my mini take for the epis i missed... 😆
okay here is my mini take for the past 2-3 epis i missed
good we had a gradual giving in of geet to her love...we had a slow realization of maan about the imp of letting geet understand herself...he is assured of her love for him...all he needs to do is say what he wants to and he revealed all of it in that letter- he poured himself out in that letter- which is why geet can actually feel him near her while she hears him speak. she had wanted maan to narrate a story but here- he narrates his tale- which starts and ends with her..he's simply hers..and that's all there is to it..
He leaves himself- metonymic letter and takes Geet's dupatta- metonymic for her- like they had exchanged their pyaar ki nishaanis...in the creation of hum- this is another attempt to recreate that hum- that togetherness..and that will lead to their reunion- a rebalancing, an equality, the re-establishment of maneet- not maan and geet :)
While she skids to the floor..links to the kaun jhukega dialogue...
but keeping in tangent with hum- he bends down with her and is with her when she is realizing...Geet was the blind witness in a way to maan's breakdown- he could feel her presence...
here..geet can SEE maan..from her heart's eye ( i dunno if its a dream or reality na..HAHA) n he's with her..holding her as she realizes her love is stronger than her anger...as she realizes and becomes a part of hum willingly...not by maan's 'jeet' but by his apparent 'haar'
He has ostensibly left- again- love being the reason- he can't bear her tears..so he left...and wrote a letter baring his heart..
But for Geet this is the only realization she wants...
When he's left her- it is as if a part of her has gone from her- and with the letter he leaves- he's with her...as a manifestation of his love.
When she tells him she loves him too- as he guessed she will in their convo during marham scene(for which btw..CV's THANK YOU!)
there will be a reuniting...a hug- a sign of their utter togetherness..which will lead to uh..physical intimacy
i realy liked the whole technique..
aaj kal storytelling pe attention pay kar rahe hain
the deepa jyoti story narration; then letter se idhar..its so nice...plus it's dark..and then light..so maybe the two can be connected
maan n geet together r light...they can't exist individually as happy individuals..
I like pammi n geet ki convo- a friend...a girl friend who can advise her without seeming imposing...brilliant..
n i loved the lassi metaphor! muaahz
But what's up with the others in the family?
Why r they so judgmental about something they have NO CLUE ABOUT and what's the deal with hurting geet's husband without her permission- HE HAS NO RIGHT!!!
Bas bohot hua..ab teji ko peeto koi!!
and nandini is really weird..
The actress needs to work on impressions, i felt...
I wish Lachhi could be nandini...
That girl is so adorable...
I liked dev's scene too...he looks GREAT ALONE!
I think im forgetting some stuff..but well..i dunno what to add except the letters have been written at crucial points- when the spoken words fail, they resort to written ones :D
That's all..
We need some humour in between epi scenes i think- but not intruding in the flow...
EPI TAKE FOR TODAY
Barry Dhillon, CV's, and the director, DD, GC- BRILLIANTLY portrayed emotions of the couple we love so much!!
Today's epi was a poetic masterpiece and a treat to watch.
Each expression and each line was very well portrayed- linking past, present,future and transporting geet into an eternal experience of love where flowers don't fade; where the sun and moon shine and are still accomodating; where the sights, the smells, the touch and the brain get together in poetic beauty..
Today's epi was really well done!!
here are a few lines in hindi..an attempt..lol
Khola maine woh khat jo likha aapne itne pyaar se,
har lafz, har ehsaas, jo diya mujhe is khat ke zariye
itna pyaar kahan chupaya baithe the aap?
itna pyaar kabhi kyun na jataya aapne?
har lafz mein aapke pyaar ka ehsaas,
har saans mein aapke hone ki mehak
har zarre mein aapki woh dheemi muskaan
is dil ke har kone mein aapki aankhon mein zaayar pyaar
kya lafz bayan kar payenge mere pyaar ko?
woh dard jisne diya mujhe aapka saath?
chhoda tha maine aapko jis wajah se
woh wajah hi aapne mita di hai aaj
na koi dooriyan ab humare darmiyan
sirf kuch palon ka faasla hai
tay karne ka faisla kar liya saath jab manzil ko
toh kyun in faaslon se darun main?
sama jaaungi aaj aapki baanhon mein
jab tak chaahein, mehsoos kar lijiye mujhe
rahoongi sadaa apki jaise aap hain mere
rakhungi apni dil ke andar sama kar aapko ab se
😳
Maine socha saari poetry maan ki hi kyun..haha
Maan said today that he has no wajood without geet...no identity as an individual in society, or in the world.
This easily counters those set of dialogues put by him about the khuranas etc...
He's like a ghost - typically wearing white as well- a sprite who gets life through Geet's love- who gets identity through her presence...and so while SHE acknowledges and reads and listens to his POV- he gets existence
LAter, he's in shadow until she calls out his name...she brings him to light..
The only problem i have is that why is geet given only a symbolic relevance in maan's life?
anyway- let me just go ahead with the take right now..
She took the letter out from the envelope and maan came out of shadow...
the confluence of the sensual- the touch, the auditory, the visual starts here..
She's SEEING the letter, but hearing maan speak...and through those words feeling his love...he closes his eyes at that -at the feeling of pure love that courses his veins...well..at least the soul's..haha
HE tells her about her worth that he had disdainfully denied..
She sits at the bench now...gradually from the floor to the bench..and then she stands and finally runs to maan- in gradual steps, she rises in love...
Maan talks about the most beautiful things- the olfactory through the flower ; the visual through the sun and moon; and har baat etc evokes auditory...
She's the essence- chaand ki chaandni, phool ki khushboo...
Not temporary things that die...but their essences
The lingering smell of flower, which will remain always till flowers do; the moon that has almost always given light...
and then he puts his head on her lap.. and takes her hand and puts it on her heart...
she's better than those essences..she's the essence of life so bigger..and he can't lose that life..though he loses his own.
He feels her tear on his face and wipes it away..he's there below her to receive it and then gets up and wipes them away- touching her with so much love...she can feel it..
PAIN after beauty... and he talked about the river of life- that gives so much grief it can sweep him away...through such lines, he establishes Geet's importance in his life..
He holds her dupatta and talks about physically holding her near him so she can't move away..but you can't hold chaand's chaandni in hand, you can never capture the smell of a flower forever; similarly he can never hold back geet...he needs to let her understand..can only write about how much he loves her, can only spend his life loving her and hope she comes to him and wait for her to come back to him and give him a 'wajood'
The scene that followed near the fountain was a confluence of various symbolisms of the past-
There was the fertile green plants; water- a sign of life, doves- sign of purity and love- basically all that maneet love is; light...she while reading the letter had gone into the realm of 'hum'
I loved it when he says "kudrat ko bhi kya manzoor tha." and there is the water fountain- the first time they met and how water always was there as a connecter..
When dove sits on maan's shoulder as messenger of love, it reminded me of kehna hi kya where maan had a dove too and it was geet's realization that she loved him...
She bends down and holds the letter- DOESNT TOUCH HIS FEET..THANK GOD!
And rises up completely in love.
he gets existence..
The music was when maan came riding on the horse to get geet away-dream realization...again..the dream will be realized..
BEAUTIFUL hug!!!
The scene that followed was a sensual one...that was brilliant..he carressed her ear..the rest was edited- BAD CHANNEL! but we know from the segment... he tickled her ear...um..her earring is a mango? or a crescent-? lol mango won't really make sense..but hey, they r earrings ! crescent- well..he does have his jyoti and chandni and mehak with him ,physically can be felt by her..
Khwaab- brain is also brought in and so is the visual- he would have kept all his senses at alert if he had knows the essence of life would have gone away...
and he holds her dupatta... won't leave her this time..and
"mera pyaar, meri zindagi,meri khushi, mera wajood- sab kuch tumse hai geet...jeene ki wajah tum ho geet..geet maan ke bina kuch nahi aur geet ke bina maan kuch nahi"
Equality restored :D
finally...
and now she's cool..with the wajood dialogue
" yeh maan zinda nahi rahega"
maan can't live without his essence
The taste also came through mishti haha
his jannat- where all senses , all feelings are satisfied is his life with geet and he wants her back because he knows its the same for her
and then she speaks that 1 word with so much love...
and he's not there- she's utterly alone and she's up from the 'dream' and is a nightmare.. and runs to wherever he is...and jumps to him...with utmost confidence that he'll be there to catch him..
He is the haunted spirit...haunting her...he won't go home..his spirit will not reach the body back- the home of the spirit...
his life is in wait for her- he can't literally LIVE without his essence..
he gives her the decision making faculty...
she is lifted up in love..
Phew that's it...so basically i found the writing and direction and acting v nice and technical..some dialogues were old and reused but it's okay..sab kuchh maaf
1 chotu problem-why do we need to see each and every pore of their skin?
i mean..thoda toh distance rakh sakte ho na?
😳
anyway- the epi was great cuz of this reason..or these reasons..
looking forward to geet's dialogues tomorrow..
I'm ignoring the judgmental family who likes to prejudge decisions they have no clue about
Form the promo- dev will be hit n bashed while maneet will romance..awesome! :D
I LOVED LUCKY though!
whew...that was long..sorry for writing a huge essay..hehe
Love to all!
p.s I HAAT ORANGE BALLS😕
Edited by geet.a - 13 years ago
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