Meeting my ex
I dedicate this OS to Silverbell who wanted me to write a story on Paras Kalnawat-Surbhi Jyoti.
Raj's phone rang.He picked up the call.
"Raj...it's me".
Hearing her voice,Raj became emotional.
Raj:Palak!
Palak:Ya...your ex.I...I feel like seeing you.Can we meet?
Raj:Yes...sure.
Palak smiled.
Raj:Really you feel like seeing me?
Palak was silent for a moment.
Palak:At 7 0' clock shall we meet at the restaurant where we used to have our dinner date?
Raj:That's the best place to meet.We will meet there.
Palak smiled.
Palak:Bye!Will see you there in the evening.
Raj:Bye!
She cut the call.
Flash back....
Raj blasted at Palak:Stop advising me like an oldie Palak.Sometimes you behave like a mother
Palak:When the boyfriend behaves like an irresponsible kid,the girl friend has to be a mother.
And you called an oldie.Right?Yes,I am older than you.After knowing our age difference only you got into a relationship with me.Right?Now you have a problem with me.
Raj:It's not like that Palak.Our ideologies do not match because of the generation gap.
Palak:But I do not belong to an early generation Raj.We just have 9 years difference.
Raj:That makes a lot of difference Palak.
His words pricked her heart.She suppressed her pain and did not let tears own her eyes.
Palak:Ya.Actually you are right.That's why we are not able to tolerate each other.So let us get separated.
Raj was shocked.
Raj said painfully:A break up!I did not mean it Palak.
Palak:That's what you indirectly meant.
Raj:No Palak.
Palak:Today you called me an oldie.Before you call me a grandmother I should leave from your life.
Raj became upset.
Raj:No Palak.
Palak:Good bye Raj.
Palak walked away angrily.
Raj became upset.His eyes were full of tears.He was so numb that he could not stop her from leaving.
Present...
Raj went to the restaurant.Palak reached there.Both looked at each other.Unknowingly they both became very emotional.
Palak:Raj!
Raj smiled emotionally:Palak!
They shared an emotional eye lock.
They sat down to have dinner.
Raj ordered Roti and dal.
Palak was surprised.
Palak:You used to like only oily non veg.But now...
Raj:You told me to have healthy food.But I was so irritated that I never listened to you.But as time passed I realised that you were right and I was wrong.So I changed.
She smiled.
While having dinner,they talked.
Raj:I think you have not changed.
Palak:Ya.I am the same boring oldie.
Raj's face became pale.
Raj:That day when I got angry I said something.But I really did'nt mean it.I swear Palak.I had never thought of break up.
Palak said painfully:It was my ego which made me break up with you.I should not have left you.
Raj:It is my fault.I should have stopped you from leaving.
Palak:You tried to stop me.But I did not listen.
Raj:Did you ever regret breaking up with me?
Palak:I was missing you.So maybe yes.
Raj:I also missed you.So I regretted talking to you with disrespect.You advised me a lot.That was for my own good.I realised it much later.
Palak:I also realized that I was controlling you too much and treating you like a small kid.I should have given you more space.Too much of strictness ruins peace of mind.I was wrong in handling you.
They both looked at each other painfully.
Raj:What do you do now?
Palak:I work in the same company.What about you?
Raj:I am working in Technopark.
Palak:Really?I am surprised.
Raj:You thought I was the same irresponsible jobless boy?I realized that to live a life we need to be more responsible and mature.And when I started ageing,I went with the flow.
Palak:This is the Raj I wanted to see.
He smiled.
Raj:Palak,on the phone I asked you whether you really felt like seeing me.You did not reply.
Palak:Yes Raj.That's why I called you here.
Raj smiled.
Raj:I really felt nice to hear that you wanted to see me.Because I was also longing to see you.
They shared a deep eye lock.
They washed their hands.
Palak:Happy to spend time with you after a long time Raj.
Raj:Me too Palak.The time we spent together was always special for me.
She smiled.
Palak:Bye Raj!
Raj:Bye!
Both were very sad.
Palak turned back to go.Suddenly Raj called her.
Raj:Palak!
Palak looked at him.
Raj:You said that you missed me.Does that mean you love me now also?
Palak became emotional.
Palak:Yes Raj.Even now I love you.
Raj became emotional.
Raj:I also love you Palak.
Palak:I know that.That's why you came here to meet me and started changing yourself keeping my advises in mind.
Raj:I became responsible like you wanted.Then what is stopping you from getting back to me?Why can't we get back to each other?
Palak looked at him in disbelief.
Palak:Raj!
Raj:I promise that I will not hurt your feelings again.
Palak:I promise that I will not hurt you also.
Raj:Then?
She was silent.
He extended his hands towards her.Palak ran into his arms emotionally.They had an emotional embrace.
The end
Meeting my ex(Yash Acharya-Sonarika version)
I dedicate this OS to Salley who wanted me to post my story 'Meeting my ex' on Yash Acharya-Sonarika.Thank you so much Salley for Yash's pics without which this OS would not have been possible.
Raj's phone rang.He picked up the call.
"Raj...it's me".
Hearing her voice,Raj became emotional.
Raj:Palak!
Palak:Ya...your ex.I...I feel like seeing you.Can we meet?
Raj:Yes...sure.
Palak smiled.
Raj:Really you feel like seeing me?
Palak was silent for a moment.
Palak:At 7 0' clock shall we meet at the restaurant where we used to have our dinner date?
Raj:That's the best place to meet.We will meet there.
Palak smiled.
Palak:Bye!Will see you there in the evening.
Raj:Bye!
She cut the call.
Flash back....
Raj blasted at Palak:Stop advising me like an oldie Palak.Sometimes you behave like a mother
Palak:When the boyfriend behaves like an irresponsible kid,the girl friend has to be a mother.
And you called an oldie.Right?Yes,I am older than you.After knowing our age difference only you got into a relationship with me.Right?Now you have a problem with me.
Raj:It's not like that Palak.Our ideologies do not match because of the generation gap.
Palak:But I do not belong to an early generation Raj.We just have 9 years difference.
Raj:That makes a lot of difference Palak.
His words pricked her heart.She suppressed her pain and did not let tears own her eyes.
Palak:Ya.Actually you are right.That's why we are not able to tolerate each other.So let us get separated.
Raj was shocked.
Raj said painfully:A break up!I did not mean it Palak.
Palak:That's what you indirectly meant.
Raj:No Palak.
Palak:Today you called me an oldie.Before you call me a grandmother I should leave from your life.
Raj became upset.
Raj:No Palak.
Palak:Good bye Raj.
Palak walked away angrily.
Raj became upset.His eyes were full of tears.He was so numb that he could not stop her from leaving.
Present...
Raj went to the restaurant.Palak reached there.Both looked at each other.Unknowingly they both became very emotional.
Palak:Raj!
Raj smiled emotionally:Palak!
They shared an emotional eye lock.
They sat down to have dinner.
Raj ordered Roti and dal.
Palak was surprised.
Palak:You used to like only oily non veg.But now...
Raj:You told me to have healthy food.But I was so irritated that I never listened to you.But as time passed I realised that you were right and I was wrong.So I changed.
She smiled.
While having dinner,they talked.
Raj:I think you have not changed.
Palak:Ya.I am the same boring oldie.
Raj's face became pale.
Raj:That day when I got angry I said something.But I really did'nt mean it.I swear Palak.I had never thought of break up.
Palak said painfully:It was my ego which made me break up with you.I should not have left you.
Raj:It is my fault.I should have stopped you from leaving.
Palak:You tried to stop me.But I did not listen.
Raj:Did you ever regret breaking up with me?
Palak:I was missing you.So maybe yes.
Raj:I also missed you.So I regretted talking to you with disrespect.You advised me a lot.That was for my own good.I realised it much later.
Palak:I also realized that I was controlling you too much and treating you like a small kid.I should have given you more space.Too much of strictness ruins peace of mind.I was wrong in handling you.
They both looked at each other painfully.
Raj:What do you do now?
Palak:I work in the same company.What about you?
Raj:I am working in Technopark.
Palak:Really?I am surprised.
Raj:You thought I was the same irresponsible jobless boy?I realized that to live a life we need to be more responsible and mature.And when I started ageing,I went with the flow.
Palak:This is the Raj I wanted to see.
He smiled.
Raj:Palak,on the phone I asked you whether you really felt like seeing me.You did not reply.
Palak:Yes Raj.That's why I called you here.
Raj smiled.
Raj:I really felt nice to hear that you wanted to see me.Because I was also longing to see you.
They shared a deep eye lock.
They washed their hands.
Palak:Happy to spend time with you after a long time Raj.
Raj:Me too Palak.The time we spent together was always special for me.
She smiled.
Palak:Bye Raj!
Raj:Bye!
Both were very sad.
Palak turned back to go.Suddenly Raj called her.
Raj:Palak!
Palak looked at him.
Raj:You said that you missed me.Does that mean you love me now also?
Palak became emotional.
Palak:Yes Raj.Even now I love you.
Raj became emotional.
Raj:I also love you Palak.
Palak:I know that.That's why you came here to meet me and started changing yourself keeping my advises in mind.
Raj:I became responsible like you wanted.Then what is stopping you from getting back to me?Why can't we get back to each other?
Palak looked at him in disbelief.
Palak:Raj!
Raj:I promise that I will not hurt your feelings again.
Palak:I promise that I will not hurt you also.
Raj:Then?
She was silent.
He extended his hands towards her.Palak ran into his arms emotionally.They had an emotional embrace.
The end
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