RaYa FF: Twisted Emotions - Ram ki Siya - Page 13 {Re-writing For BALH - Page 2

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Baarish



"Ram!" she shouted, as he walked away with the umbrella, letting her get drenched in the heavy rain. In his hand were the papers; the ones he would never want to discuss with her.


You compelled me to love these rains, Priya thought achingly. Because of your love, your sweet words…your poor jokes…Ram, I began to love the rains. But today you, the one who lived for this rain, are walking away from it? Why?

She looked up at the sky, welcoming the downpour with open arms. “I am in love with you, Ram,” she whispered softly. “I am in love with you. Ram - my husband. Not the image of Mr. Kapoor I built in my mind five months back.”

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FIVE MONTHS EARLIER


"Baarish! You want to give a speech on this topic? I am not impressed, Sakshi and Naman.” Priya was annoyed. She hated the rains with an all consuming passion.


Sakshi rolled her eyes. "Ma'am, we thought that in the monsoon season, Mumbai's baarish would be a good topic for the speech."


Priya folded her arms, looking stern. "I too thought that you people would act like grown ups by now but no, you two are mentally still in class 5.”


The two students looked down sheepishly, choosing wisely to say nothing.

"Koi aur topic ready kariye,” Priya commanded crisply. “Otherwise, I am not going to give you good marks in this subject."


"But Ma'am-” Naman tried again, but she collected her books and walked away.


On the other side of town, Ram was munching his favourite blackberry pastries in his blue Audi’s back seat. The car was one of the many swanky ones lined up at the traffic signal of one of Mumbai’s posh localities.

"Do you know,” Ram was saying, a happy smile on his face. “Mujhe fifth class se yeh baarish sabse zyada pasand hai. I am just in love with it!”



"Class 5 se kyun, Sir?” the friendly chauffeur asked.



Ram laughed. "Because I used to have a crush on my English teacher.”



The chauffeur too joined in, chuckling. "And what about now, Sir?” he ventured hesitantly after a while.


“Now?” Ram laughed out loud and gulped his anti-acid pills. “Now, that English teacher is my earliest girlfriend in whose son's wedding we are going."



The chauffeur didn't laugh, his face reflecting his confusion. In the awkward atmosphere, Ram complained good naturedly, "Tumhe hasi nahi aayi? Yaar, mere jokes pe koi hasta kyun nahi?"


"Sir, I will definitely wish ki aapke jokes pe koi hasne wala mil jaye," the chauffeur responded cheerfully.


Ram smiled, looking distractedly out of the window. "Wow, baarish aa gayi!” he exclaimed.

The next moment, he had exited the Audi, a child like excitement on his features.

"Sir, umbrella?" the chauffeur yelled behind him.


"Bola na, I just love this baarish!” Ram looked at the water droplets kissing his skin and ran his hand through his wet hair.

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"I hate baarish, Twinkle! Ab dobara mat poochna ke raincoat kyun pehna hai!” Priya reprimanded her colleague, sliding into the auto-rickshaw parked near the traffic signal. Twinkle was just about to join her in the auto-rickshaw, when suddenly the splash of muddy water from a blue Audi hit her clothes.


Priya gave a death glare to the luxurious car crossing the signal. Twinkle stared in dismay at her dirty clothes. "Because of these bade baap ki bigdi aulaads, I have to wear a raincoat in the rain.”

She shook her head, grumbling to a shocked Twinkle as the auto drove on.




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Edited by AWolfAndParrot - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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What?? Are they divorce papers? No mann😭

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Keeping the suspense regarding the papers… so many possibilities…. Divorce,old diaries, declaration of old/new love!

Looking for to reading a really good story!

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Hmm now I feel she wrote smth bad about him in the papers but s suspense is still there. Is the story going to be mix of flashbacks and present? I liked the baarish contrast. Waiting for next part

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Lovely! Waiting for the next part!

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Originally posted by: Saavni

Will be waiting for reading the prologue..And first part of your ss on ram priya


Updated! I hope you will like it 😊

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Originally posted by: RandomWaliLadki

Wow this was damn interesting

that change of scenario in the end 😲

Priya loves rain but Ram hates it?! (what a reverse) 😲


You have to read more to know reverse

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Originally posted by: Asad08

Waiting!!!! 😍 super excited for the SS… PM if possible thanks


I can quote your old comment but not PM

Thank you So much 😊😊

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Blueberry Cupcakes




Twinkle taunted her dear friend Priya, "Your raincoat is so out of fashion yaar Pri!"



"Whatever it may be, better than your word 'fashion', I don't like it." stated Priya and sat in the auto-rickshaw leaving Twinkle alone who said looking to the skies, "Wah Wah Ramji! Ab roz ki tarah Sara di ki bakery pe jayegi aur uske baad Aunty ka hath bataegi, fir tution se din khatam." breathed Twinkle.



She made a puppy face, "Do something to let her spend time for herself also, Bahut nainsafi hai!"



"Nainsafi to hai Ram, tum aaj akele chale gaye and I have to come with Adi now, jo ki main khatra uthaungi nahi" Brinda Ram's friend complaint.



"Haahhha", Ram laughed out loud, "Bure driver ki haseen biwi meri jaan"



Brinda taunted, "Don't laugh at my situation, okay!"



Ram took a deep breath, "Hey jaan, ruk kisi aur ne awaaz lagai," pausing for a second and then laughed when Brinda got upset, "Ram, now if you're going alone, take a gift which is most precious for her with yourself, after all she is your first love"



"Arey haan! I just forgot to brought a gift with me, love you jaan. You are the best" Ram disconnected the phone call saying this and told the chauffeur, "I want to go a nearby bakery, kahi hai kya?"



"Yes sir." chauffeur said continuing, "let me turn the car to the right"



"Oh thank you" Ram replied.



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The phone buzzed when Priya reached the Sarah's bakery, her elder sister, who picked the call up.



"Yes! Sarah bakery" Sarah replied to the person.



When the same time the chauffeur entered the bakery, "51 blueberry Cupcakes please!"



Priya said, "Not ready. We take prior order after all we are humans, not machine"



"Priya..," Sarah eyes her sister and said, "You can take it from the counter.



Priya who knew it was someone else's order objected, "Di, it is someone else's order how can we parcel this man"



"Ma'am please my boss can give double money for this order" said chauffeur.



Priya gave a fake smile, "Oh really!" and blasted at him, "keep your extra money with yourself, this is a matter of principles, not money"



"I'm sorry but we needed it urgently," told the driver.



Priya taunted, "By the way why are you dealing tell your boss to deal. Where is he?"



"He is ...", The driver was cut by Sarah, "It's okay, you can pay and take them"



"But, " Priya again objected but Sarah said "I will prepare them soon baba"



"This is the first and last?" Priya asked.



"Yes Masterni ji" Sarah taunted and made the bill.



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The chauffeur took the cupcakes and Ram's greedy tongue asked for the taste of the cupcake. He ate one and his taste buds were asking for more, "kya baat hai!"



"Who made these?" asked the driver, who replied, "Don't know thi Masterni sahiba, lecture de diya", and narrated the whole incident.



Ram while munching the cupcakes said, "She was right, paiso ki baat nahi karni chahiye thi"




"Sorry boss", the driver appologized and said, "your destination", and Ram realised he has ate almost all while thinking about the stranger principled girl.

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Edited by AWolfAndParrot - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwie...cute update ❤️

Looking forward to know what the future holds for these cuties😳

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