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Posted: 10 years ago
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really nice story plz plz update soon waiting nd pm me please
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oooh...this is good!! the prologue is so well written
looking forward to the story
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Nice start!! 😳
Do pm me the first chapter... luking frwd for it 😃
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Thank u for your precious comments


Chapter 1 - His queen

He ran after her and tried as hard as he could to keep pace with her . Where as Draupadi ran away from him . She ran pulling her skirt up and wiping her tears , her dupatta kept on smashing things at the back but she did not care , she just wanted to be away from him and that was all ! He kept on running after her , his uttariya was too smashing thing like her dupatta but he too did not care , he just wanted to stop her and explain the situation . Yes u deserve this punishment , one part of his mind kept on ringing it . She had waited for him for twelve years and then he comes back marrying another girl . She had all the rights to be angry with him but if she could give some chance I will explain her , thought the previous Arjun . But as soon as he was going to catch her she ran to her chambers and closed the door . He banged on the door but she did not answer then he tried to call her name but what was her name?!
Arjun could not remember her name . Now what was it , he tried as hard as he could but just could not remember it . He could hear her silent cries from inside and was cursing himself for forgetting his wife name . Slowly the palace walls started vanishing and everything went blur

"Panchali", new Arjun called in a faint voice . He looked around , he was not in some ancient palace but in his bedroom . He pinched himself to make sure he was not again dreaming but he was in reality .
" Damn it " , he whispered . He had started having these kinds of dreams from the last six months and he did not knew what was it about . He would always see himself in different type of attire , the one that he saw kings wearing in movies and he used to be in some ancient type of palace more weird than the museums he was taken while he was a kid from the school . But this was not all the more weird thing was that he used to always be with some one . A girl actually and he did not know who was it ,though he saw everything in hd clear vision he never saw her face . Either he could not see her face or whenever he saw her face it was blur . So he did not know who the girl was but had given nickname to her ,HIS QUEEN!

"Curse that door " he again said to himself . Today it was the door that had stopped him from seeing her face . He tried to remember what name he had called when he woke up but though as hard as he tried he just could not remember it like in his dreams .

Arjun washed his face . He was the most popular boy of his school and every girl had crush on him . He was good at all sports that was available in his school and was the favourite of all his teachers and friends . He was loved by all including his family and all the person he knew . Not only studies but he was good in business also and was able to surprise all by his charming character . But this innocent Arjun also had a naughty side that was only revealed to his friends and brothers . His cousin Madhav his inspirer was his partner with whom he did all kind of stupid things . And his Madhav's sister Subhadra was his bestie . They were friends from childhood and he shared everything with her. Last but not the least one more girl was in his life , his girlfriend Ullpi , whom he had proposed last year and still was confused why he did that . He liked her and now he realised that he only liked her and nothing more , he could never love her.
He actually had started to fall for that mysterious girl in his dreams , strange isn't it?he thought. If only he knew that their journey had been decided from the heaven and fate was to bring them together in a very short time.

I hope u like it and plz comment your opinion . Sorry for the mistakes .second chapter to come soon





Edited by Texie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome one, dear!!!! Reminded me of my first chap!!! but different concept and a lovely one!!!!Update the title so that people can understand tht u updated!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
great one dear... loved the way you put it !!!
the blend of ancient n modern is good...
n uloopi is his GF... thts a surprise!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great Start, looking forward to future chapters. You write so lucidly😊
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Lovely update dear! You've written and explained it so well... I can understand his dilemma... and the way you've explained it, just makes this story a 'must read' one.. Thanks for the pm and continue at the earliest..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was superbbb dude...amazin continue soon!!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for lovely comments can not reply one by one as I m forbidden to do that but really all ur comments are really appreciated and it is encouraging me to write more will post another chapter soon it is under construction
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