~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 10

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Shanocim 🤗

First of all super sorry for being so late 😳😳, I just had a few exams lined up but now I'm free as a bird 😃

Firstly Chan, you need to stop apologizing for your late comments everytime!

It's okay, you show up here regularly that's enough for us. 🤗

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Part 2:

The first para and all about the sleeping beauties in the lectures is so relate-able, its brought me back to my college days when we all used yawn all day long 😆

Ahh Zee decoding all women in a single line, lol. Its is true though, and Noor blushing away coz she madly in love with him 😳

That "Bada Slow Antenna..." line cracked me so bad lmao 🤣. He deserved another smacking for that 😆😆

So Zee has Mommy issues? Is this why he's a little (if not a lot) dominating?

Noor having a little tea party with Elizabeth Bennett 😳😳. She's soo cute! Remembering the first moment Zee walked into her life.

Tell me about it, I used to yawn in every class that used to be after 12 pm. 😆😆

I loved how Zeeshan decoded every single woman, and trust me if not us then majority of the women think that if a man complimented her on her beauty, he's sure shot interested in her! 😆

Zeeshan is actually an idiot for not noticing that blush on her face.

Glad you loved that slow antenna part, trust Nandini to come up with such hilarious one liners. 🤣

Zeeshan's family background has a lot to do with how he has shaped up as a person.

Little Zee and Noor's convo is so endearing, Zee acting like a strong kid while Noor telling him that its to be sad and even scared. Zee trusting her with harsh realities of his life. Noor has always been such a cutiepatootie, sitting down next to him saying she has all the time in the world for him 😳😳. Its such a sweet beginning for the two

Sometimes, we as adults, act super selfish. We destroy the worlds of these tiny humans. I'm not saying that divorcing someone is wrong, coz sometimes its the only option. But I hate seeing the children suffer.

Zee's attitude towards his Mum, reminds me soo much of Kerim and Farhattein Ilgaz's relationship 😳. They leave their kids behind without giving it a second thought and then beg for forgiveness like all those years of pain can be wiped out with an apology.

Trust me Noor's innocence and cuteness will win you over, it's one such character that we both have written and created with all our hearts. 😳

You can actually see the difference in their upbringing right here that for Zeeshan it's not okay to be crying but for Noor it's okay to be that and even sharing your grief with someone is.

Its solely cuz of the families they've been brought in.

Im so glad you all loved their beginning so much! <3

I so agree and you know that why I and Nandini feel that couples who don't get along well shouldn't have kids either cuz ultimately it's them who suffer the most. Bearing the pain of divorce and if not that, then a life full of arguments, shouting instead of a loving secured family.

Loved how you drew out the connection between Kerim and Zeeshan. Only difference, that it made Kerim a better person but cant comment on how Zeeshan took it?

Zee going all red with jealousy while seeing Noor get cosy and smiley with Samar, I'm still not sure if he loves her or its just a little possessiveness coz she's the only female who holds importance in his life. And he's so dominating man! Or maybe he's right about Samar 😲

I won't judge until I've read all the parts 😃

A bit of possessiveness on the best friend's behalf makes sense cuz she's the only woman in his life but where to draw that line is crucial.

Stay Tuned.😳

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Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Part 3:

The best thing about your FFs Shano is your Female Protagonists are real women, no-nonsense, no-make-up-real women. 😳

You incorporated The Bachelor in your FF 😆😆, Noor's reaction is exactly how we both felt while watching the glimpses of it 😆😆

Poor Samar is on the receiving end of Noor's ignorance! I really wish she'd just talk to him 😳. I didn't really like the way she shrugged him off 😭. But then she felt so bad about it. Zeeshan deserves a nice kick on his bum for making her go all cold-turkey on Samar

Also he's so dominating!

Noor and Ahmed's convo about Zee and her defending him 😳So Ahmed has decided on his would-be-Bahu and the son is still clueless about it 😆

I like how Ahmed said that Zee needs to get his crap together and realise his feelings for her, coz she won't sit her entire life waiting for him. 👏

Zee may be a dominating jack-ass but I absolutely love his banters with Noor, they are way too adorable 😳😆

The marriage convo ending in absolute awkwardness 😆😆

Absolutely in love with your writing skills Shanocim 🤗

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

@Shanocim & Nadini- A big hug to both you girls for bearing with my irksome late replies to your awesome FF parts 🤗. Thanks soo much for bearing with me 😳

And now my sweeties, here is my reply of the last part

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Zee's reaction to his Khandaan's awkward silence is so my reaction during dinner table convos when I say something absurd and everyone blankly stares at me 😆😆

Noor has such a normal lovey-dovey family, no wonder she turned out so mature and full of love 😳

Noor putting a bookmark in her novels, I do that too 😉. I hate it when someone messes with my bookmarks 😆

I'm glad Noor isn't ignoring Samar in this part , all those thoughts of blurting out about how Zee told her to stay away from Samar is hilarious, it'd be super funny if she actually said all that 😆😆. And BAM!! Samar actually likes her . But she's so sweet any guy can be in love with her na 😃

I liked how they both were so mature in their conversation, he told her the truth and she told him she didn't feel the same way 👏

But Mr Tornado aka Zeeshan walking in on them was , and his obsessive-possessive attitude, yelling and all

That entire Filmy fight on Zee's part was so wrong. Damn you jackass!😡 She's your friend not some private property. You don't own her .

I'm sorry gals for being so vocal about my hatred towards Mr Tornado's attitude, but the woman in me simply cannot resist it!!😆😆

So finally the cat's out of the bag 👏👏. Glad she yelled out her ILU. If this is the end, it'll be for her own good. At least now that Donkey knows!!😳

Ayesha is such an endearing Mum, thankfully Noor had someone to confide in after her very public embarrassment 😳

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Phew Done 🤪

Both you girls are awesome at this!! You're doing such a fab job with with collab writing 👏

Originally posted by: .Archangel.

Res. <3

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Holy Cow! 😲

I literally forgot about this resd space and you didn't even reminded me about it. But anyways, I'm here now. 😆❤️

Even I forgot! 😆

To begin with, what I feel is that Zeeshan takes Noor and her place in his life very casual and granted. The way he just dismissed the talk about his and Noor's future is actually alarkinh and I really feel for Noor who'll suffer eventually being the sensitive one.

I'm glad that things have sorted out between Samar and Noor, and the latter has shown enough courage to stop putting up with his dictating shit. 👏

But let's look at it like this, He didn't really knew they were talking about him and Noor. Though he should have known.

Hurting Noor would be the last thing he would want too. I mean they're childhood best friends. It's his ignorance that would cost BOTH. 😊

Samar is an adorable, sensible guy and I loved how he himself came up to talk to Noor instead of sitting and sulking. <3

His cute confession that he indeed likes our Noor and how bravely he took Noor's decision. Pure Gentleman. 👏👏

I really want to give him a hug for this. :*

Samar had two options, either he could've ruined his friendship with Noor with an immature reaction or he could've accepted it gracefully. He chose the better and guess, that's what is expected from a MAN. 😳

And here comes, "Im Noor's Best Friend, So I Have Rights On Her Y'all." Zeeshan. 🥱

The audacity with which he bosses Noor around with what to do and what not gets on my nerves! 😡

I'm glad Samar stood up for him and Noor! 👏👏👏

Though the fight was ugly, but whatever Samar was bang on and surely we will all see a glimpse of it in future updates.

Zeeshan is impulsive and short tempered. He doesn't thinks twice before reacting and that perhaps is his biggest weak point. That's exactly what happened here as well.

Samar had to stand up for Noor, coz that's what a real man does. As for what Samar said, there'll be plenty of that in upcoming updates. Story has just begun. 😃

Noor's outburst was so justified! 👏

I LOVED how she pointed out that it's just Zeeshan's big male ego which just couldn't see Noor happy in any other guy's company. 👏

He doesn't wants her for himself neither will he let her be of someone else's. Hypocrite! 😡

I agree there. The outburst was much needed. Zeeshan needed it. He needs to understand that she's not his property. Neither she's a puppet of his fingers. He can't control her however he wants. 😡

Noor's sudden love confession was surely baffling for both and them and being the innocent soul, she definitely takes everything to her heart.

I can understand when she felt that all of that not only tattered her image, her character but also made her guilty in front of Zeeshan.

Knowing how impulsive Zeeshan is, Noor's thinking that he might think that's for all these years Noor has been decieving him under the pretense of her friendship and loosing him is last thing she wants.

The scene where she cries in Ayesha's embrace letting out all her grief was so endearing and reminded me of my own relationship with my mum. ❤️

Seriously, I never missed having a sibling for she was always there for me. <3

That's the sole reason why I kept it. ❤️

Ayesha's soothing, sensible words surely calmed Noor down a lot. I loved how she pointed out that may be her confession would let Zeeshan ponder over his feelings. 😳

Even my mum always has the right things to say when I'm troubled or worried. <3

All the Mum's have the right things to tell their children. Saviors!! 😳

And Zeeshan is so lost without Noor. I'm somewhere glad that he's realizing Noor's importance in his life but let's see for how far? 😳

Isn't it a human nature? We don't value a person before he goes away. That you'll have to wait and read. 😆

Update Soon Love! 🤗

You've to update. 😛

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Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Both you girls are awesome at this!! You're doing such a fab job with with collab writing 👏

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Waiting for update Nandini 😳