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Farhana Sharmin

@FarhanaKeka03

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Posted: 5 years ago

#81

uuh!! kitna hangover ho raha hai... kal kya hua tha? 😉😆

chalo.. finally nasha utri meri...😃 by the way kal main talli nhi thi..dark room tha toh kuch dikhai nhi di... aur ek hath se typing karne se achha hai ki baad karu... luck achha hai ki lappy bhi hai or net bhi... par net ka sure nhi.. kabhi bhi udh sakti hai...

okay!! coming to the update..😊

so all returned Delhi as soon as possible... finally Manohar sighed in relief.

Yog was surprised how his father came to know about his mission.. and there Swadheenta gave him the answer.. he as well as Nawaaz and Jannat were so shocked to know that their work already had attracted some bad eyes..while they hadn't even started their project...

Swadheenta asked Yog what was he up to so that she can take care of the whole thing. and then Yog explained his project.. "Bhramshira".. buddy you remember I told you before that there are somethings that i loved it in the part.. here I go what attracted me the most..

you know I am a great admirer of your writing.. you just have magic in your mind.. you know how to draw attention of mind.. and this is not also any exception. 2 things here that just grabbed all my attention. 😃

1) project ki naming and iska significance jo mythology and science dono ko satisfy karte hai.. sabke hosh udd gaye the jab Yog ne project ko briefly explain kiya...

2) Yog ki presentation of project.,, which Swadhhenta had told him to present so she can ask PM for its permission to start and access. here's the second thing that grab my attention that is Yog proper plan. I liked the way he set the whole strategy and I see you had spiritual touch when you mentioned each part of the team comparing with 5 elements.. that's really good buddy..

there comes the introduction of the team. Dr. Avneesh form BrRAC, Dr. Anil from DRDO, Major Shaurya from Indian Army... and last my most awaited persona,😳 Falaq Rehmani from ISRO...(apni kuch zada hi taarif kar di maine.. 😆 skip the joke...)

and about the rest of the team, Yog requested Swadheenta to choose the perfect ones.

and there they are..the buddies forever..

the Anika Purohit and... And Vinayak Rao Newallkar from IB... (aahan..☺️ inka naam lete hi kuch ho jaati hai buddy.. pakad lo mujhe buddy warna main gir jaaungi😳)

ok,, 😆 cut the joke.. Yog met his 2 new team members, Anika n Vinayak and briefly discussed his plan with them and showed the pictures of other members who will also assist them in the project.

Well... 😳 Vini's hitches.. I can understand that and hope it will go along with the time..😊He should just agreed..

and he did..😃

Swadheenta gave them proper direction about where they should go, how to adapt the environment there, whom they should be in contact with and the most important thing, their aliases.

another admiration from me for your naming ceremony.. har kisi ka naam unki real name, work and field se match karta hai..

so finally the journey of 25 days has been stared...

so AMAZING!!! superb update👏⭐️

I'm on cloud 9 buddy...so excited😃😃😃

love, 🤗Keka

[PS- subah comment draft kiya tha.. net nhi tha.. so ab post kar di.. enjoy😃]

Edited by FarhanaKeka03 - 5 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 5 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03
uuh!! kitna hangover ho raha hai... kal kya hua tha? 😉😆
chalo.. finally nasha utri meri...😃 by the way kal main talli nhi thi..dark room tha toh kuch dikhai nhi di... aur ek hath se typing karne se achha hai ki baad karu... luck achha hai ki lappy bhi hai or net bhi... par net ka sure nhi.. kabhi bhi udh sakti hai...

okay!! coming to the update..😊
so all returned Delhi as soon as possible... finally Manohar sighed in relief.
Yog was surprised how his father came to know about his mission.. and there Swadheenta gave him the answer.. he as well as Nawaaz and Jannat were so shocked to know that their work already had attracted some bad eyes..while they hadn't even started their project...
Swadheenta asked Yog what was he up to so that she can take care of the whole thing. and then Yog explained his project.. "Bhramshira".. buddy you remember I told you before that there are somethings that i loved it in the part.. here I go what attracted me the most..
you know I am a great admirer of your writing.. you just have magic in your mind.. you know how to draw attention of mind.. and this is not also any exception. 2 things here that just grabbed all my attention. 😃
1) project ki naming and iska significance jo mythology and science dono ko satisfy karte hai.. sabke hosh udd gaye the jab Yog ne project ko briefly explain kiya...
2) Yog ki presentation of project.,, which Swadhhenta had told him to present so she can ask PM for its permission to start and access. here's the second thing that grab my attention that is Yog proper plan. I liked the way he set the whole strategy and I see you had spiritual touch when you mentioned each part of the team comparing with 5 elements.. that's really good buddy..
there comes the introduction of the team. Dr. Avneesh form BrRAC, Dr. Anil from DRDO, Major Shaurya from Indian Army... and last my most awaited persona,😳 Falaq Rehmani from ISRO...(apni kuch zada hi taarif kar di maine.. 😆 skip the joke...)
and about the rest of the team, Yog requested Swadheenta to choose the perfect ones.
and there they are..the buddies forever..
the Anika Purohit and... And Vinayak Rao Newallkar from IB... (aahan..☺️ inka naam lete hi kuch ho jaati hai buddy.. pakad lo mujhe buddy warna main gir jaaungi😳)
ok,, 😆 cut the joke.. Yog met his 2 new team members, Anika n Vinayak and briefly discussed his plan with them and showed the pictures of other members who will also assist them in the project.
Well... 😳 Vini's hitches.. I can understand that and hope it will go along with the time..😊He should just agreed..
and he did..😃
Swadheenta gave them proper direction about where they should go, how to adapt the environment there, whom they should be in contact with and the most important thing, their aliases.
another admiration from me for your naming ceremony.. har kisi ka naam unki real name, work and field se match karta hai..
so finally the journey of 25 days has been stared...

so AMAZING!!! superb update👏⭐️
I'm on cloud 9 buddy...so excited😃😃😃
love, 🤗Keka

[PS- subah comment draft kiya tha.. net nhi tha.. so ab post kar di.. enjoy😃]

Hi Buddy ... Finally I am glad to see you back with your critical analysis & I too feel it completes my update everytime . . Good your luck favoured & you along with your Lappi are in good state 😆

True finally all returned to Delhi safe & sound & Manohar was bound to react he only had Yog left with him ... Finally Yog spill the beans on questions of Manohar & Swadheenta & was shocked when came to know that his work is being spied by some bad eyes already . . Even Jannat & Nawaz were worried after hearing the same .. . Swadheenta asked the exact details & Yog told her about his project Bhramashira ... Well thanks a lot buddy that you appreciate it so much but what I had in mind was about an invincible powerful missile I related it accordingly

First regarding naming & relating it with mythology, reason was that the details & mention in our puranas are quite interesting & also scientifically logical

Second I really wanted to relate them with the project so the & 5 element part I have decided before naming the characters ... Well I will be honest that I searched about 2 to 3 days for project Shakti Nuclear test that India conducted in 1998 as it was most secret & successful mission which was conducted after so much of opposition of super powers of the world .. So I had put up those small points as well as my khopdi 😆

Yes Finally Dr Avneesh Dr. Anil Major Shaurya arrived in picture along with our sweet Falaq (koi nahi apni taareef kar sakti hoo)

Yes as Swadheenta is heading intelligence so obviously Yog will seek her help & she gave him the best . .BFF for ever our sweet Ani & Vini.. .. The great Anika Purohit as she knows about the mission & Our sweet Vinayak Rao Newalkar (mere upar mat girna buddy jaao jaake Vini ki bahoon main giro)

Well finally Yog briefed the details of the project & also introduced them to the entire team which will be involved in this mission

Vini too had hitches & it had a strong reason behind it & surely it will go with the time when complete truth will come in front of him

True finally the journey has begun & now Swadheenta guided them with proper instructions to start with the mission ... Aliases should match with the work that they are doing right

More fun coming up

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 5 years ago

#83

Awesome update Di 👏👏

Loved it

So they all safely returned to Delhi

Swadheenta reveals that Yog is being spied on because of his work.

I really love the details of Yog's project. I'm sure you have done a great research before writing this. There were references of current war state and mythology. This is my favourite part, especially because of the effort you put in while writing.

'Bhramashira' is the neutron missile that he's working on. Everyone is stunned hearing his explanation.

Swadheenta is willing to arrange his meeting with the PM to propose this project.

His presentation was so completely detailed that I felt like this is real. And the reference to the real life events at the time of Nuclear Test planning was impeccable.

As a science student, I have to say that this is beyond anything I've ever read. You should be a scientist Di...itni achhi tarah se details present ki hai aapne

ISRO, BARC, DRDO and Indian Army are also included in this mission.

The time limit has been assigned...25 days. Well this is the start of the most dangerous missions of their lives.

I can't wait to read more...this is my first time with these characters and I already love them. Your stories are my all time fav.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please update the next part soon

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 5 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
Awesome update Di 👏👏
Loved it
So they all safely returned to Delhi
Swadheenta reveals that Yog is being spied on because of his work.
I really love the details of Yog's project. I'm sure you have done a great research before writing this. There were references of current war state and mythology. This is my favourite part, especially because of the effort you put in while writing.
'Bhramashira' is the neutron missile that he's working on. Everyone is stunned hearing his explanation.
Swadheenta is willing to arrange his meeting with the PM to propose this project.
His presentation was so completely detailed that I felt like this is real. And the reference to the real life events at the time of Nuclear Test planning was impeccable.
As a science student, I have to say that this is beyond anything I've ever read. You should be a scientist Di...itni achhi tarah se details present ki hai aapne
ISRO, BARC, DRDO and Indian Army are also included in this mission.
The time limit has been assigned...25 days. Well this is the start of the most dangerous missions of their lives.
I can't wait to read more...this is my first time with these characters and I already love them. Your stories are my all time fav.
Thanks a lot for the PM
Please update the next part soon

Thanks dear glad you like it

Yup they safely landed in Delhi

Manohar & Swadheenta told them why they sent Anika along with the truth that their work is being spied

Yog finally present his research details yup to be true I for 2 3 days checked videos on operation Shakti our Nuclear test of 1998

Let me tell you dear these reference are symbolic & it connects to mythology as well as science

All were bound to get shocked when Yog reveals that it's a neutron missile project

Swadheenta finally agree to help him to meet PM

Yog presentation & complete plan was full proof & as I said this is how it was all planned in actual Nuclear test

You are a science student. ... That's great dear well main literature waali hi theek hoon but I wish you all the very best 😊

Yup BARC ISRO DRDO along with Indian Army are included in this mission & finally after approval mission starts

Well Swadheenta instructs them their part & assigns a time limit of 25 days for the completion of this mission

Well mission interesting hoga or usse zayada uske baadh ka part bhi . .

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Arakshi234

@Arakshi234

Navigator

Posted: 5 years ago

#85

Very nice update di 👏

Sorry for late reply very sorry

And thank you for PM 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 5 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Arakshi234
Very nice update di 👏
Sorry for late reply very sorry

And thank you for PM 😊

Thanks dear glad you like it

No issues dear

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 5 years ago

#87

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 5 years ago

#88

Hey Guys I here by add first link character of this case ... I really hope you like it :

David O'Connell : He is a strong & efficient spy of an American spy Agency & is behind Yog & his team to collect information about this covert project . he is strong sensible & reliable source of his agency