~~Desire~~AK last part pg56 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey just finish reading the part....man I really wnat to read more....plz do continue soon!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

Hey just finish reading the part....man I really wnat to read more....plz do continue soon!! 😊

aww i'm really glad you like well i'm udating now hope you enjoy this part aswell ..😊 and plz continue to comment i luv reading everyones comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5

She met up with her two buddies and headed to class but to her surprise there was a substitute … she felt like crying wait why should she care right its only a crush … it sounded pretty sad having a crush on you teacher she had to admit .

The class slowly dragged on when there was an interruption….
It was him!!!
...he made his way in, thanking the sub and telling him to go since his was here

A- sorry guys I know you were all disappointed (looking at Kripa while trying to suppress a grin from appearing upon his lips) that I didn't show up right?
All the girls except for kripa and Aaliya- Yes!!, how pathetic seriously..lol

Kripa just ignored his last comment and pretend she didn't care even though she felt like screaming and jumping up and down.

So the class proceeds on ……… there is around 15 mins of the class left when he says

A- so where done for the day...so anyone trying out for the dance part in the talent show?

Aa- Kripa is she screamed

Angad who couldn't help but laugh at Aaliya sudden outburst and the image of kripa dancing where kripa felt like beating him up what was so funny with the fact of her dancing…

Aa- "No sir she is pretty good you know , she always enters it and normally wins except for last year when it was both a teacher and student talent show then Miss Carol had won"… Angad grinned instantly after he heard "except for last year when it was both a teacher and student talent show then Miss Carol had won" and whispered under his breath "well I guess I'll decide whose the best"…
TRINGG!! TRINGG!!
A- okay guys make sure you finish your papers by tomorrow or else you'll have to stay after school tomorrow to finish it
Kripa and Aaliya walk off to the dance studio, where kripa would show Aaliya her dance just to make sure it was perfect.

Kripa played the music …
She danced to "Mayya" from the movie Guru (sorry couldn't think of any other song so my sis told me to put this one since it's her fav lolz)


And the song plays (not the whole song)

"thoo neel samundar hai main reth ka saahil hoon
aaghosh mein le le main der se pyaasi hoon
(ek saudsa raat kas, ek kaudi chaand ki
chaahe toh choom le, tu todi chaand ki) - 2
ek chaand ki kashthi mein chal paar utarna hai
tu halke halke khenaa dariyaa na chalke
(mayya mayya gulabi taaren chun le saare chun
maaya mayya ki jism ke pardon mein dardon ke maarey chunle) - 2

jab neel samunder jaage aaghosh melekar sahir
lehraathaa hai aur masti mein mehtaab ka chehra choomthan hai
meri seene mein tere saasein bhar leti hoon
karwat karwat main tujh se lipatkar raat basarkar lethi hoon
maaya maaya mayya maayy
seene seemere uthataa hai dhuwaan
mayya mayya mayya maay
deewar pe kya likhthaa hai dhuwaan
dheemaa dheemaa dheemaa dhuwaan
har baar yeh kyaa kehtaa hai dhuwaan
mayya mayya ale le le le
ek saudaa raat kaa, ek kaudi chaand ki
chaahe toh choom le, tu todi chaand ki
ek megh ki kashthi mein chal paar utarna hai
tu halke halke khenaa dariyaa na chalke

mayya mayya – 2"…………

After the song finshes Aaliya who is clapping and screaming and hugging kripa says

Aa-"omgshh you will so beat everyone including Miss Carol"

K- who was confused said" what do you mean miss Carol"

Aa- "oh don't tell me you haven't heard the Prof. who is head for the Dance Admissions asked the principal to make it a student/teacher talent show

K-omgshh are you serious just wait till I see the Prof. gosh great I'm so not gonna win

Aa- omgshh Kripa think positive yaar you'll do great newaiz you know what ya wearing for the performance

K-nah I don't I was thinking of going this week to get me outfit wanna come with me?

Aa- Yeh of course why not and we can also shop for our dresses for the first dance of the year but guess what there will be Prof. chaperoning the dance ….I know right how dumb I mean where not kids anymore where in college… yeah newaiz I heard Angad was one of them, all the girls are already planning what to wear seriously the poor girls don't even know they don't have a chance with him...pathetic I tell you… I think he likes Miss Carol n she likes him too I always see them talking in the hall.

At that moment when she hear his name a smile appeared upon Kripa's lips but changed When she heard Miss Carol's name

Aa- seeing her face expression- "what are you thinking about"

K- oh nothing lets go to class

So they go to their last class after it finish Aaliya goes home where Kripa goes to the room where the auditions were being held … she opens the door when she is shocked to see……

well here the next part.. i know its a bit short well hope you guyz like it pleases continue to comment encourages me to write more
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
i just read ur ff it is awesome......i really love it.........the way angad is telling kripa abt her cloths was funny.......continue soon i can't wait 2 see wat is so shocking 4 kripaaaa........i think it might be angad n miss Carol or only angad.........continue soon &n bsp; continue soon
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
ANGAD ritee!!lolz

its the kripa-angad-carol triangle.. who is carol anywayz?? great fanfic!

continue sooooooonnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Gr8 part..... wonder hus she saw...angad mayb???
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
wowo... i just read ur whole FF... nd i LOVE it!!! it is AWESUM... nd
storyline is REALLY unique!!! 👏
👏 i LOVE Angad's attitude... nd the way
he annoys Kripa is just HOT!!! i LOVE it!!! 😳 i CANNOT wait to read
more... cotninue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
omg i just read the whole fan fic and i thought it was really good. i really like the concept of a teacher likeing and student and a student likeing a teacher. what i like even more about the story is that the age differce isnt like eeeeewwwww a billion years off but the age differnce is really close so it seems more real. i have to say it is just a wonderful story concept. as for kripa being shocked and every thing i think it is because she will find out that Angad is the prof. that is jugying the comptishion and i thing that is so cool. i have to say this story it really cute and makes me all giggley every time i read that Kripa has just become imbarrassed or something, please continue soon i just cant wait for the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
she sees ms carol lady and angad making out yup i think that or maybe something anyways contiue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
i just read all of it and it is simply awesome im loving it. please do continue!
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