Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Ahan..Shaina & Aryan..Maneet's engagement surprise.. Anaya so easily accepted Geet as her Mummy...Awesome update...Waiting for next part..😊
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Maan talks to Ananya abt Geet! She is so happy! She goes to Geet! Geet thinking abt everything! Ananya accepts Geet n calls her Mama! Geet overwhelmed! Ananya chose a dress of her choice nt of Maan or Geet! Well written! update soon
Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
hey ! came to the latest update ! awesome story ! me remember reading it till riya's part and feeling really sad for maan . how everybody left him alone with his small baby and he was too afraid to go near her... lest something might happen to her. how could a mother leave new born baby with father and just leave... when she was blaming him for her another child's death... just couldnot understand ! she could have taken the baby with her right... yes, she was in coma... but after getting better ... ? is there more to come... and geet, thank god she didnot get married to that jerk , samar. maan and geet are perfect for each other... both gone through a lot... know the value of relationships and love... waiting for them to get engaged... and loved ananya... her innocent question...what is mama like daddy ...? just took my heart...
Originally posted by: SnehaMaaneet
Superb update
ive been a silent reader to ur stories till now
but i love each one of dem
will try to comment on ur works
Originally posted by: dreamy4ever
Beautiful update.
Ananya accepted geet as her mama. She n geet's sharing cute bonding 😳.Their shopping part was so adorable
Complete family pack update loved it 😊
Originally posted by: Shonameet
Luvd maans moment with ananya. His telling about her new mumma..and ananyas excitment to get geet as her mother.
Ananya calling geet "mumaa"
finally everything is good!
Maaneet holding hands infront of family... Shy geet & naughty maan.
Shoping...childish parents.. And mature kid!
And lovely friends!
Awesome!
Part 19
Maan turn to look back at Geet who was looking at him with a surprise emotion face. He wanted to ask her what she think about this proposal laid by his friends but refrained himself. His gaze went to Bi and Smriti. Bi as expected was so happy with this suggestion and eventually, that happiness was showing on her face too but he wanted to ask Smriti's consent on this matter as being a mother of Geet, She has the perfect right to put forward her thoughts. He knew may be because of the reason that they are staying in his home, Smriti didnt say much into the discussions or interfere in his matters, but he need to bring out the real her. He took steps towards Smriti who was sitting on the two seater with Bi. He bend down on his knees beside her slowly and started politely while looking into her eyes. "Aunty, What do you think about it?" Maan's question got everyone's attention. Smriti was actually shocked with his approach. Maan hold her one hand which was resting in her lap in his and started again. "Aunty, being Geet's mother, you have a right to say in every matter and plus,as my mom is not here, so I am too looking up at you to make decisions for me" His true words touched everyone's heart and made Smriti eyes got teary. She looked up from Maan to Geet who was also having tears in her eyes right now and nodded in her direction, after perfectly reading her eyes which were asking about Geet's decision. Smriti looked down at Maan and cupped his face tenderly in her hand.
How wrong she was before? Always, She tried to find her son in a man, who had never respected her as a mother and she was forcing her own blood, her own daughter to marry that selfish person. And here, the man destiny choose for her daughter, even without her asking, consider and respected her as a mother. Does she deserve such immense love? she asked herself as her thumb caress his cheek.
"I dont know Maan... what good deeds of mine have blessed with a great son like you" She moved forward and kissed his forehead as Maan closed his eyes to feel the moment. How much, he himself have craved for this love. How much he missed on this comfort, that only a mother can provide you. He was speechless and so were all others. " Aunty, your decision?" An impatient Shaina broke the trance and got Smriti's attention. "I am happy with this engagement idea...and now all I wish is for the happiness of my son and daughter" Smriti caressed his face and he smiled widely. "Yipee... so that means they are gonna get engaged with us" Aryan squealed and jumped in excitement, punching his fist in the air. All looked at his excited actions with raised brows and he stopped looking away in embarrassment as shaina shied looking down. "Actually i was excited about...hmm...Maan Geet's engagement" He look down that made everyone laugh out loud and the hugging session began.
With the finalization of engagement date, the shopping trips of the couples started. Venue's were already fixed for Shaina Aryan's engagement and as Maan and Geet themselves didn't have any relatives to call, they didn't find a need to change it. All the now needed was the engagement dresses and rings. Both couples along with Aditi and Nitin went out for shopping. Aryan and Nitin helped Maan buy a very nice light grey prince coat having light embroidery on only one side of the chest. Geet too approved of that suit with an appreciative look. Shaina and Aditi helped Geet selecting a red anarkali frock having silver and ferozi work on the edges and a ferozi broad jama var patch on the border. It had very nice churidar sleeves with churidar below. Maan heart went on to her as she tried that on. A perfect fit and an amazing combination of her skin with the color. They also got the rings and get them in their size. They had dinner outside in a trendy restaurant and enjoyed it with there chatters.
Two days later, in the office when Maan was busy discussing on the purchase issue of one of his project with Nitin and Aditi, a soft knock on the door divert there attention. Definitely, it was the door that leads to Geet's cabin. "Come In" Maan said out and the door opened, allowing Geet in. She came and stand near the desk and giving a cursory nod to Nitin and Aditi started. "Sir, Can I get a half day leave today?" Maan quickly looked up from the files at her. He don't remember her mentioning anything last night. In office, they maintain a professional code of conduct so he started in a boss like tone. "Miss. Geet? Is there an emergency?" He asked. A mused Aditi and Nitin were watching this discussion with a grin on there faces. It was looking fun seeing them behaving so formal. "No. No emergency Sir...but I have an urgent work in home...so I need a half day off" She explained hoping that he willn't ask anymore questions. Its really needed to keep this discussion getting into depth and she knew, if he asked further on, she willn't be able to lie.
Thankfully, Maan's cellphone ring that took his attention and on the other side, he had Mr. Thomas who was on a short trip in india and wanted to have a meeting with Maan right away. Maan agreed and after cutting the call, turn back to Aditi and Nitin first. "Nitin we need to stop this discussion right here...Aditi can you please bring out Mr.Thomas files...i have to go on a meeting with him tonight...and i need to read the statics before i leave...and Nitin, Please ask Aryan to be ready for tonight...He has to go with me" Nitin and Aditi nodded and left to do there work. Maan quickly collected the files placed on his table when Geet called him. "Sir...??" Her raised brows indicating that Maan still haven't answered her question. Maan pushed his hands on the table with a sigh and asked. "Why you need this leave Geet? I dont remember till last night you mentioned anything about it" Geet bit her lip "Because I wanted to take leave as Geet your secretary, not Geet...your to be fiance...I don't want anyone to raise the issue that you do favors for me" She replied honestly holding her diary in one hand and taping the pen, she was holding in another one, on it. Maan get up from his chair. He was feeling so proud of Geet right now. The much she cares about herself, equally she cares about his reputation, his name. He round up the table and get near her, took away her diary and softly hold her hands in between his. "I still don't know what i did to deserve you" His voice was genuine that made Geet smile. "Ok, you can have the half day...but after getting back home, i will make sure to know why you take this leave...I so hate driving alone now...You have to pay for that" He said with a grin that made Geet blush. After a soft caress, he left her hands and get back to his chair. "Please tell Bi that i will be late and will have dinner out..." Geet nodded and left the room, silently saying thank you to God for helping her to save from Maan's back-to-back questions.
Maan was hell busy after Geet left. He went through every file and get himself updated with the contracts going on with Mr.Thomas. In the evening, He changed himself in sleek chocolate color trousers and coat having a white shirt underneath along with a grey striped tie and went with Aryan to meet Mr.Thomas. The meeting went fine and to there happiness, Mr.Thomas was planning on a new project with his company. Maan and Aryan were elated to agree to it. After the meeting, Aryan left for his home in his own car and Maan went towards his. In last few weeks, he has got so much used to Geet's presence in his car that it was killing him to drive back home alone. During there drives, they will share there day experience, discuss about home, Ananya, there coming engagement ceremony...and today, without her chatters, he wanted to just rush back home quickly but it was almost a distance of one hour and the heavy traffic at that time was not allowing him to drive on a good pace. He switched on the radio to kill the time and heard an old soft romantic song.
ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja
meri manzil hai tu tu hi mera jahaan
ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja
ban gaye aaj ham do badan ek jaan
ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja
The song just send him to his dreamland where no one exist other than him and Geet...Surly the time was telling him again and again that they were made for eachother.
(bheega bheega aanchal aankhon ka yeh kajal ghayal na kar de mujhe
seene ki yeh huchul badhne lagi pal pal paagal na kar de mujhe) - 2
paagal toh ham ho gaye ban jaayegi dastaan
aahista bolo sanam sun lega sara jahaan
meri manzil hai tu tu hi mera jahaan
ae mere humsafar ae meri jaan-e-ja
Maan remember there picnic where for the first time, he felt that spark. Her drenched clothes exposing her body for his eyes could still send chills of excitement and passion in his body.
He remembered there kiss in his room, when he caught hold of her and they expressed there love. Her lips so soft, so rosy, so sweet. His mouth went dry with just his imagination. He is surly got hardly struck with her love. He run his hand through his thick hairs. "GOD!!! I can't wait to get married now" He said and smiled. He couldn't wait to belong to her in every way possible. Love is coming out to be an addiction for him.
He reached home around 11:15. Most of the lights were closed. Everyone seemed to be off to sleep. Maan felt strange. He put the coat on a sofa and rolling up the sleeves went towards ananya room who was sleeping sweetly in her bed. He corrected the cover and sit down to give a peck on his forehead and caressed her curly hairs. A shopping bag was placed on the small study table in her room. Maan looked at it and get up to check on it. It contained a very beautiful small silk maroon maxi which was having straps that comes around the neck. The flowery pattern on the body and glitter were adding charms and the silk below was looking extremely elegant. "So thats the reason why Geet took a half day leave...so she can go out with Ananya and choose a dress for her to wear on our engagement...Nice choice" He complimented and carefully put that back in the bag. He gave a last look to Ananya as he exit the room and close the door quietly behind.
Next he went towards Geet room that she shared with Smriti. Though he didn't wanna get in, but he need to see Geet. Just how can she go to sleep without talking to him. It felt wrong. There small little time in the backyard everyday is what they both look for the whole day now. He quietly open the door and peek in to see Geet and Smriti both were sleeping. He felt bad and pouting he closed the door and went back to his room where he took a nice shower and after changing into his night suit, hit the bed. Sleep was far away from his eyes. He was just laying in the bed, lost in his thoughts about his life when his cell beeped, signalling for a message.
He took hold of the mobile quickly and saw Geet's message.
"Meet me in the backyard in 5 minutes...Waiting :-)" A smile formed on his face as her message just filled his heart with so much love.
He get out from his bed and wearing his sleepers, went towards the backyard, making sure to not make a noise. As he stepped into there, he was shocked.
A few candles were burning on a small round table that Geet must have brought from the kitchen. A medium sized cup cake was placed on it having his favorite strawberry icing and as he reached forward, he could see a card placed beside it saying "Happy Birthday". He was overwhelmed seeing this. He has almost forgotten about his birthdate. It was almost 7 years back that he had last celebrated it. He was still lost in his world when a soft sugary voice whispered in his ears.
"Happy Birthday Maan"
Next: Romance, Engagement and Wedding date😳
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