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Posted: 17 years ago
awww...such a lovely update...thank you so much dear...
i must say..i have read so many ff but this remains my favourite..of all.. 😳

plz update soon..
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that was a great part continue soon...ong i take back about the part where angad should have still been a prof. lol i like it better now that angad and kripa are liveing togeter it makes the story just as mush hotter and more like aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh cant believe they are liveing together...i bet every time kripa gets ten feet close to angad he will try to do something 😳 tooooooo gooooddddddd you have to contiue soon πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
OOOHHH That was HOT and Intense! 😳 😳 😳
Kripa in a towel and Angad leaning over her... 😳 😳
Hailaaaaa, main mar gayi---A-K in same apartment in rooms next to each other! Now Angad cant keep his hands off her anymore!
Kripa forgot to lock her bedroom door while Angad is in the flat? πŸ˜‰ Didnt she know he would barge in..

Waiting for ur next part breathlessly πŸ˜ƒ ----do post it soon...hope something hot and sexy happens between the two... 😳 😳

Pallavi
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing parts aint it a small world loved it great work con asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg just read last two parts! wow that was a twist but i gotta say i loveeeeeeeeee your ff's angad!! he is sooo damn hot!! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

hehe angad is hott and naughtyy!!

can u please explain why angad left?? and what is he doing in london?? and how does he know mishti??

lol sorry i have a lot questions

great part!! πŸ‘

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....he sure is lolz thanks!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: monikaseth

hey nice part agin πŸ‘ πŸ‘

thank youuuuuπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›πŸ˜Š

Originally posted by: Kaj!

lol angad is such a chipkoo. poor kripa, receiving many frights in one day. jhatke pe jhatka lolz πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....lolz hehehe yes poor kripa lol πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

awww...such a lovely update...thank you so much dear...
i must say..i have read so many ff but this remains my favourite..of all.. 😳

plz update soon..

awwww thank you😳..thats like the sweetest comment evaπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: Rejected

that was a great part continue soon...ong i take back about the part where angad should have still been a prof. lol i like it better now that angad and kripa are liveing togeter it makes the story just as mush hotter and more like aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh cant believe they are liveing together...i bet every time kripa gets ten feet close to angad he will try to do something 😳 tooooooo gooooddddddd you have to contiue soon πŸ‘

thank yaπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...lol i'm glad you changed your mind hehehehe...aww thanks 😳....actually it's more like they play hard to get well angad does but then againπŸ˜‰

thank youuu!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: pallavi25

OOOHHH That was HOT and Intense! 😳 😳 😳
Kripa in a towel and Angad leaning over her... 😳 😳
Hailaaaaa, main mar gayi---A-K in same apartment in rooms next to each other! Now Angad cant keep his hands off her anymore!
Kripa forgot to lock her bedroom door while Angad is in the flat? πŸ˜‰ Didnt she know he would barge in..

Waiting for ur next part breathlessly πŸ˜ƒ ----do post it soon...hope something hot and sexy happens between the two... 😳 😳

Pallavi

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... thanks!!!!😳... hehe yeh she's abit forgetful lolz .....somehting hot and sexy will happen between the two but not soo sooon πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part


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sana

thank you!!!πŸ˜ƒ

thankssssss!!!😊

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing parts aint it a small world loved it great work con asap

πŸ˜†yep sure is a small world.....thank you!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›

Originally posted by: Numera*

omg just read last two parts! wow that was a twist but i gotta say i loveeeeeeeeee your ff's angad!! he is sooo damn hot!! continue soon!

aww thanks!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³πŸ˜›....lol yep he isπŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 21

K- GET OFF ME!!!

A- Just looks at her passionately, which makes kripa really nervous, and then he burst out laughing holding his stomach

A- Did you really think I want to hold you…sorry sweetheart I've moved on

And he continues to laugh and heads out of his room leaving a very hurt kripa

"what does he think, like I wanted him, such a liar , "moved on Yeh rite" that's why his always trying to touch me but we shall see now whose really moved on , wait moved on from what, nothing happened between us, aah he is just too complicated", she thought in her head

She made her way out to find Angad eating the food

K- What are you doing, that mine

A- Whoa someone's a pig

K WHAT

a- well I mean two subs? Unless you made it for me

K- Uumm.mm no I didn't

A- Aww you so did….. Aww your such a sweetheart, thanks

And he walks to the TV and watches a game, kripa on the other hand jut storms with her sandwich and goes into her room.


It was and hour till both her Angad would leave for the club to meet. She decided to take out her strapless black dress, with her high heels, and sliver jewelry.

She came out of the bathroom a few minutes later looking absolutely stunning. Her hair was straightened and she had make up on which made her even more beautiful. She was done; she opened her door and made her way to the living room to wait for Angad as he was still getting ready.

Few minutes he entered looking hot, wearing a black collard shirt, with baggy jeans (not too baggy…lol), his hair was spiked, and he wore his stud earring in his left ear.

Angad who saw kripa looking at him dreamingly just grinned and said,

A- Kripa I know I look hot, but seriously sweetheart I think you should change (he was joking)

K – Please what do you mean you look like a monkey ("a very hot monkey", she thought), and what do you mean I have to change

A- Well either that dress makes you fat or you're just fat he said grinning

K- WHAT, (calmly) what do you mean, this dress doesn't make me look fat but shows my curves, she said proud of her body

A- Raising and eyebrow/smirking- Oh really?

K- Yes really, but guess you'll never find out, now if your done meet downstairs in the car park (it was and under basement car park for the residents)

And with that she left Angad who was smiling mischievously at her previous comment.



Kripa is still waiting for Angad for the last 10 minutes, yet still no sign from him

"Idiot, what's taking him so long ", she said to her self
She decided to go back upstairs as she was tired of waiting for him; she made her way to the lift that was in the car park. She pressed the button and faced to her left waiting for the lift to reach the cark park she heard the ding and was about to turn her face when she felt an arm grab her around the waist. It was Angad smiling mischievously, which she didn't like even though it mad him look even hotter.

K- What **** is this leave me, and what took you so long

A- Sshh, so what were you saying up stairs huh, grinning

K- What are you talking about?

A- Oh nothing except for the fact that I wouldn't be able to know if you had curves, he said smiling like the devil

K- Thought of playing along, she puts her hand around his neck and says, oh well honey you know I was just telling the truth you know and she pushes him to move but he just brings her back

A- oh really, and then he places his hands on her waist , caressing it, making kripa blush, and then he starts as if he were trying to lift her dress up trying to see her curves, kripa who becomes nervous again says

K- What are doing?

A- Trying to prove you wrong

K (building confidence) – coming closer to him, well I thought you moved on? so how about you check some other girls curves okay
And with that the lift door opens and kripa just pushes him and heads her way to the car while Angad just smiles and follows her.

They both reach the car and get seated and they drive off.

Car ride

A- so kripa found yourself any Romeo

K- What's it to you huh?

A- Jeeze nothing can't a friend ask

K- Umm who said were are friends, psshht please never

A- Aww kripa darling I know you wanna be more than friends but like I said I've moved on

K- Please I want nothing to do with you, and what do you mean you've moved on

A- omgshh kripa your so dumb , how can you forget our attraction towards each other, well I've moved on from that, so many hot girls here you see wasn't that hard he said grinning

K- Whateva, gosh don't know how Di lives with you seriously

A- Well the way you're living with us right now

K- Omgshh just sshh and drive idiot

A- Who you calling idiot miss dumbo

K- Aah, you're just too impossible

The rest of the car ride was silent except for the music that was playing from the radio in the background that was

Song- Step up- Samantha Jade – movie" step up"(omgshh I loved this movie and boy channing Tatum is so fyne. lolz)

(Step Step Step Up)
This is somethin for the radio
(Step Step Step Up)
This is somethin for the radio
(Step Step Step Up)
This is somethin for the radio
(Step Step Step Up)

[Chorus>
Boy, no matter what we go through
You step up I'll step up too
It don't matter what the haters say
As long as you are my boo
And no matter how hard it gets
This love will have no regrets
As long as when we steppin on the dancefloor
It's me and you

Feel the rhythm of the beat, that's my heart
Cupid shot me with the arrow from the start
And you know that it's your love that's got me trapped
Everytime I try to leave you bring me back
So much water at times I cried a river
You dried my eyes and brought me back to laughter
And when I lay next to you I wanna wake up
And when I break up it's only to make up

[Chorus>

If we don't step up we'll loose our groove
So confused don't know which way to move
Pull my hand and let me know you feel me too
Look into my eyes and tell me baby I love you
Never get wet cuz I'll be your umbrella
We can make it through any kind of weather
You step up I'll step up boy
Cuz I'm tryin to be with you forever

[Chorus>

When I step in a place, I feel my feet
Lifting from underneath
You grab my hands, spin me round
And right before I fall
You catch me and you say
Baby, it'll be okay
Just look into my eyes
And we will make another day

[Chorus>x2

Step Up
This is somethin for the radio
(Step Step Step Up)
This is somethin for the radio
This is somethin for the radio
(Step Step Step Up)

[Chorus>
They finally had reached the club where they met mishti, she looked nice she was with her Bf Karthick (not important)

M- hey guys … what took you so long?

K- oh wo…

M- never mind…kripa meet my love Karthick

K- Hello

Ka- hey kripa.. Nice meeting you

K- Same with you

Ka to Angad- hey wassup man

A- Hey dude nuthin much…hows it going

Ka- all good how about you

A(looking at kripa, smirking) – very good

M- Okay lets go in now

All four head their way and make their way to a table in the club and sit themselves down

Ka- so what do you want to do first,

A- Hmm think I'm gonna help the Dj out the music is **** here
And he leaves

Ka- mishti how about a dance

M- Kripa do you mined

K- No not at all you guys enjoy yourself

Kripa looks at Angad who now is the Dj '

A- Hey all you guys wassup… hows everyone doing tonight, well hope you enjoy the music and have a blast

And here puts a song on (btw it's an Indian club…lol)

Song- Abh toh Forever , Movie- Ta ra rum pum

tum hi tum ho jo raaho mein
tum hi tum ho nigaaho mein
kis din toh mere dil ko khona hi tha
tumhe dekha, tumhe chaaha, tumhe dhunda, tumhe paaya
tumhe paake huwa hai jo woh hona hi tha
chalo abb jo bhi ho, tum haa yaa naa kaho
mere dil mein tum hi tum ho
abb toh forever
bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam, bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam

kabhi koshish bhi mat karana mujhe paane ki
mujhe na paa sakoge tum
banaake surat ghumoge tum deewaane ki
kahi pe na rahoge tum
chalo abb jo bhi ho, tum haa yaa naa kaho
mere dil mein tum hi tum ho
??abb toh forever
bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam, bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam

bahot hai chaahanewaale mere duniya mein
tumhe dekhu toh kyun dekhu
jamin aur aasamaan mein faasale jitane hai
samajha lo dur utani hoon
chalo abb jo bhi ho, tum haa yaa naa kaho
mere dil mein tum hi tum ho
abb toh forever
bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam, bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam
tum hi tum ho jo raaho mein
tum hi tum ho nigaaho mein
kis din toh mere dil ko khona hi tha
tumhe dekha, tumhe chaaha, tumhe dhunda, tumhe paaya
tumhe paake huwa hai jo woh hona hi tha
chalo abb jo bhi ho, tum haa yaa naa kaho
mere dil mein tum hi tum ho
abb toh forever
bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam, bring it on....
jaana abb toh forever, bring it on....
??abb forever sanam


As the song plays kripa spots Angad looking at her leaving her blushing, thinking the song was going out to her. Angad just smirks and goes down to dance with some of the girls whom he had seen before in the club since he would Dj here often , which angered kripa,

" still a flirt" she said to herself,

Then one hot guy comes up to her and askes her for dance.
Kripa wasn't sure wehter to accept but when she saw Angad dancing with the other the girls she accepted.
She and the guy whose name was Ronak made their way to the middle of the dance floor when the song changes to a faster beat

Song – jhoom barabar jhoom movie - jhoom barabar jhoom



jhoom baraabar jhoom jhoom jhoom.....
(kar dhoom dhamaaka, ho jaaye tamaasha
chhod gulle begi tu aaj ka baadashaah) - 3

o re masti mein aaj jhoomo re
arre masti mein aaj jhoomo re
tu bin bajaake jhoom, ya tin bajaake jhoom
woh ek lagaaye thumaka, tu tin lagaake jhoom
ho saare gum gum saare choom le, phir ghoom le
aaj jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re....
jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom - 2
jhoom baraabar jhoom jhoom jhoom.....

?? hai, ishq hai, aashiqi hai, aiyaashi hai
aiyaashi hai chaaro dil choro ki talaashi hai
baaji mehangi lagi hai, aadi sidhi lagi hai
tu bin bajaake jhoom, ya tin bajaake jhoom
woh ek lagaaye thumaka, tu tin lagaake jhoom
ho saare gum gum saare choom le, phir ghoom le
aaj jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re....
jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom - 2
jhoom baraabar jhoom.....

ghumaaya hai raat ka chkka jo chalaaya hai
chalaya hai chaand ko daav pe lagaaya hai
??? khulane lage hain, ?? tulane lage hain
tu bin bajaake jhoom, ya tin bajaake jhoom
woh ek lagaaye thumaka, tu tin lagaake jhoom
ho saare gum gum saare choom le, phir ghoom le
aaj jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re....
jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom baraabar jhoom - 2
jhoom baraabar jhoom jhoom jhoom.....

through out the song Angad and kripa just steal glances of each other not to know what to feel, the song changes again

song- Deewana Teri Aankhon Ka Main movie- kya lovestory hai

do you feel me - 4
(deewana teri aankhon ka main jaanejaana
deewana teri baaton ka main jaanejaana) - 2
saathiya muh mod ke, na door ja dil todke
nazdik aa sab chod ke jaanejaana
do you feel me - 4

na subhon ka pata, raaton ki khabar
dil ne jab tujhse dil lagaya
kyun koi bhi hasin jachti hi nahi
jismo jaan pe tera jadu chhaaya
tu hi mera pyaar hai, tera intezaar hai
meri jeet haar hai, teri baaahon mein
do you feel me - 4

main, main na main rahoon
tu, tu na tu rahe
saasein meri tujhse aaye jaaye
tu, tu bhi to kabhi bhoole se sahi
mujhpe karde in palkon ke saaye
tu bhi mujhse pyar kar
muijhse aakhein chaar kar
mere intezaar kar, meri raaho mein
do you feel me - 4
(deewana teri aankhon ka main jaanejaana
deewana teri baaton ka main jaanejaana) - 2
saathiya muh mod ke, na door ja dil tod ke
nazdik aa sab chod ke, jaanejaana
do you feel me - 4


And the song ended kripa said thanks to the guy and walk off to the bar to get a drink

***guys just to remind Kripa is 20 now and Angad still is 22 turning 23 soon***


She heads her way to the bar and orders her drink , when she hears a voice behind her, it was Angad she knew his voice

A- so enjoying ya self

K- sure am .. so many hotties don't know who to choose

A- oh really shame you can't dance with the hottest though

K- and why is that

A- coz he doesn't want to dance with him

K- and who is the person

A- grinning "me of course"

K- Well darling , kripa doesn't want to dance with you and she walked off with style back to the table where mishti and Karthick was sitting , Angad followed her after getting himself a drink

M- hey guys me and Karthick were thinking to leave and go back home are you gonna come or not

A- nah I'll stay

K- yeh mee too I was bored in the day so I'll stay

M- okay well both of you come home together
A/K- alright

And with that mishti and Karthick left and it was now Angad and kripa alone at the table


As the hours past kripa was jus sitting on the table bored looking at Angad flirt with girls while dancing with them, she had enough she was bored and kind of tiered. She went up to him and said

K- Angad I want to go home now

A- omgshh kripa the fun has just begun we will go in a while

K- no I'm bored

A- well it's not my problem no one is dancing with you

Kripa was hurt from this but continued saying, - but I want to go now a bit angrily

A- stop being such a party pooper (lol) , go home your self

Kripa just had enough

K- FINE

And she left, Angad tied to stop her he remembered what mishti had said

A- Wait kripa come will go home

K- No thanks I don't need your help

A- I'm sorry for being mean

K- Stop following me

Kripa walks one step when she falls on her ankle

K- Oww

Ronak who was actually heading himself home as well saw her and ran over to her before Angad could which bugged him

R- Are you okay?

K- I don't know

R- can you walk

K- I don't think so

R- umm I can drop who home

K- thanks that would be great, she tries to get but screams in pain

R- Here I'll pick you up

And he does while Angad just stares on feeling a pang of jealousy hit his heart while kripa grins at him , see kripa really didn't hurt her leg that bad that she couldn't walk she thought she just wanted to bug Angad, which kind of worked .


okay so guys here was the next part i tried and made it long for you ...i hope i did lol...please comment!!! and again i didn't proof read oh and some of use probably know but i started a third fanfic because this one is ending soon , well my new was is more of a mystery story of AK and it's called .')AnOnYmOuS('. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/634976/anonymous-aklastprtp14- do check it out
Numera* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part loveeeeeeed it!!! lol i love the jealousy game lol soo fun!! continue soon!
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good for him
keep it up kripa.... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
wht? angad has moved on....noooooo plz tell me he is lying 😭

and u said..u will end the ff soon..how soon.. 😭
I love this ff...
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