FF Kyun ho gaya na *RanKan* part 18 pg 26

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey this is my frist FF so if theres any mistakes sorry

All the chararcters are the same as they are in the serial

FF starts from 10 March where Reve and Devika walk off after having a go at Kanya

RN-Ranbir Nanda

KN-Kanya Nanda

KN-(looks worried)

scene shifts 2 RN

RN-Picnic wonderful idea Big D ab iss chipkali ke saath aur time barbaad karna hoga. Waise ye chipkali hai kaahan. KANYA KANYA KANYA

RN sees her and

RN-kab se bula ra hoon. Ab behaari bee ho gayi ho

Notices KN is tense

RN-mu lat ka kar kyun kari ho ab kya huwa.

KN-(gettin mad) tumari pyaari reva bhabhi aur woh devika ne abhi abhi keh kar gayi hai ke woh hamari contract marriage ka pol chald sab ke samne khol ne waali hain.

RN-ab yeh ek aur musibaat kahan pas gaya hoon main bagwan

KN-eh helllo ye shaadi ka mind blowing idea tumara ta ab bugto

RN-ye sab tumare us gunde bhai Guru ki waja se huwa ha. Use ja kar apni saari huwee baatein ja kar sunow

KN-Guru ne ye to nahi kaha ke tum mujse shaadi karo, yeh tumaari galti hai. Shaadi kee to choro. Shaadi ke baad kee baat karte hain. Plan to yeh nahin ta ke shaadi ko hum 2 ya 3 din baad torde den ge lekin tumare chote se dimaag se jitne bee idea nikle ek daam gatya aur flop tein. Aur ab ye do churalian huamre baand bachayen gee. Ek dum uloo ho tum.

RN-baat to tumahre teekh hai par unse ab hum kaise chutkara paayein

KN-tum abi kuch bee nahi socho ge. Ab jo kuch karna ya sochna wo me khud karoon gee samje

Both start pacing forwards and backwards

KN-(shouts) Idea........... Na wont work

RN-pata tha chipkali tum kuch nahi soch pao gi. Bloody 2 by 2

KN-are saand tum muje bato ke tumare kitne idea te aur kitne superhit hain.

RN goes red and gets embaresed

KN-ab kyun hogaya moon band. Now just shutup and let me think

yahhan ao maine kuch socha hai (she whispers to him)

RN-No way main ye nahi karoonga. Tum main............Never

KN-eh gaande muje be koi shok nahi par majburi main gaade ko bee baap banana parta hai

RN-tum ne muje gaada kaha

KN-please main tumhe gaada key ke gaade ki insult nahi karna chati. Ab apna moon band rakna warna mein khud mummyji ko sab kuch baatoingi. Massage palour waali baat par ek tappar (ranbir grabs his cheek) para ta is baar daande pareinge aur woh ek bee nahin par dus sabse samje.

RN stands finger on mouth

KN-ab plan shuru kaarein

RN raises hand like a school kid.

KN-bako

RN-shuru to kaarein ge par..........

KN-daande nahin kaane to chalo

They walk 2 the lawn where every1 is doin theire own thing and

I will continue after u tell me what u think

Theres no point me writing if u guyzz dont like it

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BeingChevi thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kool I luv it. Write more ASAP n plz remind me to cum n check the next update! k?
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XDXDXD
lol love it
i can soooo imagine this happen in real lol
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Haha.....Great thing....Continue it..😳
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I will continue 2morrow i promise
I would do it now bu i have 2 essays to d
sorry
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i loved it... it was funny... i can imagine kanya saying the dialogue.... pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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First thanks 2
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Thanx 4 ure commentz guys
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On the ground Kanya sees a running hose pipe and picks it up

KN(whisper)-ab is saand ko mai maaza jaakati hoon

Ranbir notices Kanya with the hose and shouts

RN-dont u dare kanya

On his shout all the family turn around to see kanya wetting ranbir and burst out laughing and Eva and Slok film them

Kanya chases ranbir suddeenly the water stops and

RN-ab main nahin tumhe chodoonga

Kanya screams and runs as fast as she can ranbir chases they get to a distance where the family cant hear them or see them

They high five each other

KN-phase one successful

RN-phase one to succesful hogaya par muje itna beegone ki kya zaroorat te tumhe agar muje pnemonia huwa to

KN-tum mar jao ge aur is darti se ek bodge ut jaye ga
ab apna mu band karo ar phase 2 shru karte hain, apne shirt ke do button kholo aur wahan jake kya kehna hai pata to hai na tumhe

RN-pata hai

They walk to the house when malika(mk) calls them

MK- Ranbir bata tum dono kahaan ja re ho yaan ao hum ek game khel ne wale hain

RN-woh mom baad mein kanya ko kapre change karne hai aur slok ne kaha hai ke mera ek phone hai

MK-acha jao

Slok-daadi phone lines dead hain aur mobile network be kaam nahi karta to phone kahaan se ayga

Eva- aur kanya ke to bilkul teek hain par chachu shirt ke button khule te kahain woh romance karne to nahin jare chalo slok ja ke film karte hain

Big D- hain chalo muje mere party ke film pe yeh chaiye kya kehta hai ranbir hain Big d ap muje kabi kisi ladki saath karte nahin dekhen gi aur agar deke to 2 dinon ka kahan main khud banownga

Malika, slok, eva, reva, big d, shanaya,ayan and devika all walk toward Ranbirs room window and stand outside

When.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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whenn.... omg plezzzzzzz cont soon!!
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hey i just read both parts and there great....plzz continue! i wonder what there plan is! 😕
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