Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 34

hi hamlet

superb story ...dutta is adopted child but his family AS ,kala & baji loves him ..monsoon & pretty girl dutta ..liked the first meeting ud soon

hi hammiee

brand new story aur mein daudi daudi aa gai 😊...forum ke jaan ho tum log ..otherwise wouldn't have survived 4 yrs with out creative ppl of LTL

loved the concept & beginning ...dutta is an adopted child & AS treats him like her own so does kala & baji

dutta knows the truth but AS ko nahin pata ..purohitji hai kya story mein...dhyan kaha hai AS ka😆

i think dutta hasn't revealed to his family that he knows the truth ..he manages his own business doesn't want to have share coz he think himself not to be blue blood

hammiee MR se inspiration liya hai .😉.thoda he sai security agency ..khud kyu security guard ke tarah dress up

nana & seema dono ke bure nazar

dutta is inquisitive abt his past ...quite rational

kya naku ke entry thi gul bahar ..atleast she brought smile on dutta's face

yes hammiee i too feel MR /MV made amazinggg screen jodi ..i too miss them

hammiee u guys gave many interpretation to the LTL story ...thanks never let LTL go out of mind out of sight
as always u r amazinggg hammiee ..ud soon ..kahin dusre forum pe busy hoke ltl forum bhulna na jana

hi hamlet

fab story start of trilogy ..liked everything the first part was too good👍🏼 ..dutta & naku rain brought downpour & love for them 😳..ud soon

Hi hamlet

Awesome BB ud..Its part of trilogy & it remind me of LTL last phase of LTL1..It was the phase in which dutta & naku got maximum part😳..We request you to make it as memorable as it

Dutta isn't bhau but have security services & naku is florist suits her..We are waiting for their next meeting..Ud soon😊

hi hamlet

wonderful ud

good story like previous one👏

dutta is sad don't know his biological parent

naku is a florist too good meeting😳
thanxs for giving new story👏
ud soon

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Res., hammie, haazri lagane aayi hu BAS!

agar comment nahi kiya toh pattar mat maarna (purane jootein bhi nahi) sirf ankh marna allowed 😉 😆

Originally posted by: emilymine32

Hi hammie
enjoyed the first chapter
Nana ke pass dusra driver nahi tha jo dutta ko bhej diya chudail ko pick karne
waiting for tasha next meeting
thanks for update

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet..hellooo uvi.. great to see you

awesome story ..the begining with family intro ..dutta ,kala ,baji & AS ..dutta met naku it was too good...i 'm thanxsful you gave into our request & new show of MR won't effect your readers ...continue soon😊

you my dear reader are very gracious to accompany me on this journey.. keep reading,makes me feel good.. and thanks for the awesome image..😃 much love hammie

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hi rosie.. thanks for the best wishes.. for this piece of writing..
Congrats hammie on starting a new story. Oh how I wished that nakku was under threat and dutta was appointed as her bodyguard but on second thoughts he officially doesn't need to be assigned that task , it's his birth right and duty to guard our nakku. Lol.
humm.. gosh you and your giggles.. birthright.. how come? oohhh aacha as in tasha eternal love story.. those days..
So this time he is a security officer in black. I'm sure he must be looking awesome black is his color. Baaji not calling him bhau sounds strange but never mind. baji ,just testing the waters.. always doing his nautanki.. whatever happens he'll be the little one of the fold..
I am a little confused AS doesn't want him to know that he is an adopted child but doesn't dutta already know that?..he does.. and gets in a flurry when things are kept normal.. he distrusts.. insecurity .. takes hold of him easily
So AS doesn't know that he knows? Is it? Nakku as a florist so sweet and what a beautiful first meeting. Loved it. Gul bahar nice name. And please I hope dutta hires Ravi to guard seema and he should just concentrate on getting fresh flowers for AS . Lol. Enjoyed this first chapter where all the characters seem nice except that extortionist .
Ravi?? nooahhh.. not having that gym instructer in my tale.. look catch the next part tomm.. when you can.. and I sincerely hope you have room for my dutta story..😆.. thanks for reading and commenting rosie.. much appreciated.. love hammie