Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 97

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

hawww u already nnotated,i had to edit for more.just finished chapter 26.papaji k pant... HI TAZ...ab tu intne jaldi mein hai tu mein kya karoon..
anyway hammieee wahhh u r sooo romantic, ye payelwala scene wass out of the world. and can blv u wrote this.and u announce that u CAN'T write romantic novel. Liar kahiki, PR is a romantic novel, isme sab romance hi to hain. added masala is dutta's fauji avatar which i m loving a lot.
have to recall taz, hammie got clearly carried away... payal scene in Laagi was such a memorable scene.. i tried to take it to dizzy heights😛...
Cham chammm payel baje on dutra's HAIRY chest.hahaha.hammie hammie hammie hammie where u got all these innovative ideas?ye serialwalo needs to hire u cz ur imagination knows no bounds.hahaha.
Khan sahiba kabab mein naye haddi kya?ye chirkut harshad kam tha kya?
ahh yes.. lady khan... there's more to her than meets the eyes...keep checking out
Read chapter 27.hayeee Dutta is sachme gadha, he is demanding HIS chunni???hahaha.aur kia janoar ban jate, nakku k dupatta khicke le k gye.hayeee naughty naughty dutta.
Char lamho k mulakat fir lambi zudayiii...khan ko itna zyada attention kyun milraha in ur story?what is ur matlab?like bharti di merese bhi daant padenge. bart was getting jealous.. khan beech mein ah gaye... why? find out taz...
Oh Allah how cpuld u write too many details about PT ???u show brilliance in ur homework as well. hummm do check up references taz
Heading towards d next chapter.love u hammie...thanks for enjoying..😃

just read chapter 28. Tide of men or something... hmm Harshad's chracter is uglier than i thought. hope he doesnt harm nakku this time. khan has become female antagonist or d inncent third angle? looking forward to that. their life of zudaai is continued.dutta n HIS chunni...hayeee...
dekh judai ke beghaar story is incomplete.. Laagi made good use of this much repeated formula

Chapter 29.
Here u r determined to keep d reader glued to ur work shukar hain I wont have to wait for some friday for this update I will b reading again now???ughhh nooo why did u do this to me I have too many things to study na? Main socha k study karnese pehle thoda ye padhlu ab next chapter na padhne tak chain nehi ane wale.
😆 you are hooked... and Iam loving it.. try keeping away from it😆
chapter 30, 31, 32.
there is nothing good or bad, thinking makes it so.😆
Shakesapeare...
hammie hammie hammie, ur dutta was breathtaking in the courtroom scene.but nakku stole my heart, sherni kahiki. true sher's valour rubs off on her too!
👏👏
dutta nakku romance continued.dutta mischievous, nakku besharam.hayeee hayeee hayeee kia kia combo. readers demand... me was supplying their demand..I hasten to add innocently
lauren ka wo jo ahem...haan dutta dekh leta hain n nakku gaves her that look hayeee too cute👏Harshad was more than a kabab mein haddi.😡 disgusting admi hain.i m so pleased with the Saab who ignored the pic.nakku had d honesty to tell him and he didnt trust that picture evidence. reminds me of the scene from lagi, dutta says mujhe nakku pe shak nehi shak uske pyar par hain.
in Laagi too there was a character called Suresh who blackmailed naku by showing dutta a morphed photo of naku married to him..
she has two medical conditions for which I am treating her, even a slight deviation from the controlled diet can also escalate her hypertension or aggravate her diabetes, so ensure she eats healthily , rests properly and is monitored carefullyhope the writer knows everything by heart😆
haan haan.. with a nag like you on my back how can the writer forget...
hawww dutta gussa, nakku ne jhut to na boli.and i hate this KHAN.😡bloody chipku kahiki.the basanti mango veeru scene is hilarious hamie, i loved loved ur sense of humor here.😆👏
yeah... iwas in a silly playful mood... so let myself go..
abtak itna hi padhli, pappaji k pant to khatam honeka nam na lete.to abtak itna hi padh payi main
erhhh taz... you know I have long legs.. so my trousers too will be longer then average lady log...😛... chal you..stop whining and whinging.. and read on when you get the chance.. catch you later..😃... hammie

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

so you back as Anna this time and khair ho jaye.. you brought ranbir too in my all time fav gana..😛
Haye hammie haye haye haye ye sab maine kiya padh liya.chapter 33,34.
Ye dutta kyun itna gussa hota hain, kuch zyada over react nehi?n naku to maahan banti rehti hain bappa bappa karti lekin andarse shameless hain. why are you getting so hyper? leave them alone..first love hai dono ka..and dutta fauji hai..a man in uniform..which girls love..
Miss nuspa, she is lagging behind, miles away.warna main uske saath maze le sakti thi
Ye kia likha apne hammie ji, thrills hi thrills milte rehe mujhe.Dutta k shower scene, uske soap aur shampoo tak ka description di apne.sare ladkio k band baj gye honge 😆 .lakin bathroom se nikal ne k baad apke lion ne jo dialogue mari hain nakku ko.that he will throw d towel away,sawariya ha ha ha ha sawariya ha ha ha ha sawariya ooo sawariya, jab se teri naina, meri naino seee lage reee , ahem sorry madamji...ahem nakku chahe jo bhi bole apne muhse k DON'T U DARE, lakin man hi man laddu to zarur aa rahe honge.haye haye haye... 😳 😳 😳 .aur jo tightly wrapped towel se nakku ko giggling miley na, haye I remembered john from dostana.
😳 another scene where i got carried..away.. a bit too much ..as for Nus.. she is bade doctor sahiba.. so she will more disciplined than you... chamak chalo...🤣



Nakku singing a song for her saab, hmmm I love d song kyun hain roothe mose mohan kyun.
I loved d entry of aye sab n her health issues.jagadambe ab bappa k sath milke shadi karade un dono k, warna shadi se pehle hi un dono me wo ghatna ghat jayega.aur nakku k Bappa dekhte hi reh jayega. 😆 . yes.. taz.. remember that song.. such a fab song..it inspired romance in me between dutta and naku.. still does.. they were and will be the eternal jodi for me MAHI and Mishal... of Laagi..
Ye apke 34 chapter wale doctor jo hain ikdam k ullu hain.abhi Hypertension kia ho gye hain stroke tak chale gye hain. Doctors aise na bola karte.every disease can lead to death.ab koi puche to unko agar prognosis bataogi , to ray of hope bhi dena padega at the same time.haan and everytime I have to say it is on Allah's hands.ab kabhito mujhse breaking bad news hote bhi nehi.I m too bad at it.but this doctor had a option not to give dutta a panick attack.
HT can lead to stroke ,taz... the worst possible has to shown..to give preventive medication..

Chapter 35.hmm more of family bonding rather than romance.dutta and his concern for his mother.I loved the title.his mother, his widow mother who lost her husband in a war.then somehow managed to take care of all the children.
Duji drunk scene, ye hajam na hote mujhse.bekar shaukh of the rich people.that dutta was a don, it still goes.but for an educated army man dutta, ye kuch zyada hi lagte hain.nakku should have stopped him...shuddup... I may have returned from Turkey.. where i used steam parlour 😛
So dutta n his chunni is again back.lol.it is funny to see him possessive about d chunni.cute thing hammie.😳
chunni is a replacement of naku for him... safe and gives him solace..😆
chapter 36: hamlet k nakku pehenli helmet, ughh dutta unable to see her beautiful green eye, bechare.i must say dutta was hawwwtt in the bike.tum ho pas mere, pas mere... purane yaadein taza ho gye.i cried a lot after watching the film, jis tarha chinega, mujhse ye jaha tumhe...i love d way u add songs to any scene and dutta nakku feels every word. yes Rockstar.. ranbir..loved the film...
hawww dutta ko papa banneka jaldi hain.rup tera mastana ,pyar mera dewana ,bhul koi humse na ho jaye...jmm ho na pae, nakku k bappa firse aa gye berahem. haye hammie apne readers ko kitne tadpayi hogi. no wonder the readers were crazy for fridays.ek insan k comments mujhe bohat entertain karte hain, meri bharti di.gussa karti hain, accha mast comment bhi karti hain, khush bhi hoti hain.😆yess..bart.. such a loyal readers .. a great lady i always looked up to her.. still do.. was very close to her..

bohat ho gye, anno kardo.nuspa k bare mein maat socho.wo kachua hain.mere piche aag lag gye hain.mujhe jaldi khatam karna hain.fettered affection k prologue padhli thi, wo padhke laga k wo bhi bohat jamega, so abhi jaldi karrahi hu.apke writing padhke khatam karnese pehle agar mar gyi to? so sorry... for turning up late you know the changes in my personal life recently .. wot rubbish are you talking taz.. you cant mar.. who will ifight with humm? nus is too good..

Phew.finished thread one.dhinchak dhinchakkk.oye hoyeee. welll done👏
Love u hammie.love ur pen. you are soo so gracious..love your comments.. my joy
Ab ye kabab mein haddi khan to apse kuch zyada bhao kha rahi hain.itne lambe lambe, acche acche uske gungan ...if u needed a fauzi heroine to nakkuko bana deti na.iske role kahi nakku se zyada na ho jaye.
Hammie hammie hammie, haye ye dutta bhi bappa jaise beraham hain.khud to romance karte firte hain, pyar k dushman ban gye.ye bechara dutta shave kyun karli? Nakku to ladki boli usse, main bolti chicken.lol.
haaa haaa... mishal posted pictureson some site where he was clean shaven... had to use that in my writing...😆
Miss ur writing.
Miss ur writing.
Miss ur writing.
Miss ur writing.
Miss ur writing.
Miss ur writing.

This is what I found to b d best in chapter 37.there was almost a tie between two.
one can still love someone from far ,without any hope of accomplishing love in totality, for one still has within ones 'self the emotion of love for the other
love your fishing for my quotes.. only you can still build me up.. bart used to do that too..
Superb lines hammie. 👏 did u see my new siggi?I was asking for nice quotes.kitne sare hain.fir kisi ek take se uthake dal di, but now liking a lot others n that too more.U NEVER HELPED ME. 😲
I DID taz... hammie is delighted to be attached to you and Nusi..in your siggy... well done.. keep reading taz... i will try to behave and come here.. promptly...😃 yours hammie

Originally posted by: NusiSg

helooo Nusi... supershot! to see you..
Hammieee.. I'm on 24 n ths chhotti.. she has been in a marathon I guess.. peeche kutte parre hain kia.. ruk jaa theher ja.. samjh he nahi aata iss ko..36.. ... ... pagal kahin ki.. bewakoof.. I'll yry to mnt on 24 directly hammie.. plzzz bear with me..😭
chooti.. has skates on chooro use... and why the ansoo... oh come on Nus... its me hammie .. and this is dutta.naku thread... you come when your time allows it .. ok...😃

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hammie hammie hammie, hi... there again taz...
really excited to start thread 2. aacha?
tasha on a valentine date, haye hayeee.
gajar ka halwa, humm... i love it too.. along with ladoo..
dutta gifting naku his tshirt.so after the lion toy n chunni, it is t shirt's time.sooo very romantic i wonder where u get such ideas. lovers universally behave similarly...
dutta still pyar k dushman, cute nok jhoks between roops n baji.👏
i loved the title of chapter 38, my fav quote from Shakespeare.
I made sure the key characters.. remained.. in my FF..

Hello hammie,
Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie,
Really liked chapter 39 👏 👏
Somehow can relate to khan.but here nakkusha stole my heart with her purity.she knew khan loves dutta, still she wants him to rescue her.a little bit o jealousy and insecurity must b there somehow but never strong enough to not helping khan.what a cute heart she is.loved her in this chapter. 👏..Humm.. not a crooked bone in her body..aache hai dil saaf hai

Khan rescued, hammie getting chappals from readers for getting partial for khan, they call her kkkhan. hahaha.nakusha naraz with hammie, bechari ko khan na pasan. public k sentiment ko age rakhte hue hammie age badhti hain...main uske piche, pauch gyi main chapter 41 mein. tamanna k mazedar comments ka asar mujhpe ho raha hain.
haan bhaut sandals pare... i kept ducking!😆..tammy and her emoticons were a treat input on my threads.. loved them
hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammmie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie👏👏

dekho na ye mera fav writer ne kia masla likha: i still believe in these values.. taz
tera lipte hoi shawl posed the alert Naku, uske neeche tera badan ke elava ,hatyar bhi ho sakte thain.., yehe wajha the they asked you to step in for a frisk, had I been there I would have done the same, mujhe pata hai tune kyon nehi shawal utra jab us ne thujhe kha utrane ko, pun kyon ke you resisted, due to as they saw it purdah, is se un ka shaq aur bhi muzboot ho giya ke ,under the guise of maintaining purdah you are possibly carrying such material that could possibly pose a threat to national security and general public safety" Dutta reasoned calmly. Naku's face flushed with dissension, and she burst out.."but that's not fair Saab! why do we compartmentalise people into little niches, put little caps of colour ,religion, culture, values ,language ,race! Kyon? kya ye kafi nehi ke hum sab insaan hain and we strive to live together peacefully in harmony..after all we are the supreme in creation, everything was created for our pleasure!, even animals live peacefully in groups, packs, and herds, tu phir insaan kyon nehi"Naku argued, "because Naku baghwaan ne insaan ko dil aur dahmak ke elva, the ablity to choose bhi de hai, if we chose to live in dissension and division, we will get chaos not order, however if we chose to live in sensitivity towards each other's differentiated needs ,there will be some form of synchronization among the peoples of this planet earth! deduced Dutta, paused briefly and parted his lips, "rehi baat shak ke, tu the world as it stands, today, disparity between developed and under developed nation; injustice towards the suffering and destitute; nations forever commanding territorial gains; nations bearing the brunt of climatic changes; ongoing tussle of the survival of the fittest! really reflects are attitudes in our day to day dealings with the diversity of peoples we come across, each with individual needs, which may not be the same as ours; animals live harmoniously in packs ,herds for they are the same species in one pack, as humans, we are the same biologically ,but richly diverse in socio/cultural ,spiritual values across the globe, henceforth,Naku, we have to grab the truth of adaptability at all times! now that is a hard fact!, remember the essence of humanity has to be along the lines of ,compassion mercy and humility towards one another!".. Dutta, prevailed...both Naku and Khan stared at his firm stubble face, this man who has a finger poised on the trigger, but still is the man with a golden heart!

The issues we face being a muslim, in the name of security, the harassment ...very well done hammie.a pen can say everything.i love u hammie.i love u a lot...sadly the world 's mindset has become worse.. and then there are celebs who follow the general crowd too.. follow herd instinct.. but Iam a humble individual and have my humble take.. which celebrates, all faiths, colour,race belonging to the global community.. keep reading... and thanks enjoyed reading my quotes... those days.. SIGH.. tasha the everlasting jodi for me... 😃 yours hammie

Originally posted by: NusiSg

hey Nus! super to see you
Hey Hammie pardon me for being gayab frm cmmnting here fr so long.. was reading but wasn't cmmnting. .maaf kar de yaara.. m pakdoing my kaan.. 😳 bas... bas! no need to be melodramatic!... no issues.. you come when your busy life permits Nus... will always give me joy

Hmm so I left commeting after sagae.. post sagaae tasha was absolutely astonishing ham.. datta with baccha of Ram was pure bliss.. such great depiction of papa datta by u ham.. loved it completely. 😃

yes.. wanted to show Dutta's bonding towards a baby..

Sagae made datta even more besharam. . gosh he jst wanna squeeze nakku whenever got the chance..😛 loved those romantic scenes prior to ths judae now.. ur right hammie..judaae k bina har love story incomplete hai.. loved reading their parting scenes can visualise the whole scene such powerful words.. 👍🏼

was trying and testing formulas... they never fail to work..😛

So then I reach on chap 24 finally.. waahhh waahhh hammie.. Datta's frst day with OUTs ham.. how can u write that scene with so much depth yaar.. every minute detail about such technical war stuff.. I kno u yalked to ur bro in law prior to writing that but u seems professional writer while penning down those demo class scenes.. simply brilliant yarr.. ur writing reminds me of Alpha Bravo Charlie.. my frst childhood forces serial.. hav u seen that ham..?? ohhh God I've still a crush on Faraz yaar.. ur ff took me to those golden days of PTV classics hammie.. do u kno shoaib mansoor..?? he had conceptualized that serial.. n ur ff reminds me of that PTV classic..😳

I'm enjoying ur writing ham.. plz bear my silence. . I'll try to come here more frequently. . love u..😳
yes... faintly recall the serial... i did read up on assualt and obstacle courses.. so used referential info too.. its what I love watching.. on classic w wars classic uk channels... glad you loving it.. I loved creating and catching the spirit..and the pulse is that of teacher Nus!😉 thanks for your lovely comment... yours hammie

Originally posted by: simpleAnna

Hawww nuspa, maine apko bin bataye comment karti rahi yaha, so u did d same????meko granted leli apne firse?
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oyeee chotti doc... stop creating a commotion! go!stand outside the class room! disruptive pupil...😛
Hammie hammie hammie, to b or not to b , that's d...awesome chapter.yes 41 n 42... dutta nakku on holi at PW.ye holi mein kitna kuch hott ho sakta tha, but...ye humare aur nakku k sare asha pe pani dalke good boy banke dutta ne KUCH NEHI KIAAA 😡 😡 😡
erhhh public mein the soldier boy is a good boy.. cannot shame the stripes and stars!
Nakku on mission, lovely determined nakku.strong character just like laagi, chui mui si lakin aag hain. sherni... hai.. appropriate for a lion..
Dutta sab to pyar k dushman ban baithe kapur k.ye khan k twist pata nehi kya hain, but keeping me hooked to d next chapter.sorry hammie was bz with hospital.my parents r here.to mauke mauke pe I will read PR. yes i know taz..its right the soldier should be grounded for a bit
I need to read d next chapter, warna cousin k wedding k khana hajam nehi hoga.
erhhh how was the khana... hope you ate a porition of palu on my behalf and prawn masla...
Chapter 43, 44.story getting more n more interesting..
👏 I m loving d way u r proceeding with d sotry.haven't yet revealed.
👏 and I find it nail biting suspense.I regret for reading d suspense bhare chapter just before d wedding place, and tension mein mera enjoyment I khatam ho gye.pata nehin wo khan witch ne kya ki mere dutta k sath.
i liked that khan girl...
Chapter 45: method in madness. Hamlet...
Hammie hammie hammie, awesome tasha moments.this is when u get support from d one u love.but what has happened with dutta is still a mystery to naku.d reason behind his decision of leaving army.hope we will get to know soon...HAAIN???.. WOT? what utter nonsense
Bus stand pe bekar baithi hu, and dping proper utilization of time.thanks hammie for saving ne from boredom . 😆 ohhh this is super😃 you have the major keeping you company
I love d way dutta supports nakkus work.normally a man would want his woman to leave work and look after his mom.but dutta is opposite.I liked this shade of dutta.
i think.. most readers lauded this supportive dutta ... glad you enjoying PR keep reading chotti.. 😆 loyal reader... regards hammie