You know Choti, this was long overdue. It is nice to see Mr Raizada in his element - a la ASR mode. :) He charged, swooped in and made his kill. It was well worth it after his poor heart took such a beating in the last couple of updates.
And it does not bode well for NK.. my dear NK.. and so, Khushi is back with ASR.
There are a few things that stand out for me in this update. First - your repertoire of story telling has now increased by one more genre.. historical setting. And that too one that you are not too familiar with. It takes guts and gumption to take on a project like this - where you are required to do a reasonable amount of research to be informed of the setting. You have done a fantastic job through out your story thus far...
I remember how well you described the cab drive that our privileged Argrez Arnav Singh Raizada makes on his way home... And that bus ride, that walk in the hot sun with his suit...pani-puri stall.. I could go on..
I remember the talks and speeches [good job using the actual parts of Gandhi's speech] ...
Now the prison cell...
What's an FF without some liberties as an author!! I believe this is your creative input, a muscle you seem to have no trouble exercising. And in the process, I, as a reader, truly enjoyed reading it.
I believe this is a moment when you to take a bow... :)
Edited by Mirabell - 9 years ago
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