~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 8

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Quite emotional and beautiful update

I really feel for Noor she is suffering a lot

Zeeshan is using all his Rights on her without giving her any right

Samar correctly pointed that in such friendship or relationship she will be ultimately sufferer

Zeeshan created a huge scene seeing Noir and Samar hand in hand for sure he has feelings for her 😳

Even Noor confessed her feelings in spur of anger and impulse making Zeeshan realize reality

Zeeshan was stunned for a while and even Noor was absolutely clueless about his reaction ... Let's see how all this change their relationship 😊

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First of all super sorry for being super duper late hun

Now I have to commend you on your attention to detail 👏👏, you have such a fab style of writing hun 😳

I love the song you chose for Noor, it suits her personality 👏👏

Noor getting authoritative and jealous on random fan-girling is adorable 😆

First of all super sorry for being so late 😳😳, I just had a few exams lined up but now I'm free as a bird 😃

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Part 2:

The first para and all about the sleeping beauties in the lectures is so relate-able, its brought me back to my college days when we all used yawn all day long 😆

Ahh Zee decoding all women in a single line, lol. Its is true though, and Noor blushing away coz she madly in love with him 😳

That "Bada Slow Antenna..." line cracked me so bad lmao 🤣. He deserved another smacking for that 😆😆

So Zee has Mommy issues? Is this why he's a little (if not a lot) dominating?

Noor having a little tea party with Elizabeth Bennett 😳😳. She's soo cute! Remembering the first moment Zee walked into her life.

Little Zee and Noor's convo is so endearing, Zee acting like a strong kid while Noor telling him that its to be sad and even scared. Zee trusting her with harsh realities of his life. Noor has always been such a cutiepatootie, sitting down next to him saying she has all the time in the world for him 😳😳. Its such a sweet beginning for the two

Sometimes, we as adults, act super selfish. We destroy the worlds of these tiny humans. I'm not saying that divorcing someone is wrong, coz sometimes its the only option. But I hate seeing the children suffer.

Zee's attitude towards his Mum, reminds me soo much of Kerim and Farhattein Ilgaz's relationship 😳. They leave their kids behind without giving it a second thought and then beg for forgiveness like all those years of pain can be wiped out with an apology.

Zee going all red with jealousy while seeing Noor get cosy and smiley with Samar, I'm still not sure if he loves her or its just a little possessiveness coz she's the only female who holds importance in his life. And he's so dominating man! Or maybe he's right about Samar 😲

I won't judge until I've read all the parts 😃