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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Texie

Yeah di it is my real name I know it is weird and long and I have been teased too much for it as my bf name is also samrajya
And your name is laxmi never knew it gosh my middle name matches with your name looks like my name matches with manyπŸ˜›
Feeling awkward 😳

Oh WOW!!! Now this is like a dream!!! So many names matching here!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Hahaha the story n the concept is suerb n u rule Samarajya Laxmi Mati yoyo... Awsom n thanx 4 the updaten sorrie i couldnt help plzz forgive meh n i will swear 2 be more attentive sorrie n congrats on being a groupie <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: uchihaprincess

Hahaha the story n the concept is suerb n u rule Samarajya Laxmi Mati yoyo... Awsom n thanx 4 the updaten sorrie i couldnt help plzz forgive meh n i will swear 2 be more attentive sorrie n congrats on being a groupie <3

it is okay aresha and my name is samrajya laxmi wati ! Not mati ! Whatever glad u like it and will post soon and also pm me fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
First of all.. congrats on becoming a groubie 😳 though I dont know what concept it is πŸ˜›
Loved this update of yours... hope u update soon πŸ˜‰
Eagerly waiting πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ayu_8

First of all.. congrats on becoming a groubie 😳 though I dont know what concept it is πŸ˜›
Loved this update of yours... hope u update soon πŸ˜‰
Eagerly waiting πŸ˜†

thanks both for the comment and wishes will update soon and will also pm u glad u liked itπŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Hey everyone this is the first part of chapter 3 . i hope u like it and plz do tell how is it . will post the next part soon .

Chapter 3 - The unexpected , unwanted and uninvited encounter
Part 1

Past life caused their rebirth , Gods gave them life , fate decided their journey and now they will be brought together by time. :)

Draupadi climbed down the stairs . She thought that to forget about her dream as it was just a dream and now she should concertante on her new school . She was feeling nervous for the first time as if someone was waiting for her there to eat her up. She thought about new people and friends, about how would they be ? As these question raised in her mind, she was glad that she would have her bestie Chitra there with her so she was not literally or practically alone . But then where one part of her brain was excited and all , another part was saying that this new school and this day would turn her life upside down and would mould her life into a new direction . She signed with confusion maybe thinking about the dream was more easier than this ,she thought as she moved her steps towards dinning hall . She saw the breakfast laid on the table . Her father, Drupad probably was not at home and it was too early for her twin brother to wake up . So now she was left alone to finish the breakfast . She had actually lost her appetite so she decided to go to school without eating anything . She had reached the door when she was stopped by somebody . She looked up to find her daimaa . Her daimaa had taken care of her and her twin Drist after their mother's death and was like mother to her and Drist . Both of them called her daimaa and sometimes maa . Draupadi never knew her daimaa's name and she suspected that even Drist did not know it . Draupadi was lost in her thoughts when daimaa handed her a glass of milk and pointed her eyes towards the table .
"No daimaa", draupadi replied. " I have lost my appetite and please do not force to eat or else I will vomit " , Draupadi warned. Daimaa nodded her head in disappointment .
"Okay ", she said finally . "But I want you to drink this "she handed the glass full of milk to Draupadi .
"But the milk is for Drist isn't it?" Draupadi asked well aware that it was for her twin as daimaa used to give milk to Drist every morning to decrease his hangover.
"No it is for you "daimaa said bringing Draupadi to her sense. " I saw that you were not feeling well today and thought to cheer you up "

Draupadi smiled just like any mother daimaa knew what to do to comfort her . She took the glass from her hand and looked at it , it was not the plain milk but almond one . How did not i notice, she thought. Almond milk was only for her not for Drist.

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Arjun smiled as he took out the new car from the garage . Although he was a good driver his brothers did not let him drive due to his age . But today as his brothers weren't at home and his driver was no where to be seen , he thought of having some fun by driving his car to school. It was a brand new car which was gifted by his big brother Karn last month in his birthday when he turned seventeen .His brother knew well that he wanted this car if only he knew that how desperate Arjun was to drive it also . Arjun gave a mischievous smile, a new day , a new car and new adventure . He only wished that his brothers would not know about it , if Bheem and Yudi came to know about it it would be no problem as Yudi would give warning and leave him and whereas for Bheem , his mouth could be closed by a treat to his favourite restaurant but if his eldest brother Karn would know about this then this was a big problem as though Karn loved Arjun very much and they were each others favourite , Karn was the one who scolded Arjun the most . As it is said na that who loves the most scolds the most similarly though Karn loved Arjun the most and vice versa Arjun feared him the most. So as both excitement and fear crept into Arjun's he took out the car from the house.

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As Draupadi drank the milk she heard a car horn outside she bided a goodbye to her daimaa and headed towards the door. She founded Chitra outside waiting for her . They sat in the car when Chitra pointed towards the driver and asked
"Is he drunk?"
"No " replied Draupadi .
"His eyes are so red and it looks like he can not even balance his own body" Chitra responded .
" I do not think so " said Draupadi and then they ignored the driver and started their talk. Chitra seemed to be excited but Draupadi was not so excited as her heart kept on saying that her life would change today . Draupadi was lost in her thoughts when she heard something crashing then suddenly the car stopped . The car had hit another car.

********Will Draupadi life will change? For the answer stay tune for the next part which I will post as soon as possible .

Sorry if I have disappoint you and I guess that u already know whose car it is . Will post soon and plz do comment

Edited by Texie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Wow!! Awesome, dear!!! Loved it!!! That first line definitely made magic!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Wow!! Awesome, dear!!! Loved it!!! That first line definitely made magic!!!

thank u so much di for the lovely comment glad that u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Whoa! That was an exciting part! I guess, a fight is going to ensue between ArDi! Oh!!!!! You've united KaJu in this story!! *On cloud nine*
Anyway, thanks for the pm and update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Beautiful dear! Capability is surely hidden somewhere in there. You can do wonders even more just keep working. Now as a true mentor, it was really nice but I think you can do even better. Because all your updates are fantastically written and if you go on the way you are going, who know we get a new ArDi Shakespeare. So keep it up!
Loved the title in particular! Very thoughtful! And yes first line said much of what you wanted to tell! So that was a great one too!

Loving the way this story is proceeding.πŸ˜ƒ
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