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Thank u very much friends


Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me...Part 2

Thank u very much my sweet friend Reena for the edits.Thank u very much Varsha for sending me the link of Shaheer Ada edits.Thank u so much my dear Priyanka for downloading Shaheer Ada edits for me.

The next morning...

Meenakshi smiled as Piya entered the kitchen.

Meenakshi:Piya...Good Morning...

Piya:Good morning Maa.

Meenakshi smiled:I feel nice when you call me Maa.

Piya:I am not used to calling anyone Maa.So I feel very happy that I have a mother now.

Meenakshi smiled hugging her.

They heard a voice:You have a father also.

It was Mehul.

Piya smiled emotionally.Mehul caressed her.

Mehul:How is Samar's behaviour towards you?

Piya's heart got pricked.

She faked a smile:He is very sweet to me.

Mehul and Meenakshi smiled at each other with relief.

Samar was surprised to see kheer on the table.

Samar:Wow..my favourite.

He tasted it.

Samar:So tasty mom.This kheer is different from the other kheers you make.But more tastier.Love you mom.

Meenakshi smiled:This I love you should go to Piya as she made the kheer today.

Samar was stunned:What?

He looked at Piya slowly.

Samar:It was nice Piya.

Piya smiled.

Meenakshi and Mehul smiled.

Piya got ready to go to college.

Samar was finding it difficult to face her.

Without looking at her Samar said:I am sorry Piya..But I did'nt intend to hurt you.

Piya smiled:Samar...you don't have to be guilty.It's ok if you can't love me.But we can continue as friends.Right?

Samar smiled with relief:Ye sure Piya.

She smiled.

Samar:Shall I drop you to college?

Suddenly Meenakshi came.

Meenakshi:What is this Piya?Today itself you are going to college?You are a newly wed bride.

Piya:Ya..but I can't miss my classes as exams are nearing.

Meenakshi:Ok.But Samar will drop you.

Samar:Yes I will.

Samar dropped Piya to her college.

Piya smiled at him:Bye Samar.

Samar:Bye.

He drove away.

Piya heard some students gossiping.

"Piya is so lucky.She is only an orphan.But she got the richest handsome husband in the world".

Piya's face became dull.

Piya:Why these people are talking like this as if getting a rich husband is the luckiest thing?Does love have no value in married life now?Only money and status?

She hid her pain.Ignoring them she walked to her classroom.

Piya was reading her law books and studying.

Samar entered the room with coffee.

Samar:You need any help?

Piya:No Samar.It’s law.You are not familiar with it.Right?

Samar:Ya..that’s right.Anyways drink this coffee.

Piya was surprised:Coffee?

Samar:Ya..actually mom sent it for you.

Piya:Maa is so sweet.

Piya took the coffee from him.He smiled.

While sipping the coffee Piya asked him:Samar…you don’t love me.So do you expect divorce from me?

Samar became dull.

He stammered:Aaaa..ac…actually Piya..I never thought about it yet.

Piya:Means you will think about it in future.

Samar was silent.

Piya suppressed her pain.

Piya:I understand…there is no point in living together.We can apply for divorce.After that you can marry the girl you want.A girl who matches your status.

Samar:Piya..do you want to divorce me?

Piya was silent.She was upset.

Samar:If you are not keen on divorcing me even I don’t want divorce.

Piya was stunned.

Samar:I married you because I can’t see my parents upset.If I divorce you they will be so upset that they will not forgive me ever.

Piya became emotional seeing his love for his parents.

Piya:But then..how will you marry the girl of your choice?

Samar:That is not more important than my parents.To be frank I was not even thinking of getting married as my full focus was on business.But my parents forced me to get married.So I started dreaming of my wife like a stupid.Never mind.I don’t want divorce.Usually married couples lead a happy married life with love.But we will lead a happy married life through our friendship.What say?

Piya’s face blossomed.She nodded happily.He smiled.

Time passed….

Samar was busy in his business while Piya who completed her college started practicing as a junior lawyer under a famous lawyer named Arundati.

Samar thought:I hurt Piya a lot.I could’nt give her the love she deserves.But as a friend I will make her happy.

He smiled.

Piya entered the room.

Samar gave her a dress:My gift for you.Hope you will love it.

She was surprised.

Piya:I loved it.But this is party wear.

Samar:Yes.For parties you need to wear a party wear.Right?

Piya:But which party?

Samar:Surprise!

She smiled.

Piya came wearing the dress Samar gave her.He was mesmerized by her beauty.

Samar:Come with me.

He took her to the guest house.

She was surprised to see the decoration over there.It was full of balloons and other items which are usually used for decorating a Christmas tree.

Samar:Happy birthday to you Piya.

Piya was surprised.

Piya:Happy birthday to me?I don’t even know my birth date Samar.

Samar:But I know from the orphanage that on this day only they got you.So this date can be assumed as your birthday.Right?

Piya:They got me on this date.But there is no guarantee that it is my birthday.

Samar:That is not a problem.We can fix this date itself as your birthday and celebrate it.Ok?

She smiled.

Samar made Piya cut the cake and fed her the cake.She fed him the cake back.

Piya said in he mind:Why are you so sweet to me Samar?By your behavior you are forcing me to love you more and more.

Samar saw Piya in his office cabin.He was surprised.His face blossomed.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly he realized that it was his imagination.He blushed.

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage
To meri raahein dhadakne lage
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage

Samar was in his meeting.There also he saw Piya.He was stunned.

Samar:How come Piya is here?


Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly somebody called him:Sir!

Suddenly Samar realized that he was imagining Piya there.He became shy.


Haathon se laqeerein yehi kehti hai
Ki zindagi jo hai meri
Tujhi mein ab rehti hai

He was literally seeing Piya everywhere.

(See this VM of Shaheer-Ada.Thanks to Varshathomar2 for sharing this with me)

Samar was in his car thinking of Piya.

Samar blushed:Why I am always thinking of Piya?Is it love?


Labon pe likhi hai mere dil ki khwaahish
Lafzon mein kaise main bataaun
Ikk tujhko hi paane ki khaatir
Sabse judaa main ho jaaun

(Watch this VM on Shaheer Ada.Thanks to Varshatomar2 for this

https://www.instagram.com/p/CE4HhikBzG2/?igshid=popxzc86jnfd)

Samar saw Piya sleeping on the bed.

He caressed her head with a sweet smile.He leaned towards her forehead to kiss there.Suddenly he came back to senses.


Kal tak maine jo bhi khwaab the dekhe
Tujhme woh dikhne lage
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re

Samar thought:Oh my God!What was I going to do?To kiss Piya?How?

He looked at her deeply.He was lost in her.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Samar thought:Why I am forgetting myself when I see Piya?

Suddenly his heart told him:Because you love Piya.

Samar was stunned.

“How can I love Piya?”

Samar’s heart told him:Love is not based on status and family heritage.Love comes from the bottom of your heart.This is what you feel for Piya now.

Unknowingly Samar smiled.

Samar whispered:I love Piya.

Saanson ke kinaare bade tanha thhe
Tu aa ke inhe chhu le bas
Yehi toh mere armaan thhe
Saari duniya se mujhe kya lena hai
Bas tujhko hi pehchaanu
Mujhko na meri ab khabar ho koi
Tujhse hi khudko main jaanu
Raatein nahi kat’ti bechain se hoke
Din bhi guzarne lage

Samar wrote ‘I love you Piya’ on a beautiful romantic greeting card and kept it inside a big heart shaped box.

Samar smiled:I will give it to Piya and surprise her soon.

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
: "Genius"

Piya was relaxing on her chair.

Piya:After a long time I got some free time.I will do some household chores.

Piya cleaned their room and her cupboard.

Piya:The messiest is Samar’s cupboard.I will keep everything tidy.

She opened her cupboard.The clothes were stuffed inside them and the cupboard looked untidy.

She took all the clothes from the cupboard to fold them properly.There she saw a heart shaped big box.

Suddenly she got tensed.

Piya:Did Samar find any girl of his status?

She took the box and opened it.There she saw a card.She opened the card.

She saw “I love you Piya”.

She was surprised.Her happiness had no bounds.


Hoo tora saajan
Aayo tore desh


Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya:Samar loves me.He kept it safe to propose me later.

(The credit for this edit goes to the real editor)

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Piya was so excited that she everything inside the cupboard.

Piya dreamt of Samar romancing her passionately.

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee
Ho tora saajan
Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya was cooking in the kitchen.Samar embraced her from behind making her blush.


Woh kabhi dikhe zameen pe
Kabhi woh chaand pe
Yeh nazar kahe use yahan
Main rakh loon baandh ke ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Haye bhoole yeh jahan

Samar-Piya watched a romantic movie sitting closer to each other romantically.

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Samar pulled her closer to his chest while watching the movie and she was blushing.

Preet mein tori Ore sawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya hoo O o OoO
Baadaliya tu barse ganah
Barse ganah.
Barse ganah..
Barse ganah…

Piya imagined making bubbles with Samar in the moonlight.

Jo yeh badaliyan
Woh ched de
To chalke baarishein
Woh de aahatein
Kareeb se
To bole khwaishein ke aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal se chahe
Haye jiska dil hua


Piya imagined dancing with Samar romantically.


Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee



Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya


Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya


Piya imagined flower petals falling over her and Samar.

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka


Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee(I hate luv storys).

One day Meenakshi entered their bedroom as Samar-Piya had forgotten to close the door.

She was shocked to see Samar and Piya sleeping on 2 separate beds.

After some hours….

Meenakshi was very upset.Mehul noticed her.

Mehul:What happened Meenakshi?Why do you look upset?

Meenakshi:Mehul…we were wrong.Samar has not changed a bit.He has not accepted Piya yet as she is an orphan.

Mehul was shocked:What?

Meenakshi:Yes.I saw them sleeping separately.

Mehul:May be they had a small fight.

Meenakshi:No Mehul.I saw them walking together and chatting cheerfully.They are continuing to be friends.

Mehul was stunned.

Mehul:Samar has not accepted Piya as he feels that he is superior to her because of his family heritage.We need to break his arrogance.

Meenakshi:But how?

Mehul:We need to tell him the biggest truth that he was adopted from the same orphanage.

Suddenly they saw Samar standing near the door with a shock.He was shattered.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jasminerahul


Thank u very much friends


Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me...Part 2

Thank u very much my sweet friend Reena for the edits.Thank u very much Varsha for sending me the link of Shaheer Ada edits.Thank u so much my dear Priyanka for downloading Shaheer Ada edits for me.

The next morning...

Meenakshi smiled as Piya entered the kitchen.

Meenakshi:Piya...Good Morning...

Piya:Good morning Maa.

⭕Haaye the pic

Meenakshi smiled:I feel nice when you call me Maa.

⭕Even i noticed that, so happy for Piya..she got a mother

Piya:I am not used to calling anyone Maa.So I feel very happy that I have a mother now.

⭕Awww, Sho shweet

Meenakshi smiled hugging her.

⭕I am already loving their bond

They heard a voice:You have a father also.

⭕Aww, this is so sweet

It was Mehul.

Piya smiled emotionally.Mehul caressed her.

Mehul:How is Samar's behaviour towards you?

⭕Waise baki sab theek hai but rethinking , I think they were wrong to get some married by kinda pressurizing samar, Thats just going to hurt Piya more and more

Piya's heart got pricked.

She faked a smile:He is very sweet to me.

⭕Waise sweet toh I guess woh hai hi

Mehul and Meenakshi smiled at each other with relief.

😑

Samar was surprised to see kheer on the table.

Samar:Wow..my favourite.

⭕Piya cooked na?

He tasted it.

Samar:So tasty mom.This kheer is different from the other kheers you make.But more tastier.Love you mom.

⭕Ahh wife ki kheer maa ki kheer se better, haha

Meenakshi smiled:This I love you should go to Piya as she made the kheer today.

⭕And khana gale me atka 🤣

Samar was stunned:What?

⭕Ismien itna what karne ki ky zarorat hai, she lives her now na

He looked at Piya slowly.

Samar:It was nice Piya.

Piya smiled.

Meenakshi and Mehul smiled.

Piya got ready to go to college.

⭕Oh, she is still in collage, whats her age?

Samar was finding it difficult to face her.

Without looking at her Samar said:I am sorry Piya..But I did'nt intend to hurt you.

⭕Kab?

Piya smiled:Samar...you don't have to be guilty.It's ok if you can't love me.But we can continue as friends.Right?

⭕Hush, she is sweet but still, Samar should have said before wedding

Samar smiled with relief:Ye sure Piya.

She smiled.

Samar:Shall I drop you to college?

⭕Awww

Suddenly Meenakshi came.

Meenakshi:What is this Piya?Today itself you are going to college?You are a newly wed bride.

⭕Toh? Padhai zaruri hai aunty, yahaan dekho, College ka muh bhi nahi dekha 😭

Piya:Ya..but I can't miss my classes as exams are nearing.

⭕Thats like my girl

Meenakshi:Ok.But Samar will drop you.

⭕Usnein pehle hi pooch liya, hehe

Samar:Yes I will.

Samar dropped Piya to her college.

Piya smiled at him:Bye Samar.

Samar:Bye.

He drove away.

Piya heard some students gossiping.

"Piya is so lucky.She is only an orphan.But she got the richest handsome husband in the world".

⭕🤷‍♀️ Log kabhi nahi sudharte

Piya's face became dull.

Piya:Why these people are talking like this as if getting a rich husband is the luckiest thing?Does love have no value in married life now?Only money and status?

⭕Kya karein, reality of today😶

She hid her pain.Ignoring them she walked to her classroom.

⭕Good job

Piya was reading her law books and studying.

⭕Wah perfect pic

Samar entered the room with coffee.

Samar:You need any help?

Piya:No Samar.It’s law.You are not familiar with it.Right?

⭕Haha, Beizzati 🤣

Samar:Ya..that’s right.Anyways drink this coffee.

⭕Ahh, changing the topic but you are sweet dude, just you should havr said truth before wedding

Piya was surprised:Coffee?

Samar:Ya..actually mom sent it for you.

😏Mujhe laga tum khud laye

Piya:Maa is so sweet.

⭕Woh to hai

Piya took the coffee from him.He smiled.

While sipping the coffee Piya asked him:Samar…you don’t love me.So do you expect divorce from me?

⭕Valid question, i like it

Samar became dull.

He stammered:Aaaa..ac…actually Piya..I never thought about it yet.

⭕Aaaa...ac...actually 🤣 but stop planning to spoil her life yaar

Piya:Means you will think about it in future.

⭕Ahh, this girl hieghts of logic, I like her

Samar was silent.

🤦‍♀️

Piya suppressed her pain.

Piya:I understand…there is no point in living together.We can apply for divorce.After that you can marry the girl you want.A girl who matches your status.

⭕Ahh the taunt

Samar:Piya..do you want to divorce me?

⭕Pakka na bolegi 🙄

Piya was silent.She was upset.

⭕Silence se na bol hi diya🤦‍♀️

Samar:If you are not keen on divorcing me even I don’t want divorce.

⭕Chahta kya hai banda?

Piya was stunned.

Samar:I married you because I can’t see my parents upset.If I divorce you they will be so upset that they will not forgive me ever.

⭕He is acting selfish

Piya became emotional seeing his love for his parents.

⭕Awwww

Piya:But then..how will you marry the girl of your choice.

⭕She is fun, only that part is she is hopelessly in love, I made a good rhymn scheme, hehe

Samar:That is not more important than my parents.To be frank I was not even thinking of getting married as my full focus was on business.But my parents forced me to get married.So I started dreaming of my wife like a stupid.Never mind.I don’t want divorce.Usually married couples lead a happy married life with love.But we will lead a happy married life through our friendship.What say?

Piya’s face blossomed.She nodded happily.He smiled.

Time passed….

Samar was busy in his business while Piya who completed her college started practicing as a junior lawyer under a famous lawyer named Arundati.

Samar thought:I hurt Piya a lot.I could’nt give her the love she deserves.But as a friend I will make her happy.

He smiled.

Piya entered the room.

Samar gave her a dress:My gift for you.Hope you will love it.

She was surprised.

Piya:I loved it.But this is party wear.

Samar:Yes.For parties you need to wear a party wear.Right?

Piya:But which party?

Samar:Surprise!

She smiled.

Piya came wearing the dress Samar gave her.He was mesmerized by her beauty.

Samar:Come with me.

He took her to the guest house.

She was surprised to see the decoration over there.It was full of balloons and other items which are usually used for decorating a Christmas tree.

Samar:Happy birthday to you Piya.

Piya was surprised.

Piya:Happy birthday to me?I don’t even know my birth date Samar.

Samar:But I know from the orphanage that on this day only they got you.So this date can be assumed as your birthday.Right?

Piya:They got me on this date.But there is no guarantee that it is my birthday.

Samar:That is not a problem.We can fix this date itself as your birthday and celebrate it.Ok?

She smiled.

Samar made Piya cut the cake and fed her the cake.She fed him the cake back.

Piya said in he mind:Why are you so sweet to me Samar?By your behavior you are forcing me to love you more and more.

Samar saw Piya in his office cabin.He was surprised.His face blossomed.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly he realized that it was his imagination.He blushed.

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage
To meri raahein dhadakne lage
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage

Samar was in his meeting.There also he saw Piya.He was stunned.

Samar:How come Piya is here?


Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly somebody called him:Sir!

Suddenly Samar realized that he was imagining Piya there.He became shy.


Haathon se laqeerein yehi kehti hai
Ki zindagi jo hai meri
Tujhi mein ab rehti hai

He was literally seeing Piya everywhere.

(See this VM of Shaheer-Ada.Thanks to Varshathomar2 for sharing this with me)

Samar was in his car thinking of Piya.

Samar blushed:Why I am always thinking of Piya?Is it love?


Labon pe likhi hai mere dil ki khwaahish
Lafzon mein kaise main bataaun
Ikk tujhko hi paane ki khaatir
Sabse judaa main ho jaaun

(Watch this VM on Shaheer Ada.Thanks to Varshatomar2 for this

https://www.instagram.com/p/CE4HhikBzG2/?igshid=popxzc86jnfd)

Samar saw Piya sleeping on the bed.

He caressed her head with a sweet smile.He leaned towards her forehead to kiss there.Suddenly he came back to senses.


Kal tak maine jo bhi khwaab the dekhe
Tujhme woh dikhne lage
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re

Samar thought:Oh my God!What was I going to do?To kiss Piya?How?

He looked at her deeply.He was lost in her.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Samar thought:Why I am forgetting myself when I see Piya?

Suddenly his heart told him:Because you love Piya.

Samar was stunned.

“How can I love Piya?”

Samar’s heart told him:Love is not based on status and family heritage.Love comes from the bottom of your heart.This is what you feel for Piya now.

Unknowingly Samar smiled.

Samar whispered:I love Piya.

Saanson ke kinaare bade tanha thhe
Tu aa ke inhe chhu le bas
Yehi toh mere armaan thhe
Saari duniya se mujhe kya lena hai
Bas tujhko hi pehchaanu
Mujhko na meri ab khabar ho koi
Tujhse hi khudko main jaanu
Raatein nahi kat’ti bechain se hoke
Din bhi guzarne lage

Samar wrote ‘I love you Piya’ on a beautiful romantic greeting card and kept it inside a big heart shaped box.

Samar smiled:I will give it to Piya and surprise her soon.

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
: "Genius"

Piya was relaxing on her chair.

Piya:After a long time I got some free time.I will do some household chores.

Piya cleaned their room and her cupboard.

Piya:The messiest is Samar’s cupboard.I will keep everything tidy.

She opened her cupboard.The clothes were stuffed inside them and the cupboard looked untidy.

She took all the clothes from the cupboard to fold them properly.There she saw a heart shaped big box.

Suddenly she got tensed.

Piya:Did Samar find any girl of his status?

She took the box and opened it.There she saw a card.She opened the card.

She saw “I love you Piya”.

She was surprised.Her happiness had no bounds.


Hoo tora saajan
Aayo tore desh


Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya:Samar loves me.He kept it safe to propose me later.

(The credit for this edit goes to the real editor)

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Piya was so excited that she everything inside the cupboard.

Piya dreamt of Samar romancing her passionately.

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee
Ho tora saajan
Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya was cooking in the kitchen.Samar embraced her from behind making her blush.


Woh kabhi dikhe zameen pe
Kabhi woh chaand pe
Yeh nazar kahe use yahan
Main rakh loon baandh ke ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Haye bhoole yeh jahan

Samar-Piya watched a romantic movie sitting closer to each other romantically.

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Samar pulled her closer to his chest while watching the movie and she was blushing.

Preet mein tori Ore sawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya hoo O o OoO
Baadaliya tu barse ganah
Barse ganah.
Barse ganah..
Barse ganah…

Piya imagined making bubbles with Samar in the moonlight.

Jo yeh badaliyan
Woh ched de
To chalke baarishein
Woh de aahatein
Kareeb se
To bole khwaishein ke aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal se chahe
Haye jiska dil hua


Piya imagined dancing with Samar romantically.


Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee



Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya


Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya


Piya imagined flower petals falling over her and Samar.

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka


Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee(I hate luv storys).

One day Meenakshi entered their bedroom as Samar-Piya had forgotten to close the door.

She was shocked to see Samar and Piya sleeping on 2 separate beds.

After some hours….

Meenakshi was very upset.Mehul noticed her.

Mehul:What happened Meenakshi?Why do you look upset?

Meenakshi:Mehul…we were wrong.Samar has not changed a bit.He has not accepted Piya yet as she is an orphan.

Mehul was shocked:What?

Meenakshi:Yes.I saw them sleeping separately.

Mehul:May be they had a small fight.

Meenakshi:No Mehul.I saw them walking together and chatting cheerfully.They are continuing to be friends.

Mehul was stunned.

Mehul:Samar has not accepted Piya as he feels that he is superior to her because of his family heritage.We need to break his arrogance.

Meenakshi:But how?

Mehul:We need to tell him the biggest truth that he was adopted from the same orphanage.

Suddenly they saw Samar standing near the door with a shock.He was shattered.

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Samar:That is not more important than my parents.To be frank I was not even thinking of getting married as my full focus was on business.But my parents forced me to get married.So I started dreaming of my wife like a stupid.Never mind.I don’t want divorce.Usually married couples lead a happy married life with love.But we will lead a happy married life through our friendship.What say?

⭕Isse problem kya hai Piya ko pyaar karne ke thought if he is ready to live with her given his problem was her social status all along

Piya’s face blossomed.She nodded happily.He smiled.

⭕Aww, my sweetie

Time passed….

Samar was busy in his business while Piya who completed her college started practicing as a junior lawyer under a famous lawyer named Arundati.

⭕Oh so she must be in last, great for her

Samar thought:I hurt Piya a lot.I could’nt give her the love she deserves.But as a friend I will make her happy.

⭕Nice thought par mein kya hi bolun abb

He smiled.

Piya entered the room.

Samar gave her a dress:My gift for you.Hope you will love it.

⭕Oho friendship mein dresses bhi dete hain unho unho

She was surprised.

Piya:I loved it.But this is party wear.

⭕Toh?

Samar:Yes.For parties you need to wear a party wear.Right?

⭕Haha

Piya:But which party?

Samar:Surprise!

⭕Awww

She smiled.

Piya came wearing the dress Samar gave her.He was mesmerized by her beauty.

⭕Oho

Samar:Come with me.

He took her to the guest house.

She was surprised to see the decoration over there.It was full of balloons and other items which are usually used for decorating a Christmas tree.

⭕Is it her birthday?

Samar:Happy birthday to you Piya.

⭕Raisinf my dress invisible collar, sweet of Samar

Piya was surprised.

Piya:Happy birthday to me?I don’t even know my birth date Samar.

⭕Oh, I didn't realize this

Samar:But I know from the orphanage that on this day only they got you.So this date can be assumed as your birthday.Right?

⭕Oh sweet thought

Piya:They got me on this date.But there is no guarantee that it is my birthday.

⭕She is going too much into deets now but I can understand, can't even feel how bad it must be not knowing your birthday

Samar:That is not a problem.We can fix this date itself as your birthday and celebrate it.Ok?

⭕Yup Piya, Ok?

She smiled.

Samar made Piya cut the cake and fed her the cake.She fed him the cake back.

Piya said in he mind:Why are you so sweet to me Samar?By your behavior you are forcing me to love you more and more.

⭕Awww, I can understand and swwet scenes

Samar saw Piya in his office cabin.He was surprised.His face blossomed.

⭕Dream?

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly he realized that it was his imagination.He blushed.

⭕Aww, Pyaar ho bhi gaya? Abb kya twist aayega?

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage
To meri raahein dhadakne lage
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage

Samar was in his meeting.There also he saw Piya.He was stunned.

⭕Haha, its cute

Samar:How come Piya is here?

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Suddenly somebody called him:Sir!

Suddenly Samar realized that he was imagining Piya there.He became shy.

⭕Laal Tamator

Haathon se laqeerein yehi kehti hai
Ki zindagi jo hai meri
Tujhi mein ab rehti hai

He was literally seeing Piya everywhere.

⭕Oh waoh

(See this VM of Shaheer-Ada.Thanks to Varshathomar2 for sharing this with me)

Samar was in his car thinking of Piya.

Samar blushed:Why I am always thinking of Piya?Is it love?

⭕Yes yes yes

Labon pe likhi hai mere dil ki khwaahish
Lafzon mein kaise main bataaun
Ikk tujhko hi paane ki khaatir
Sabse judaa main ho jaaun

(Watch this VM on Shaheer Ada.Thanks to Varshatomar2 for this

)

Samar saw Piya sleeping on the bed.

⭕Awwie, such a cute pic

He caressed her head with a sweet smile.He leaned towards her forehead to kiss there.Suddenly he came back to senses.

⭕Oops, zyada hogaya

Kal tak maine jo bhi khwaab the dekhe
Tujhme woh dikhne lage
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re

Samar thought:Oh my God!What was I going to do?To kiss Piya?How?

He looked at her deeply.He was lost in her.

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Samar thought:Why I am forgetting myself when I see Piya?

Suddenly his heart told him:Because you love Piya.

⭕Unho Unho

Samar was stunned.

“How can I love Piya?”

Samar’s heart told him:Love is not based on status and family heritage.Love comes from the bottom of your heart.This is what you feel for Piya now.

⭕So beautifully put

Unknowingly Samar smiled.

Samar whispered:I love Piya.

Saanson ke kinaare bade tanha thhe
Tu aa ke inhe chhu le bas
Yehi toh mere armaan thhe
Saari duniya se mujhe kya lena hai
Bas tujhko hi pehchaanu
Mujhko na meri ab khabar ho koi
Tujhse hi khudko main jaanu
Raatein nahi kat’ti bechain se hoke
Din bhi guzarne lage

Samar wrote ‘I love you Piya’ on a beautiful romantic greeting card and kept it inside a big heart shaped box.

⭕Likhke rakha hai, Milega use?

Samar smiled:I will give it to Piya and surprise her soon.

⭕I hope she gets the surprise, fingers crossed

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re: "Genius"

Piya was relaxing on her chair.

Piya:After a long time I got some free time.I will do some household chores.

⭕Awww

Piya cleaned their room and her cupboard.

Piya:The messiest is Samar’s cupboard.I will keep everything tidy.

⭕Haha

She opened her cupboard.The clothes were stuffed inside them and the cupboard looked untidy.

She took all the clothes from the cupboard to fold them properly.There she saw a heart shaped big box.


Suddenly she got tensed.

Piya:Did Samar find any girl of his status?

🤦‍♀️

She took the box and opened it.There she saw a card.She opened the card.

She saw “I love you Piya”.

🥳

She was surprised.Her happiness had no bounds.

Hoo tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya:Samar loves me.He kept it safe to propose me later.

⭕Yes yes yes

(The credit for this edit goes to the real editor)

⭕Beautiful edit

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Piya was so excited that she everything inside the cupboard.

Piya dreamt of Samar romancing her passionately.

⭕Awwww

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee
Ho tora saajan
Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

Piya was cooking in the kitchen.Samar embraced her from behind making her blush.

⭕Dreammmm

Woh kabhi dikhe zameen pe
Kabhi woh chaand pe
Yeh nazar kahe use yahan
Main rakh loon baandh ke ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Haye bhoole yeh jahan

⭕Superb edit

Samar-Piya watched a romantic movie sitting closer to each other romantically.

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Samar pulled her closer to his chest while watching the movie and she was blushing.

⭕All these are dreams na?🤔

Preet mein tori Ore sawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya hoo O o OoO
Baadaliya tu barse ganah
Barse ganah.
Barse ganah..
Barse ganah…

⭕Lovely edit

Piya imagined making bubbles with Samar in the moonlight.

⭕Cute edit

Jo yeh badaliyan
Woh ched de
To chalke baarishein
Woh de aahatein
Kareeb se
To bole khwaishein ke aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal se chahe
Haye jiska dil hua

Piya imagined dancing with Samar romantically.

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya


Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Piya imagined flower petals falling over her and Samar.

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka


⭕Beautiful Edit

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee(I hate luv storys).

One day Meenakshi entered their bedroom as Samar-Piya had forgotten to close the door.

⭕God, didn't they confess yet?

She was shocked to see Samar and Piya sleeping on 2 separate beds.

⭕Gaye PiYar Pani mein

After some hours….

Meenakshi was very upset.Mehul noticed her.

Mehul:What happened Meenakshi?Why do you look upset.


Meenakshi:Mehul…we were wrong.Samar has not changed a bit.He has not accepted Piya yet as she is an orphan.

⭕Galat samjh rahe ho app log

Mehul was shocked:What?

Meenakshi:Yes.I saw them sleeping separately.

Mehul:May be they had a small fight.

⭕Haan haan, yehi hua hai

Meenakshi:No Mehul.I saw them walking together and chatting cheerfully.They are continuing to be friends.

⭕Toh problem kya hai?

Mehul was stunned.

Mehul:Samar has not accepted Piya as he feels that he is superior to her because of his family heritage.We need to break his arrogance.

⭕Baat toh sahi hai par abb kya karoge applog?

Meenakshi:But how?

Mehul:We need to tell him the biggest truth that he was adopted from the same orphanage.

😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😳😳😳 Thats a huge twist jasmine

Suddenly they saw Samar standing near the door with a shock.He was shattered.

⭕Oh god, why they had to talk of it...its too much

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Awww, Thats such a sweet vm dear...so cute, I always felt samar resembled Dev and vm also had dev, waoh

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Amazing update...the initial scene of Piya with Mehul-meenu was very sweet...I totally enjoyed reading it so was the this I love you should be for Piya Kheer scene, haha...even won't deny, I feel samar did very wrong but he was a sweetie to Piya all the while so not able to get angry, Piya is as it is hopelessly in love but I loved her valid questions and thoughts, she's really nicely written...loved her dedication to studies too and also, her finally bagging internship under a good lawyer...Samar doing his best to make his friend Piya happy and Piya of course falling more for him with all his geatures...awww, I loved that soon, Samar also fell for her, of course how much could he resist? I just loved his dreaming her everywhere, those scenes were love and finally he realized the truth himself that he loves her, so happy but again, Destiny had to play...even as Piya didn't misunderstand anything...Meenu did and what followed is very sad for Samar,, it was an unexpected twist, really its going to be really difficult for him to cope up but yes, Meenaxi-Mehul are really good people, I am sure they'll get their son to love and value himself too...amazingingly done jasmine, loved all dream sequences, waiting for them to turn real 😉

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Also forgot to say, loved the way you pixturized both the songs, bahara and tera fitoor, amazing scenes

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thank u very much.

samar apologized as he hurt her by revealing that he doesn't love her.Samar was shocked as he never expected piya to cook or make yummy sweet.Meenakshi is not sad because samar piya are continuing to be friends,but waa sad as samar piya were just friends without any romantic feelings


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Amazing update...the initial scene of Piya with Mehul-meenu was very sweet...I totally enjoyed reading it so was the this I love you should be for Piya Kheer scene, haha...even won't deny, I feel samar did very wrong but he was a sweetie to Piya all the while so not able to get angry, Piya is as it is hopelessly in love but I loved her valid questions and thoughts, she's really nicely written...loved her dedication to studies too and also, her finally bagging internship under a good lawyer...Samar doing his best to make his friend Piya happy and Piya of course falling more for him with all his geatures...awww, I loved that soon, Samar also fell for her, of course how much could he resist? I just loved his dreaming her everywhere, those scenes were love and finally he realized the truth himself that he loves her, so happy but again, Destiny had to play...even as Piya didn't misunderstand anything...Meenu did and what followed is very sad for Samar,, it was an unexpected twist, really its going to be really difficult for him to cope up but yes, Meenaxi-Mehul are really good people, I am sure they'll get their son to love and value himself too...amazingingly done jasmine, loved all dream sequences, waiting for them to turn real 😉

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thanks for the pm

amazing update

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U r right.It was Dev-Ada.But later Abir also became like Dev in looks in YRHPK


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Awww, Thats such a sweet vm dear...so cute, I always felt samar resembled Dev and vm also had dev, waoh

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Part 2


Such a Beautiful Update

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