Very nice part. It had little bit of evrything bt y did u moved ahead so soon?leap so soon. Proper hm ws yet to be given in detail,n hw maan's fears were handled by geet were also to b givn in detail both were needed. Atleast b4 twist maaneet romance n passion shud hav been more than dis. Dis part had it bt vry little.
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