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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kptl

so there was someone else also who knew maan's little secret..nd understood his pain as well...really hope Annie does something g that will bring maaneet together for eternity..they both have gone through many rough path nd now it's their time for some happiness...nd may b happily ever after ...:) could understand geets pain of having the family with the man she luved nd still does...



Yeah, Annie knows how Maan feels..is he the only one? Well wait and see 😉
And of course Maan is the cure for her!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Part was amazing... I hv feeling dat annie is goin to be d cupid 4 maaneet to be 2gthr... Maan finaly accepted in frnt of sumbdy dat yes he is in luv wid geet & geet poor grl realy is suffocating in her lyfless lyf she wants sumthng or sumbdy to cmfrt her i hope wo maan ko uss nazar se dekh paye... Cn jealousy work in her case?? Cont soon waiting 4 nxt prt & ya 4 FF & AL & battle of wits updts too... :)



yeah..first time Maan has openly accepted his love for her...
And Geet will need time...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




Annie knows about Maan's love for Geet and I think Vicky knew it also that is why may be he wanted to ask her to marry after he depart and that with Maan but he stopped himself because Geet never loved Maan and opening this truth in front of her may make her move away even from this friendship...may be he wanted to let them be friend until he is alive and then let time take its course to bring them together...

Geet realized her lonliness very badly after seeing a pregnant lady...it makes her realize the fact that she is all alone in this world without any family and that for whole life because Vicky her husband is no more...and this thought is scaring her this much that now she wants to have children no matter how...

hope now after listening Geet's yearning to have children Annie will do something to put this thought of remarrying Geet infront of elders and suggest Maan-Geet marriage and hope this yearning of Geet will make her get ready to marry Maan...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




Interesting point Kiran...did Vicky know? Well you'll have to wait to find out 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

so finally maan accepted opelnly in front of annie that he loves geet

so both's lonelyness will bring together
geet wanted to become a mother to get away from her lonelyness
hope that annie will bring them together
at least she can have khurana's in her womb



Yeah, Maan finally succumbed to his emotions...
Both need time though...and a little push😉
LOL khurana's in her womb? 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

"Suppressed grief suffocates, it rages within the breast, and is forced to multiply its strength"

-Ovid


I loved the start of this update a lot.
You have such a beautiful art of story telling. Whoever comes into your story we definitely have a relation with them. Whether it is the void in Geet's life or the frustration of Maan's path or the uncertainity of a sister whose both brothers are in love with the same girl; it is felt by us.
I loved the portrayal of the past with Vicky and Geet. Beautiful love story that was, their awareness of each other, planning kids together, thinking about her future even as he was dying. Loved it.
It is not going to be easy for either Maan or Geet to forget friendship and take steps differently towards each other. Geet may not even be happy with finding about that Maan loves her. She may see that as a betrayal in friendship. I am so curious to read more.
Thanks for updating.



Awww thanks so much! 😳
Lovely compliment!
Well...remember that Geet cares a lot for maan...so her reaction might surprise you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Geet's loneliness is staring at her in the eyes. It was her decision to stay alone in the house she and Vicky shared and I think she's suffocating as expected after a while.


Her longing for a child is logical specially when she doesnt see anything else happening in her life...I hope Annie makes all of them see sense..

Maan's outburst was equally sad. How do these two plan to spend their life ahead? !

Should I say again, I love your stories and your style of writing...



Her reason for staying in her house alone? Well there are other things behind that 😉
And yes, it is natural to long for a child...and again more story regarding that...
And as always THANKS! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful update.

Maan n Aniee talks. She is
Putting some brains into Maan's
Head. First time openly talking. Its
Good that sumone has to do it.


Past was gud n interesting.
Annie amazed to see Maaneet
Together as well as surprised to
See Vicky flirting wid her. Then only
She has understood this luv triangle.
Annie Lucky to have such darling brothers.

Geet lost in past n missing Vicky very
Much. She now feels empty n feeling
Of motherhood arises.
She desperately want a child who can
Fill the emptiness around her.

Now wat she wil do???

HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!



YEah...Annie is the only one who could understand the complex relationships...
and yes...both are stuck in limbo! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Oh God Sanju, dont let her carry Maan's child without being in love with him? Let her not reach out to Maan through their child... That would be so unfair to Maan... poor thing. Let her fall in love with him and realize her feelings for him before she does anything else...



LOL don't worry...things won't be that simple 😉
Remember that first and foremost, Maan is her best friend...so she would think of him before herself...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

As always that was a wonderful update.. I feel so sad for both maan and geet but im glad that atleast now geet will take an initiative and try to seek happiness.. Hope she realizes her love for maan and reciprocates his love.. Cant wait for the next update so please try to make it soon 😊



Awww thanks dear! 😃
Well, it will take a little push 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

MG SS: Near to you





Chapter five

Forgiveness


"When its gone, you'll know what a gift love was. you'll suffer like this. So go back and fight to keep it."
Ian McEwan, Enduring Love


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Annie held Geet's hand, using the other to wipe away Geet's tears. "Geet I can only imagine the pain you must be going through. To lose the one you love....but remember that there are those who love you" Indeed those who will die for you.

Geet steadied herself, giving a watery smile that didn't quite reach her eyes. "I know but some things can never be replaced"

"But we can get something different, that can fill the hollow within us" Annie had a faraway look in her face and then looked back at Geet, "But enough of this Bhabi, we need to go home. I am having a ladies night and I can't have it without you"

The last thing that Geet wanted to do was leave her house and pretend to be happy in front of others, but she wouldn't let Annie down.

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As always Maan and Geet sat together for their lunch. In all honesty there was no need for anyone else, for there was a comfort in their silent friendship.

But sometimes we strive to know more about others, the ones we care about.

"Maan, I've never heard you talk about your parents" Geet asked tentatively, not wanting to intrude but feeling the necessity of understanding his family.

For a moment there was just silence from Maan, letting Geet believe that he wouldn't answer her. She was just about to apologise, when he finally let out some words, "My mother passed away a few years ago. She died in a car crash"

"Oh! Maan I am so sorry" Geet felt chagrined and hesitantly reached out for Maan's hand, "So sorry"

Maan gave a small smile at her words, "Its okay. It's been a few years. My father on the other hand is still alive. Busy running around the world, trying to bring Khurana enterprise to even greater heights"

"Well, that's good" She smiled hesitatingly.

"Yeah its great" He chuckled without humour, "Anyways I have to head off for football practise."

"Bye" She knew that he was avoiding the topic but she held her tongue.

However within a few moments Vicky sat down next to her and for the first time he looked serious. Turning to her, he said gently, "Don't get upset but Maan never wants to talk about his father. I would tell you the reason but it isn't my secret"

Geet was a bit startled by this serious side to Vicky but it made her respect him. It would have been very easy for him to let out Maan's story but he valued the trust more than the moments peace telling the story would have given. "That's okay, I understand, we should respect Maan's privacy"

"Enough of this depressing topic, come with me" Vicky grabbed her hand and lifted her up.

"Where are we going?" Geet asked in surprise.

"Bunking class" He smirked. "After all its about time I took you out for a date"

Geet rolled her eyes but followed him nonetheless.

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As always Geet felt bitter sweet emotions as she entered Khurana Mansion; it had never been her home but it had always been attached to Vicky.

She smiled as Dadima reached forward to embrace her but then her mouth opened in surprise as she saw the other person in the room.

"Uncle!" She smiled with genuine pleasure as she went to touch Maan's father's feet. She had always liked Arjun Uncle, who despite the deep melancholy within himself had always been exceptionally nice to her, "Aap kab aiyee? It's great to see you"

"Same here beti" Arjun put his hand on Geet's head. "Of course I had to come for Annie's wedding"

Annie laughed out aloud, "I kept your visit a secret from Geet, thought that it would be a pleasant surprise"

"Tum kaise ho?" His eyes were deep with worry but also with understanding. After all, like Geet he had lost his love and life partner. No one knew or understood her pain better than he.

Mariya Khurana had been the light in Arjun's life and her death had nearly destroyed him. For years he hadn't been able to face anyone, so bitter was his pain.

Geet dredged up another smile, "I am breathing and living Uncle. That's more than I would have thought possible."

Before Geet could say anything else, another voice interrupted their conversation.

"When did you come?" Maan asked in a cold voice, devoid of any warmth for his father.

"Maan" Arjun's eyes lit up with affection as he saw his son. Yet his warmth was met with disdain. "Come here beta"

Maan gave a disgusted look and walked out with a nonchalant, "Sorry, I am busy".

The room was left with an awkward silence. Arjun looked down at the ground with sadness and lingering guilt. It is nothing more than what I deserve.

"I'll be back in a moment" Geet murmured quietly before walking out of the room quietly.

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Geet was on the verge of falling asleep when her phone buzzed. Muttering grumpily, she picked it up and answered with an abrupt, "Hello?"

There was a moment of silence and Geet was disgruntled enough that she was ready to cut the call when at last a familiar voice spoke up, "Hi Geet"

"Maan" Geet frowned and checked the time, "what happened? Is everything alright?"

"I am outside your window"

Within a few minutes Geet was standing outside on her lawn, looking at Maan in concern. "Maan are you okay? Why are you here so late?"

"I am sorry Geet" He looked away for a moment, "I shouldn't have brushed you off in the afternoon. It's just that I really don't like talking about my father. But I can tell you-"

Geet raised a hand, stopping him. "No Maan, don't. You shouldn't feel guilty nor should you feel obliged to tell me anything. That isn't what friendship is about." She reached and touched his shoulder, "So calm down."

Maan smiled at her in relief, grateful that she was so understanding but the next moment his eyes shot up.

Geet smirked, "Since we happen to be already out, lets go out somewhere"

Maan grinned in return, "Where?"

"You'll see"

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"Maan?" A soft voice spoke from behind him, breaking the silence that he had been immersing himself in.

He didn't acknowledge the greeting, only kept his head down as he sat on his table. There were very few things that could discomfit Maan but his father was at the top of the list.

"Kab tak Maan?" Geet asked as she stepped behind him. Maan stood up abruptly, stepping away from her.

"I don't know" He still didn't glance at her. He didn't want Geet to see the weakness in his character; the inability to forgive his father when everyone else had.

But Geet was insistent. "Maan there is no benefit in holding onto such grudge." She followed him, "Yes he made mistakes but that is because he is human. It is so easy to hold those we love to high standards and to forget that they are just as fallible as anyone else."

Maan closed his eyes as he felt the familiar anger and pain go through him, "But it doesn't give anyone the right to disregard others. I don't think I have it in me to forgive him. After all he basically deserted Annie and me after mum's death, leaving me to look after her. He loved mum but didn't love us enough. Annie might be able to forgive but I was the one holding the pieces."

Then he stiffened as he felt her small hand at the back of his neck, her fingers brushing softly. As always he felt her touch deep into the marrow of his bones, the small connection inciting a reaction that made him yearn for her even deeper.

But as always he fought against the madness of his love. So he asked instead, "How did you forgive me..and the others? For all the times we told you not to marry Vicky?"

And he felt her hand stiffen before falling away. "How did I forgive you and everyone else? I forgave you all by trying to understand your reasoning. Logically I knew that everyone was looking out for me. After all no one would want a young girl to marry a terminally ill man. So I held back on the bitterness and instead just focused on Vicky." She glanced away, her heart clenching, "I was so angry then, thinking that you would take away my only chance at happiness but then I realised only I could do that"

"Have you ever regretted marrying him?" Maan felt the words burst out of him. He knew that his words had a hidden meaning that she could never understand but it was still cruel of him to ask.

She stepped back, "Never...and always. Would I trade a single moment spent with him? Never. But then I think of the life I might have had...and a part of me knows that those moment's cost more than anything I had expected. Vicky is..was..my soul mate but he was never my life partner. Woh mera humsafar nahi ban saka. But spending a lifetime with anyone else wouldn't have been an option."

"I am sorry..I shouldn't have brought that up"

Geet shook her head, "Maan no one understands your father better than I do. We both lost the love of our lives and it nearly broke us. So if you can understand my pain, you should understand his"



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