of making her eat something in front of all ,she felt like winning the wholeworld.
Ritzy and Meera were not less they had good fun in teasing Dev and Amy in breaking there fasts. Raj saw all happy faces he didn't raised his voice guessing none informed them about mansee. That little princess had no relation with this family still the bond they shared with her was priceless.Raj was thankful
as geet agreed to come in car as per Naina words. Geet was quite throughout the drive she looking out of window her face had no emotion.
"Mam I know sir where about you want me to take there?" Raj understood she not in good mood. The best medicine was Maan he tried his luck. Geet shot him glare in her typical GK attitude through rare view mirror. Raj didn't dared to open his mouth again dropped her at Kapoors palace waited until she stepped inside.
"Mam safely reached her home sir"Maan read Raj's message as his cell vibrating continuously from past two hours. He is no mood to attend any call but he took out his cell to check on time his luck saw this message. It's been two hours all took mansee into ICU but there is no news until now. He smiled sadly watching her pic in his mobile wall paper but it changed in to horror in no time. Gosh he forgets to inform her about anything in his sarrows. She will be mad totally who can knew it rather than him, funny it was he knew her still he don't know her.
Maan was about to punch call button that's when Dean came out and her matter vanished off. "Uncle just tell me the truth I mean truth"Maan demanded when he led to Dean's cabin. They don't even allow him to meet mansee he is scared totally. "Maan she is fine trust me" Dean don't want to scare him more hides the truth.
"I am not kid uncle I need answer" Maan voice held authorityDean Face was worried sick. Amy nodded as it was the time "Arey you both scaring us like anything open your mouths please it was not horror movie" Rahul tried to erase the tension lines Amy and dean smiled weakly but Maan didn't budged off.
"Ok maan listen your pari had seaviour brain disease you know it already I thought your entry will makes her normal as I saw good vibrations but maan she happy at heart but her illness killing her as we accepted. Her brain had stopped functionality and it was effecting her badly that's why she lost her senses" Dean Voicehalted hearing maan's voice. "Means you know all these from first you know this day will come still none thought it was necessary to inform me" Maan asked but all knew that was aimed directly at Amy.
Maan facial expressions were soo painfulAmy looked away avoiding his gauge. "You said everything will be fine na then how this can happen soo suddenly" Maan was furious all knew it except him. "Maan I know it was painful truth and I never wanted to see you in pain" Amy was honest maan knew it. Amy hugged maan tightly and whispered"Maan you can cry in pain and shout in anger for mansee but I cont maan knowing everything even because I am doctor" Amy eyes welled up. Maan pattered his back consoling his friend silently Amy values always makes him proud. No matter what amy won't allow his emotions to rule out his heart and soul as he need focus in his job.
"Now I got it why Ritzy was extra careful with mansee and especially you Mr.Armaan" Rahul voice heaved with bottled up emotions. Amy nodded broke the hug but didn't let go his friend hand kept his hand on maan's shoulder. Dean relaxed a bit as he at last revealed the most imp thing to maan, yeah one more person need to know this. Maan and amy stood leaning on wall thinking deeply about something Rahul makes his place in between them. "Jab dekho friend ki peche pecha jathi ho kabhi tho bhai ki bare mai bhi shocho for god sake." Rahul don't want to blame anyone nor he don't want to see all cry Rahul and all these it won't suit at all. Deep within he knew the power mansee holds as she won his heart within no time. Maan smiled weakly discussed many things about mansee with dean. Later he met mansee she is still unconscious to jump on him excitedly calling his as "Maa". He missed her cute innocent smile her sweet sweet talks which none can understand. He kept staring at his little pari until his eye leads gave up slept keeping his head on bed sideways.
It's been two days for maan's heart content mansee opened her eyes but she is not his pari now. She lost her smile was caged up in same room with many wires and machines surrounding her. Maan never missed a chance to meet her in-between his busy schedule. Aniee and all came and met her all asked only one thing from god little princess wellbeing.

"I miss you too much but guess you won't" She reads his message with cute killing smile but didn't replied back. Why would she? when he didn't even came to meet her. It was not done she is mad totally mad at him. "Cutie pie kuch tho bol for god sake this silence killing me" He messaged her again patting mansee to put her sleep. He was completely accomplished and his girl was not in mood of giving up. Geet needs one thing he being with her to take her with him from this darkness. He walked away leaving her alone it hurted her too much. She waied for his next message but it never came. Maan slept due to triedness feeling his pari warm breathes, it given content to his heart she is safe. she smashed her mobile in annoyance.

Ritzy tried her best to reach geet but she never picked her call nor she ever thought of meeting her when Ritzy went to her home. "I really don't know how people can be this much careless about their own ones" Ritzy thought absent mindedly entering in to dean's cabin. It was loud enough to catch attention of Amy and Savi who were busy in some discussion. Savi didn't get her words she thought Ritzy talking about staff or something with work tension.
"Yes mans were too ignorant with their beloved ones they deserves punishment" Savi commented hinting Amy Ritzy could do nothing but smile weakly with slight cute blush. Savi laughed along with Amy, Ritzy signed in relief but she don't know amy knew about what she is thinking. He is not aware of the matter fully and that person but he knew its about Mansee and her maa most probably. He don't want to involve himself in that matter until Dean asked for.

Days rolled out Mansee condition didn't changed much but she started giving response it was enough for maan. His heart gained lost senses completely he took good care of mansee being around her at evenings and nights even. It was almost two weeks after KC but there is no sign of geet.
Maan initially thought she is mad at him for leaving her like that but he is helpless. Raj updated him about her routine going to shoots and going back home doing everything robotically he understood her condition."Lagtha hai you will have tough time to pacify her this time man"He thought when she didn't picked his call when he called her before going to bed. He is all set to do that she can pretend but she can never able to stop herself when she saw him in front of her eyes. Thinking many ways to pacify her he dreamed about her all the night.
It was cool normal night for maan he is with his pari trying his best to make her talk normally. "Pari I miss you calling me as maa" Maan kissed her hair tightly. Mansee blinked her lashes that word makes her remember geet as well. "Maa maa" She whimpered slowly. Maan got alerted took her tiny hand in his kissed her knuckles lovingly. "I am here pari see" He assured her but failed to recognize what she is missing.

"You know little angel your pari name calling me as maa reminds me only one person" "Maan said keeping his head beside mansee looking in to her small small beautiful eyes. "My pari nain she is my angel you are not less than her she is my everything" Maan confessed as it was fact truth. He is breathing right this moment only because of her."I thought I belongs to her she belongs to me I lived for her but she left me" His voice heaved up. Mansee placed her hand on his cheeks with at most difficulty looking at his tears in thought of wiping them away. Maan smiled warmly nodding for no "I don't know pari where she is if she is alive or not , I thought I can never ever believe or love anyone. I am wrong totally wrong she came to me like an angel." He said smiling with warm tears rolling out of his sockets thinking about geet. "Geet she is my soul now I can never part away from her if she wants also I love her pari" Mansee smiled briefly thinking he is saying I love you to her only like every now and then it's his habit.

"You know you both are very same my geet and you most beautiful at innocent angels" Maan said playing with her long curly hairs. "I don't want to compare my geet and my pari nain. Both were equally important to me one given rebirth to me giving their hand without even asking it when I am alone it's my pari nain. Other filled my life with colors and happiness drifting away the darkness surrounding me it's my geet my love" Maan poured out his heart to his little princess.

"I never repent for loving geet , Pari nain will remain in my soul I can never forget her hope my love will understand this" Maan hoped for good. Being away from geet killing him within and she is not ready to talk with him. He is emotionally drained out his little princess is there to listen his heart words at least. "See how cute we both were looking"Maan showed pic in his mobile to mansee. "Maa maa" Mansee chirped calmly recognizing geet. None can understand her unsaid words she is missing geet like anything.


Week passed by maan was fully involved in his lined up meetings he avoided going out of country did many important meetings through video conferences. Clients can never disobey him his presence his one word was enough for them he is happy with that. "Maan hope you remember the temple darsan of today's" Rahul asked after barging in to his cabin of course without permission. Maan lifted his head then again immersed in file he never mind what Rahul do around him.

"Maan don't show me this attitude of yours just freshen up and come now" Maan caught the packet before it hits his head. "Bhai I am totally busy not now please" Maan had lots of work to do he had reason. "Maan I am not buying any of your reasons just come along with me that's final" Raj was determined about his decision. "Bhai it's already going to be 7 pm for god sake call off for your work and come along with us" Aniee entered with all including dadimaa. Maan didn't given up he knew he can do this work tomorrow even but temple a big noo from his side. "Maan you should give chance to everything when you already started doing that" Dadimaa asked maan at ones glanced at her that small set of words had very big inner meaning.
"Veer ji we are going to temple to ask god only one thing and you know it" Meera hinted about Mansee hoping he will say yes. Maan mind stopped working his heart started working with pooled emotions but he budgedoff everything got back to work. Rahul shook his head cont this maan agree for ones he cursed maan. "Chalo bhai hum chalthe hai waha pari akele akele humari intezar kar rahi hogi" Aniee said making sure maan heard it. It worked making all grin with thousand watts glitters. All were happy to know maan took initiative in arranging a date for geet it took two weeks for all to know everything and Rahul confirmed it. Love birds were not meeting each other from days almost 25 days so they were here with mission.
Maan acted like he heard nothing but dadi know his mind grinned naughtily at all left from there. "Dev babu chalo na jaldi waha meri liye wo intezar kar rahai hai I badly wants to meet her" Rahul dashed out of room before maan heating gauge burn his skin.
"Bhai do you think he will come surely?" Dev was not sure maan will come that too temple. All had planned from week for this god blessings were with them they got this golden opportunity. Rahul family built new temple and all wants to go and take blessings of Durga maa well they all had only one wish mansee, Love birds ko milnekochance bhi miljeyegi. Khurana's had their own wish maan will come to temple for mansee if not for geet. "Beta come all will go fine trust me" Aniee heard dadimaa voice she smiled at her cheerfully got off from the car as they reached their destination. "Uffo dadi it was too cold outside" Aniee shivered hugged herself tried to warm herself. "If you need I can give more warmth" Aniee blinked her lashes they dropped instantly watching Arjun in front of her. Arjun kept warm shalve around her she cursed her mind for being too much excited.
Arjun met Rahul and dev love birds stealing glances at each other being conscious of their surroundings. Dadi got herself busy with Rahul mom and relatives. "I really didn't get it why the Murat time was this much late" Rahul cousin commented having high difficulty in carrying her half saree. "Isiliye kabhi kabhi ye bhi pehnlo not only jeans" The girl heard heads taunts.
"Arey bhai leave her na chalo behen murats were not in our friends like they come when we want haina pandit ji" Rahul involved pandit as all started talking about keeping ceremony at this much late."Haan ji this murat was holy one" Pandit mocked at Rahul. Truth is It was not fixed up it murat came at this time only Pandit grinned as Rahul thinking Pandit did what he asked for.
Come on all this is for Maaneet and none can know it so he should preplan it and nothing was more happy love birds getting blessings of godess Durga maa. "I wish bhai hum jinkeliye ye sab kar rahi hai wo dono agayetho" Aniee said looking for geets presence. Her wish was granted she came in her car wearing saree as per Rahul condition looking angelic too beautiful it was tough to break the eye contact. Boys hooted looking at GK while girls were fida for her attitude and elegancy the way she carry herself in every outfit she wore.
Geet came and met aniee "I am really sorry chutki muje maaf kardo na" Geet apologized with moisted eyes. Aniee shook for no "Why this sorry for friends pe naam se ye sab bantha hai boss trust me"Aniee never left a chance to make geet understand they were not friends for name sake. "But ye chot meri waje se hi hua" Geet carried her hand which aniee hided with her duppata. She is too much lost in her pain and hurt she hurted her chutki like this she felt ashamed of herself.
It was one eventual day aniee saw geet in shopping mall accidentally she tried to talk with her. Geet was not in her senses without meeting him not even listening to his voice after that day makes her lost completely. She got back to her GK attitude and it was in worst cases now. That's when SK forced her to attend some party they halted at some mall more of geet's annoyance. Aniee don't have any clue of all these she asked about their date with teasing smile. It knocked geet's annoyance soo badly she pushed away aniee with all her strength as she is hugginh her tightand her hand got hurt badly as she hits railing with force.
People around them given sympathetic looks to aniee but she never cared anything but her pari nain. Geet's eyes had so much pain and hurt and the emptiness in her pari nain eyes scared her. Aniee body guards took her away safely not allowing her to meet geet she warned all sweetly not to tell this to anyone.
"So geet is the cause?" It broke Aniee and geet's trance Dev question sounded like statement. Dev got angry as aniee got hurt too badly but looking at geet's state he knew there is something bothering her. He said nothing leave them alone to cope up all the days of three weeks. "Geet I never knew you are cry baby look at yourself you spoiled make up Swetha did taking her busy long hours so bad" Rahul wiped away her smudged kajal. Geet smiled weakly she don't know why she obeyed Rahul words and came here but she felt light after long days.
Happy she can never be happy without him it was impossible thing. She came here only for Rahul and most importantly her chutki as she needs to ask apology from her. "Chutki I called you many times after that incident" Geet said meekly as it was caused by her. "But you didn't even picked up my calls" She asked with complained eyes. "You deserve it do you even have any brain or not three weeks I am calling you like mad but you never showed mercy on your mobile. "Aniee was furious geet dipped her head low.

"Oyee jyada daravo mat inko you were not allowed to touch your mobile as papaji was there don't use this for your ownself" Meera mocked at aniee supporting geet. Aniee cursed Meer but laughed along with her ended with cute grin looking at geet.

"I am not in my sense chutki I have gone mad" Geet confessed her heart. "If you miss someone this badly why didn't picked his calls even?" Aniee asked straightly as she tried geet no from maan's mobile as well. Geet fell silent she don't want to mention but she is hurt and he didn't even came to meet her whole two days when she waited for him without blink of sleep. She don't even had no clue where her phone was until she tried aniee number a day ago.
She needs his presence just him in front of her eyes, one call may be sort out her mind doubts but her heart. Her heart her skin needs him.. needs his breathe his sent his warmth to comfort her. If someone calls her mind she never mind, lolz when she ever minded about anything when it comes to him.
"Aniee come on all already left long back we need to reach there"Dev called them from half of steps. Aniee got mini heart attack watching the steps ahead. "Now I believe all need to work hard equally to reach god" Aniee commented. Steps were very long as the temple was situated on hill area away from city noise and pollution.
"Geet come on bahut hua rona dhona now we should get going" Rahul checked his watch while offering his hand to geet. Geet not interested in going in but saying no means hurting all specially Aniee and Rahul she was in fix. Giving up she is about to kept her hand in his but instead of rahuls she felt his hand touching her. She can never ever forget his warmth the slight contact was enough to give Goosebumps to her whole body.

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Amazing update
Feeling bad for maansi
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oh no itna saddy saddy . sab ko sad banadiya tune. waha geet kitna hurt hogayi hai.yeh maan sach kyun nahi batadetha . why he will always hurt her when he knows geet's condition.😑he is so much in illusion that everytime by seeing him geet will forget everything. for god's sake she is so fragile, its better for maan to clear everything. kahi der na hojaye and geet fully GK banjaye.
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feeling bad for maansee...
awesome update!!!😊
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