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The next morning,Raghuveer came there.Lalit and Seema smiled at them.
Lalit:We were waiting for your arrival.These days the children have changed a lot.They are well mannered now.
Seema:Actually they changed us too with their love.Till then we were indifferent to them.It's all because of you.
Lalit:We can't thank you enough.
Raghuveer:No need of thanking me.You both have always loved the kids.The kids have always loved both of you.But circumstance changed your relationship with them bitter.Now again love has melted the unnecessary anger between you all.That's it.
Lalit and Seema smiled.
Raghuveer:I want to tell you all something.
Seema:Say.
Raghuveer:The summer vacation is going to end.The vacation classes will be ending this weekend.I have to join my school back.
Lalit:We are sad that you are going from here.But we understand that you have a life beyond this.
Seema:Our blessings will be always there for you as you are an angel who brought happiness to this family.
Raghuveer smiled.
Meher and Purvika were crying.
Meher:You will not come back again?
Purvika:We will miss you.
Raghuveer felt sad.
Raghu:I will also miss you all.But don't worry.I will keep visiting you all.
They hugged him weeping.
Prarthana was suppressing her tears silently.
Prarthana:Won't you miss me Raghuveerji?
Raghuveer looked at her emotionally.
Raghuveer:I will miss you a lot Prarthana.But I told you that I will keep visiting this house.
Prarthana put her hands on his shoulders and asked:Promise?
Raghuveer:Promise.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Lalit and Seema were stunned seeing it.Seeing them,Prarthana realised that her hands were on Raghuveer's shoulders and moved away from Raghuveer.She and Raghuveer were not able to face Lalit and Seema.But Lalit and Seema kept silent.
On the last day...
Raghuveer bid good bye to the kids and Lalit-Seema.His eyes searched for Prarthana to bid her 'good-bye'.
Seema:Prarthana is in her room.She is crying,because you are going.Guess she does'nt want to be away from you.
Raghuveer was stunned.
Lalit:Only you can console her.We understood what is in her mind for you.If you also feel the same for her,express it to her now.So that after you go also,she will be happy.She can live with the hope of reuniting with you soon.
Raghuveer smiled emotionally.
He ran to her room.He stood near her and wiped her tears.
Raghu:Why are you crying?I told you that I will keep visiting.Then why are you upset?
Prarthana:I am scared whether you will be able to visit us again and again without any purpose.
Raghu:I have a purpose to come here.I love the children,your parents and you.
Prarthana looked at him in disbelief.
Raghu:I will keep coming here to see the girl I love.Next time I will come here with my family to fix our marriage.
Prarthana was surprised.But she decided to tease him.
Prarthana:To fix our marriage?How do you know that I will agree to marry you?I never told you that I want to marry you.
Raghu:Because I have seen love in your eyes which was specially for me.So I am sure that you also want to marry me like I want to marry you.
Prarthana smiled:Yes,I love you Raghuveerji.
Raghu:I love you too Prarthana.
Raghuveer held her closer and pecked her head with pure love.She blushed.
After a month....
Raghuveer and Prarthana got engaged in a ceremony.
Later Raghuveer-Prarthana got married.
The reception party....
Meher and Purvika did a special performance for Raghuveer and Prarthana.
Meher played the guitar beautifully
while Purvika danced joyfully.
Raghuveer and Prathana became so happy that they hugged the kids.
Purvika:Now you both perform.
Meher played a song.
Raghuveer and Prarthana danced passionately.
mere hath main tera hath hoπ|priti Raghu New romantic dance video β€οΈ - YouTube
Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere
saath ho - 2
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho
jaaun fanaa
Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere
saath ho
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho
jaaun fanaa
Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere
saath ho
tere dil mein meri saanson ko jagah mil jaaye
Tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye
Jitne paas hain khushbu saans ke
Jitne paas hothon ke sargam
Jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke
Jaise saath baahon ke sangam
Jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar
Utni paas tu rehna hamsafar
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
Tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere
saath ho
rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de
Baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de
Hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega
Hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega
Jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hain raaz
Jitne paas bundon ke baadal
Jaise ?sahaq? sa chanda ke hain raat
Jitne paas nainon ke kaajal
Jitne paas paas saagar ke lehar
Utne paas tu rehna hamsafar
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
Tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere
saath ho
adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren ham
Magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren
hain ham
(Fanaa).
The end.
Thank you friends for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.
Sad that Raghuveer will leave soon. PraVeer moment was emotional. Their love confession was cute. Meher playing guitar and Purvika dancing was lovely. Favorite scenes are the funny scenes Meher and Purvika did with Jeet. Favorite character is Raghuveer because he handled the kids well. Perfect pics.
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Oh wow the two little girls one playing the guitar while the other dances
Raghuveer and Prarthana dancing was so beautiful
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Good to see a positive change in everyone
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