FF Kyun ho gaya na *RanKan* part 18 pg 26 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
good job!

update soon plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
I hav been a VVV silent reader but i am addicted to all these FFs but I MUST say urs is MINDBLOWING!!!!!! PLEase coninue and make them longer!!!!!!!! plz!!!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
aww that was soo cute can't wait to see bd's reaction lol ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: cherrgirl2711

hi
I hav been a VVV silent reader but i am addicted to all these FFs but I MUST say urs is MINDBLOWING!!!!!! PLEase coninue and make them longer!!!!!!!! plz!!!! 👏

Thankyou so much

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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Guyz i promise I will continue tomorrow
I have had a lot of school work to do as it is our GCSE year
Thankyou for reading, commenting and bearing with me
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
oh ur welcumzzzz, kiran_1
which year are you in cause i am currently doing my IGCSEs so was quite CURIOUS.........
plz continue ASAP......
I just cannot WAIT!!!!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
I'm in year 11
We did 5 of our examz last year and we r doin th rest this year
Wat year r u in and wats ure name
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
Okay heres the next part guyz

Big D is about to eat the halwa when Malika stops her by saying

Malika: Ye halwa Ranbir ka fave hai aur aaj is ne khud banaya hai to sab halwa ye khud hi kaye ga. Ap sab log waki sab kana kain. Kanya apne haaton se apne pati ko kana kilao

KN:(thinking)God kis pagal khane me pass gayi hoon. Jab be dekho muje is cartoon ke paas bechte rahtein hai. (outloud) Ji mom

Everyone is eating the food and complimenting Ranbir on his cooking. Ranbir is feeling pretty good about himself and is thinking

RN:(thinking) Pehli baar aaj maine mom ki baat nahin maani aur itni tariff ho rahi hai. Halwa to maine khud banaya hai bohot hi acha bana hoga.

Kanya feeds him 2 spoons. Ranbir starts to chew the halwa and is about to spit it out cos it tastes disgusting. He thinks

RN:(thinking) Agar sab ke samne ye maine spit kardiya to mom ko pata chal jayga ke ye kahana maine nahin banaya sirf halwa banaya. Us ke baad woh sab ke saat mil kar band bajain gee. Kahana parega

He sits there eating after about 8 spoons hes had enough and starts to signal to kanya to come to the kitchen.

KN:(thinking)Kuch to garbar hai ab yahaan se kaise nikhlen. Idea (outloud) Ranbir woh apne kitchen mein chai rakhe ti stove par woh band to ki ti apne.

Ranbir gives her a WTF u on about look when kanya winks at him and he understands.

RN: oh crap woh to on hai

Both of them rush to the kitchen

RN: Thank you thank you (kisses her on both cheeks) bachalya tumne

KN:(shocked that he kissed her) par hua kya

RN: Dekho marna mat. Maine galti se halwe mein chini ki chaga namak use kiya

KN: Ranbir tum bi na ek halwa hi to banana ta tume woh bi nahin huwa. God ab woh sara halwa pehnk na warna mom ko pata chal jayga ke main ne tumari help ki aur tumare sath sath muje bi jhoote pareinge.

RN: Chill out baba hojayga. Just relax

KN: Yehi problem hai tumari tum kabhi koi baat seriously nahin lete. Upar se ab muje chai bi bananeen pare gi.

RN: tum halwa pehnko chai main bana loonga

KN: Nahin kya pata us mein bi tum namak dhal do

RN: Ghalti hogayee, kya tumne kabhi koi galti nahin ki. Aur upar se sorry kaha na maine aur chaiye kya tume.

KN: apne sorry apne paas rako aur ye lo halwa tum khud pehnko ayr chai bi khud banao. Mein chali kahna kane muje to bohot book lagi hai. Bye (she walks off)

RN: Samajti kya hai khud ko bloody chipkali. Koi zaroorat nahin hai muje tumari ye saab main khud kar sakht hoon. Just get lost

10 minutes later we see Ranbir covered in sugar and halwa when Malika comes in

Malika:(laughing) Ranbir ye tumne kya kiya

RN:Mom aap has rahin. Jaaye Kanya ko bulain Plzzzz

Kanya comes and starts laughing uncontrollably. Ranbir sees her and is shocked

RN:(thinking) WOW kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hai aur kitni pyaari haasi hai. Dil chahta waqt tam jaye aur main yahaan bet ka rise dektaha rahoon. God shes
gorgeous

Kanya in between laughs asks

KN: Ye sab tumne 10 minute mein kar liya? Khud ko decka hai sheeshe(mirror) main. Ao main tumara chera saaf kharti hoon.

She goes towards him laughing and slips on he halwa on the floor. Too save her RAnbir grabs her waist and she grabs Ranbirs shoulders. They stare at each other and start to get closer and closer when their lips meet.

Kanya feels at war with her brain and heart. Her heart is telling her to go with the flow whereas her brain is telling her to leave him. She tells her brain to shutup and carries on with her makeout session. Ranbir moves forward.............

Have to end it her guyz I have people round
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Sooo short! Continue soon please!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
awww tat was soooo nice...pls cont soon cos i cant wait to know wat happens next!!
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