~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 9

Originally posted by: sharda_123

Awesome update dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Nandini

Quite emotional and beautiful update

I really feel for Noor she is suffering a lot

Zeeshan is using all his Rights on her without giving her any right

Samar correctly pointed that in such friendship or relationship she will be ultimately sufferer

Zeeshan created a huge scene seeing Noir and Samar hand in hand for sure he has feelings for her 😳

Even Noor confessed her feelings in spur of anger and impulse making Zeeshan realize reality

Zeeshan was stunned for a while and even Noor was absolutely clueless about his reaction ... Let's see how all this change their relationship 😊

Waiting to read more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

@Shano- Thanks for suggesting me this FF hun 🤗

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Just finished the prologue 😃

I like how the story kept transitioning between the real time traffic scene and earlier memories, it was very smooth 👏

Also the characters seem fun, their banter and teasing each other, it all is so real 😛.

I loved their nickname 😳, they say them a lot though 😆

The Pir Baba stuff gave me Shehr-e-Zaat vibes, it took me back those days

Judging by the prologue I feel Zeeshan changed a lot after getting engaged, maybe even took her for granted.

Also why was the remembering the grass scene a bad nostalgia for Noor? Is it because Zee changed? Or did I skip a part of it?

Can't wait to read all the parts 😳😳

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Part 1:

@Shano- 🤗

First of all super sorry for being super duper late hun

Now I have to commend you on your attention to detail 👏👏, you have such a fab style of writing hun 😳

I love the song you chose for Noor, it suits her personality 👏👏

Noor getting authoritative and jealous on random fan-girling is adorable 😆