Mahabharat Katha:T#4; Part 52 On Pg 140 - Page 71

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello pro!
I'm done reading thread 1 and thread 2
And this write up is amazing
I've heard some stories but never knew them this well
Like the stories of Dhaumya, Ved, etc.
And there are many stories which I'm reading for the first time. Example, Nagraj Vaasuki and Garud stories
The krishna leelas are awesome
I love the way you have penned them
Kanha jee is so adorable
And Radha jee is equally cute!
The hastinapur parts are equally beautiful
I loved each and every chapter uptill now and the way you have merged hastinapur and vrindavan is fabulous. It is the first time I'm reading both(mahabharat+krishna katha) together
I've started with thread 3. Will comment after reading
Keep writing😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic part Radhikerani😃



Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

nice part and thanks for pm 🤗



Thank you Di!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Res

unres !
Amazing update Proteeti . Actually I shall call you Pro not Pro for Proteeti but pro for professionals . You have become a pro as a Graphicer and as a writer also . 😃
You pen down the marriage beautifully . Even in that moment you din forget to add some humours of Kanha . I jus love him here more than in star Bharat 😆
He is such a darling . I loved when he pulled the legs of Bheem . Jus like thou . 🤣
I m missing Balram in Kanha's jokes and pranks 😆 . His wives seem very generous . 🤔 Giving away all their marriage jewellery 😆 overall a beautiful update .
Update soon .
Love
Sam




Thank you so much for all that makkhan Sammy dear! 😆 I'm glad you liked the update, and our Kanhaiya!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

wow! loved it u hav portrait it so gud😊



Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Beautiful Update Choti..❤️ You make it so vivid as if its happening in front of my own eyes..⭐️ Loved Bheem Krishna Banter! 😆 The Wedding Rituals Were Beautifully Described.❤️

Thanx fr pm. Update Soon.



Thank you so much Shanayadi! Love you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Hey thanks for the pm yaar
will read it soon ok
i love ur concept



Thank you!
Hope you enjoy your read!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aanvi98

Well, What should I give to you!!! What should i CALL u!!

This is too good!!!

Aww! That's soo sweet of you!

The first prank was quite hilarious!! Jus Imagine all pandavs standing holding their ears in line!!!🤣

Should I do that in an OS or something?

Well, I must say, all the wives of Krishna are too generous!!
And our queen must be looking divine!!!!
And all pandavs day dreaming...😆 Nakul got first instead of bheem...😆 Well, the marriage is very good!!! But i am not getting one thing, if drau becomes maiden after a wedding, then don't the previous becomes invalid??😕 Give me some gyan gyani baba!!😆

Nope, because it was a divine marriage with special sanctions. So, all the marriages remained valid, and she could switch as and when she wanted. Also, now I have a little doubt about how much this is true, for I read about this in the Rajshekhar Basu's transaton, while Kalprasanna Simha's makes no mention of it. I'll chack it and get back to you! 😳

And my dialogue in each and every OS, Govind rocks!!!!

Yeah he does! 🥳




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Awesome part Choti,just loved it a lot dear😊😊



Thank you Didi!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehamadhuri

How could you imagine so vividly Radhika ?👏

I just sat here and wanted to visualize the scenes in my imagination with detail while reading this update and with the help of your words succeeded😊 !

When I read (which I did 2 times already] , I try reading over the detail, to imagine every scene. Every time I read a specific paragraph, I find myself adding something new to my imagination , because of the beauty present in your words !Sometimes, it feel as if I'm there, standing on the altar and watching it with my own eyes , that is the power of your story telling Radhika !
It was the perfect marriage scene for this revolutionary aspect of that relationship even at that time !

You have taken care of that aspect too in a very careful way ! Excellent update my dear writer !

These lines shows your vast knowledge over the ethical , moral and marriage ritual aspects !

Ved Vyaas advanced towards her and said, "May you be a maiden again."

Each time the sage repeated the mantra to protect Draupadi from the shame of polyandry.



Thank you soo much for this sweet comment! Thanks for making me feel so nice every time I update!
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