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Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me... Part 1

I dedicate this story to Varshatomar2 who wants me to write a Shaheer-Ada story.

Thank u very much Reena for the beautiful edits.


A boy's 10th birthday....

He is the cute boy Samar.

He was celebrating his birthday with his parents Mehul and Meenakshi.

He was given gifts by his parents.

Samar:Dad..to which place will you take me today?

Mehul smiled:We will take you to a heavenly place.

Samar became very happy.

Mehul and Meenakshi took Samar to an orphanage.

Mehul:This is the place I told you beta.

Samar looked around and saw many children.

Meenakshi gave him a packet of sweets.

Meenakshi:Samar..give these sweets to those children.

Samar:Ok mom.

Samar distributed sweets to them.Later Samar started playing with them.

Mehul and Meenakshi smiled seeing it.

Meenakshi:Samar is jelling with them very well.

Mehul:Yes.Samar will be known as a rich boy.But he should not be rich brat.He should be a humble down to earth boy who does not differentiate himself from poor people.

Meenakshi smiled.

Every year Samar started visiting the orphanage and distributed sweets to the orphans on his birthday.Mehul and Meenakshi were a frequent visitor to the orphanage.

Years passed....

Samar has become the most desirable business man.Mehul and Meenakshi were proud of him.

Samar won the best business man of the year award also.

In that happiness Samar donated a huge amount of money to the orphanage.After that he walked out.

Suddenly he collided with a girl and the girl was going to fall down.Suddenly he caught her by her waist.


Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

She was lost in his eyes.

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage
To meri raahein dhadakne lage
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage(
Genius).

Samar took his hands off her.

She smiled at him:Thank you Samar.

Samar:No need of saying thank you.But Piya...you should walk carefully.

They both giggled.

Piya:Congrats for winning the business man award.

Samar smiled:Thank you.Well..are you going somewhere?

Piya:Ya..I have to go to my college to collect some books.

Samar:I will drop you.

Piya:It's ok.I will go by myself.

Samar:No...I will drop you.

She smiled.

They both got inside the car and he started driving the car.On the way Mehul and Meenakshi saw them together in the car with a surprise.

Mehul:That is Piya.Right?Are Samar and Piya in love?

Meenakshi:If that was the case Samar would have told me.They are only friends as Samar knows her since childhood.

Mehul smiled.

Samar was so workaholic that he was not interested in love and marriage.But Meenakshi and Mehul forced him to settle down and finally with no other choice he asked them to find a girl for himself.

Meenakshi:We will choose a girl.But you should not complain.

Samar:No,I will not complain.Promise.Till now you both have given me only the best.I am sure that the girl you both will choose for me also will be the best for me.

Mehul-Meenakshi smiled.

Meenakshi met Piya.

Piya:Auntyji...is there any important matter?

Meenakshi:Yes.We are looking for a girl for Samar.Mehul and I feel that you are the one for Samar.

Piya could not believe her ears:Me?

Meenakshi:Yes.

Piya:But why me?

Meenakshi:You and Samar are good friends.A good friend is better as a life partner.

Piya smiled.

Piya:But an orphan like me...I don't suit Samar.He deserves the best.

Meenakshi:If your parents threw you in the orphanage it's not your fault.We don't consider it as a defect.In our eyes you have all the qualities of a perfect girl. But I will not force you.Because choosing a life partner is an individual wish.

Piya:It is yes from my side.

Meenakshi was very happy:Are you sure?I hope you don't feel pressurized to choose Samar.

Piya:I am studying in a reputed law college only because Mehul uncle is sponsoring me.I will be always grateful to you all.But I am saying yes because I really like Samar.I like him since childhood.But I never dreamt of getting him as I know my status.

Meenakshi was surprised:Really?You love him?

Piya blushed:Yes.

Meenakshi:Then no one can be better than you for Samar.

Piya smiled happily.

Finally Mehul-Meenakshi revealed to Samar that the girl they chose is Piya.

Samar was shocked.

Samar:Piya?Why did you choose Piya for me?

Mehul:Why?Piya is your friend.

Meenakshi:We thought that you like her.

Samar:I like her.But not as my life partner.

Mehul-Meenakshi were shocked.

Mehul:May I know why you don't like to marry Piya?

Samar was silent.

Mehul:Say Samar.We want to know.

Samar:Because she is an orphan.I have a reputed position in this society.So I expect my life partner to have the same status.But an orphan like Piya has no status.

Mehul-Meenakshi got the biggest shock of their life.

Meenakshi:I never expected this from you Samar.You think Piya is not worth enough just because she is an orphan?

Mehul:I thought you treat everyone equally seeing how you treat orphans and poor people.But all those were fake?

Samar:Yes dad.I treat them well.I am not faking my sincerity towards them.But as a life partner I can't imagine an orphan.There are so many nice girls from good family background.Why an orphan was chosen for me?

Mehul:I am ashamed of my upbringing now.

Samar became upset.

Meenakshi:Me too.I never thought that my son would be like this.

She was in tears.

Samar became upset:Dad..mom....

Meenakshi:Don't talk to us.

They walked away.

They started ignoring Samar which was unbearable for Samar.

After a few days Samar went near them.

Samar:I am really sorry if I hurt you both.But please don't stop talking to me.I can't bear it.

Samar's tears melted them.

Samar:Nothing is more important than both of you for me.I can't see you both upset.So I am willing to marry Piya.

They smiled emotionally and hugged Samar.

The trio smiled tearfully.

Meenakshi:Trust our choice Samar.Piya is the best for you.

Samar smiled slightly.

Samar Piya got married.Piya was very happy while Samar was sad.

The media people asked Samar:Are you doing charity by marrying an orphan?

Samar felt insulted.

Samar thought:If I had married a high class girl I would not have faced this situation.

Piya felt really hurt.

Meenakshi:Don't you guys have humanity?How can you talk like this about a bride on her own wedding?

Mehul:Are you guys not ashamed to ask this question?Who will do charity by marrying?Marriage is based on love,not charity.Get lost.

Mehul drove them away.

Bedroom....

Piya blushed when Samar came near her.Samar became dull.

Samar thought:God..please forgive me for hurting this pure girl.

Samar:Piya...I don't want our married life to start with lies.So I am telling you frankly.I don't love you.I married you only for my parents.

Piya was shattered.

Piya:Samar...you did'nt want to marry me because I am an orphan?

Samar felt upset.He could not face her.

Piya wept:I got my answer.

Samar was embarrassed.

Samar thought:Piya is my friend.I feel so hurt to wound her heart.But....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul


🔵Beautiful Cover and Title jasmine😍

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re...Since your craze has come over me... Part 1

I dedicate this story to Varshatomar2 who wants me to write a Shaheer-Ada story.

Thank u very much Reena for the beautiful edits.


A boy's 10th birthday....

He is the cute boy Samar.

He was celebrating his birthday with his parents Mehul and Meenakshi.

He was given gifts by his parents.

Samar:Dad..to which place will you take me today?

🔵Hain, Chota Naksh?

Mehul smiled:We will take you to a heavenly place.

Samar became very happy.

Mehul and Meenakshi took Samar to an orphanage.

🔵Awwww, Thats sweet

Mehul:This is the place I told you beta.

Samar looked around and saw many children.

Meenakshi gave him a packet of sweets.

Meenakshi:Samar..give these sweets to those children.

Samar:Ok mom.

Samar distributed sweets to them.Later Samar started playing with them.

Mehul and Meenakshi smiled seeing it.

Meenakshi:Samar is jelling with them very well.

Mehul:Yes.Samar will be known as a rich boy.But he should not be rich brat.He should be a humble down to earth boy who does not differentiate himself from poor people.

🔵Thats really sweet of them, I so wish every rich parent had such thinking

Meenakshi smiled.

Every year Samar started visiting the orphanage and distributed sweets to the orphans on his birthday.Mehul and Meenakshi were a frequent visitor to the orphanage.

🔵Is ada going to be a girl of the orphanage?

Years passed....

Samar has become the most desirable business man.Mehul and Meenakshi were proud of him.

Samar won the best business man of the year award also.

🔵Wow, Great

In that happiness Samar donated a huge amount of money to the orphanage.After that he walked out.

Suddenly he collided with a girl and the girl was going to fall down.Suddenly he caught her by her waist.


Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re

🔵Beautiful beautiful scene and edits

She was lost in his eyes.

🔵Oh, So she'll fall first then guess

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage
To meri raahein dhadakne lage
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage(
Genius).

Samar took his hands off her.

She smiled at him:Thank you Samar.

🔵Oh, They know each other so guess my guess was right

Samar:No need of saying thank you.But Piya...you should walk carefully.

They both giggled.

Piya:Congrats for winning the business man award.

Samar smiled:Thank you.Well..are you going somewhere?

Piya:Ya..I have to go to my college to collect some books.

Samar:I will drop you.

Piya:It's ok.I will go by myself.

Samar:No...I will drop you.

She smiled.

They both got inside the car and he started driving the car.On the way Mehul and Meenakshi saw them together in the car with a surprise.

Mehul:That is Piya.Right?Are Samar and Piya in love?

🔵Oh Case of misunderstanding?

Meenakshi:If that was the case Samar would have told me.They are only friends as Samar knows her since childhood.

🔵Oh, Don't know should be happy or sad 😛

Mehul smiled.

Samar was so workaholic that he was not interested in love and marriage.But Meenakshi and Mehul forced him to settle down and finally with no other choice he asked them to find a girl for himself.

🔵Oh oh oh

Meenakshi:We will choose a girl.But you should not complain.

🔵Yeh toh galat hai, Uska approval toh lena padega aunty

Samar:No,I will not complain.Promise.Till now you both have given me only the best.I am sure that the girl you both will choose for me also will be the best for me.

🔵Oh, Yeh Kabir part 2 aagaya 🤦‍♀️

Mehul-Meenakshi smiled.

Meenakshi met Piya.

🔵Oh but chalo, Acha hua iss bar

Piya:Auntyji...is there any important matter?

Meenakshi:Yes.We are looking for a girl for Samar.Mehul and I feel that you are the one for Samar.

Piya could not believe her ears:Me?

Meenakshi:Yes.

Piya:But why me?

🔵So she doesn't love him?

Meenakshi:You and Samar are good friends.A good friend is better as a life partner.

🔵Nice thought

Piya smiled.

Piya:But an orphan like me...I don't suit Samar.He deserves the best.

🔵Inferirity complex...awww

Meenakshi:If your parents threw you in the orphanage it's not your fault.We don't consider it as a defect.In our eyes you have all the qualities of a perfect girl. But I will not force you.Because choosing a life partner is an individual wish.

🔵I like Meenu here but yes, I don't know why parents are always behind marriage that too arrange, haha

Piya:It is yes from my side.

🔵Oh Wow, That was fast Piya

Meenakshi was very happy:Are you sure?I hope you don't feel pressurized to choose Samar.

🔵Thats sweet of aunty

Piya:I am studying in a reputed law college only because Mehul uncle is sponsoring me.I will be always grateful to you all.But I am saying yes because I really like Samar.I like him since childhood.But I never dreamt of getting him as I know my status.

🔵Awww, So she does love him...

Meenakshi was surprised:Really?You love him?

Piya blushed:Yes.

Meenakshi:Then no one can be better than you for Samar.

Piya smiled happily.

Finally Mehul-Meenakshi revealed to Samar that the girl they chose is Piya.

Samar was shocked.

Samar:Piya?Why did you choose Piya for me?

🔵Abb isse kya hua?

Mehul:Why?Piya is your friend.

Meenakshi:We thought that you like her.

Samar:I like her.But not as my life partner.

🔵Abb tum mukar rahe ho dude

Mehul-Meenakshi were shocked.

Mehul:May I know why you don't like to marry Piya?

Samar was silent.

Mehul:Say Samar.We want to know.

Samar:Because she is an orphan.I have a reputed position in this society.So I expect my life partner to have the same status.But an orphan like Piya has no status.

🔵😮😮😮😮😮😮😱 Yeh toh bilkul hi ulta hogaya of what Mehul-Meenu wanted

Mehul-Meenakshi got the biggest shock of their life.

🔵Me too but life ka nahi, hehe

Meenakshi:I never expected this from you Samar.You think Piya is not worth enough just because she is an orphan?

🔵Wahi toh

Mehul:I thought you treat everyone equally seeing how you treat orphans and poor people.But all those were fake?

🔵Wahi toh 😢

Samar:Yes dad.I treat them well.I am not faking my sincerity towards them.But as a life partner I can't imagine an orphan.There are so many nice girls from good family background.Why an orphan was chosen for me?

🔵Pata nahi kya bolun but am really liking the twist and his character sketch, would be fun to see how he falls for her

Mehul:I am ashamed of my upbringing now.

🔵Ohhh

Samar became upset.

Meenakshi:Me too.I never thought that my son would be like this.

She was in tears.

Samar became upset:Dad..mom....

Meenakshi:Don't talk to us.

🔵They should have explained him rather than this but still, abb ismein explain bhi kya karein

They walked away.

They started ignoring Samar which was unbearable for Samar.

🔵Thats wrong, poor guy

After a few days Samar went near them.

Samar:I am really sorry if I hurt you both.But please don't stop talking to me.I can't bear it.

Samar's tears melted them.

Samar:Nothing is more important than both of you for me.I can't see you both upset.So I am willing to marry Piya.

🔵Now just don't bd bad to her haan

They smiled emotionally and hugged Samar.

The trio smiled tearfully.

🔵Thankfullt

Meenakshi:Trust our choice Samar.Piya is the best for you.

Samar smiled slightly.

Samar Piya got married.Piya was very happy while Samar was sad.

🔵Cute edit dii but Samar is sad 😔

The media people asked Samar:Are you doing charity by marrying an orphan?

🔵What the hell, Throw them out Meenu

Samar felt insulted.

Samar thought:If I had married a high class girl I would not have faced this situation.

🔵I am liking it , you are making his character so understandable

Piya felt really hurt.

🔵Aww my sweeto

Meenakshi:Don't you guys have humanity?How can you talk like this about a bride on her own wedding?

🔵Sachi mein 😭

Mehul:Are you guys not ashamed to ask this question?Who will do charity by marrying?Marriage is based on love,not charity.Get lost.

🔵Oh, he is really sweet, show wala toh 🤦‍♀️

Mehul drove them away.

🔵Yippi

Bedroom....

Piya blushed when Samar came near her.Samar became dull.

Samar thought:God..please forgive me for hurting this pure girl.

🔵Toh hurt karna hi kyun hai dude?

Samar:Piya...I don't want our married life to start with lies.So I am telling you frankly.I don't love you.I married you only for my parents.

🔵Chalo itna toh theek hai

Piya was shattered.

Piya:Samar...you did'nt want to marry me because I am an orphan?

🔵Awww, Isse kaise pata chala?

Samar felt upset.He could not face her.

Piya wept:I got my answer.

🔵Aww my girl😭😭😭😭😭

Samar was embarrassed.

Samar thought:Piya is my friend.I feel so hurt to wound her heart.But....

😢😤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely story and start jasmine, something really different and I enjoyed it a lot...specially happy to see Meenu mehul as good people, they are really sweet...They tried to imbibe good qualities in Samar and even though they succedded but of course, somewhere the kind of environment he otherwise was subjected to made Samar feel only Sympathy and not Love towards people lower than him in social status, understandablr and I am really liking it...poor Piya loves him, Even might be happy to marry him but got a break on the very day of wedding, poor girl...she is going to be a lawyer, I am really excited to see her become a successful lawyer, i am wondering if her profession ks going to play a part in the story, also, I really liked the sweet relationship samar shares with his parents but yes, Samar's indirect rejection might have kinda elevated Piya's inferiority complex, wondering how it goes, do update soon.

P.s.: any reason for naming Shaheer Samar?

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Thanks a lot.Actually I have not seen YRHPK.So I don't know the characterization of Mehul Meenakshi in the show.I wasnt aware of the existence of Mehul until I searched for Meenakshi's pics on google. I checked wiki to know Meenakshi's husband's name in the show.

Ha ha.Not Kabir2.Kabir from Jee le zaraa is a mummy's boy,so he wanted his mom to choose a girl for him.But Samar is so busy that he is not interested in marriage now.That's why finally he gave up to his parents' wish n asked them to choose someone for him.

I thought of showing Piya's professional life,but decided not to do it as this is a short love story n not a thriller.So sorry for that.

I was confused about the name.Then i remembered rupal's grandson's name in sns was Samar.So i named him Samar


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Lovely story and start jasmine, something really different and I enjoyed it a lot...specially happy to see Meenu mehul as good people, they are really sweet...They tried to imbibe good qualities in Samar and even though they succedded but of course, somewhere the kind of environment he otherwise was subjected to made Samar feel only Sympathy and not Love towards people lower than him in social status, understandablr and I am really liking it...poor Piya loves him, Even might be happy to marry him but got a break on the very day of wedding, poor girl...she is going to be a lawyer, I am really excited to see her become a successful lawyer, i am wondering if her profession ks going to play a part in the story, also, I really liked the sweet relationship samar shares with his parents but yes, Samar's indirect rejection might have kinda elevated Piya's inferiority complex, wondering how it goes, do update soon.

P.s.: any reason for naming Shaheer Samar?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

Congratulations on your new FS


A story on Shaheer Sheik ...............great

Edited by taahir004 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

Part 1


Fascinating Start


Samar and Piya are friends

now he has married her and also hurt her

as well

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.Actually I have not seen YRHPK.So I don't know the characterization of Mehul Meenakshi in the show.I wasnt aware of the existence of Mehul until I searched for Meenakshi's pics on google. I checked wiki to know Meenakshi's husband's name in the show.

Haha, thats funny...

Ha ha.Not Kabir2.Kabir from Jee le zaraa is a mummy's boy,so he wanted his mom to choose a girl for him.But Samar is so busy that he is not interested in marriage now.That's why finally he gave up to his parents' wish n asked them to choose someone for him.

Yup, I understood by his rejection later that he isn't like Kabir but still na, he could atleast say, You choose...I'll still like to meet once to decide

I thought of showing Piya's professional life,but decided not to do it as this is a short love story n not a thriller.So sorry for that.

Arey, No problem for that...don't say sorry...I just thought that maybe she'll help samar in some way through her profession so thought

I was confused about the name.Then i remembered rupal's grandson's name in sns was Samar.So i named him Samar

Which grandson? Wasn't it Ramakant something?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congrats on the FS!

Part 1

terrific update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Actually Samar was Hetal's grandson.But he was like Kokila's grandson too


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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

Usually it would be the parents who would have opposed a girl like Piya. Here the parents are nice, its Samar who has the problem.

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