Dear Kiran,
I loved the whole 25 chapters so far it is quite awesome than the actual aired episodes. I wished they had used your storyline and it would have increased the rating.
Loved the way you construct the happenings from scene to scene. Liked how Arnav initially put Shayam in prison after sending Naniji and Anjali away.
Liked how you weaved real life social issues into the story such as Shayam bribing an inspector to make a call to his wife. Loved Khushi's reaction when she saw them coming back.
Loved how you made Khushi to move out of their room and Arnav spending 9 hours standing in front of the door as he could not sleep without Khushi.
One of the best scene for me was when Khushi went to Arnav's office and had a go at him while he was in a meeting. That is really awesome. Also liked the way Abhay was introduced into the scene but he part was only for a short moment. Would have loved to see him more in the story as NK has been removed from the story. It would have been good to see more of Arnav's jealousy with Abhay getting close to his wife rather than cancelling the contract.
Did not like that you did not allow Abhay to bring to Anjali's attention what he witnes when Shayam manhandled Khushi in the kitchen.
Loved how you portray Arnav's vulnerability and insecurity through out a lot better than IPK.
Loved how you actual portray Akash and Payal as strong character rather than timid and shy couple. Loved how they worked behind the scene to look for evidence to expose Shayam to the family.
Now coming to the exposure of Shayam, can't believe up until the very end he was still weaving lies and damaging Khushi's character bringing it into question.
Loved the way the truth was revealed, loved that it was not over dramatic but rather Arnav, Akash, Payal and Khushi provided the evidence in a very constructive way. Khushi came across really strong in front of the family when she slapped Shayam for every evil he committed against her and her family. Liked you did not allow anyone to stop her until she finished.
As much as I believe Arnav got a private investigator to find out about Shayam's lifestyle, like you just went straight to the actual evidence to confirm he knew Khushi and her family before she came to RM.
Another credit to you is the way you made Anjali really strong almost immediately that she visited her husband in the prison to discover more truth. Liked how she told Arnav that him and Shayam had wronged Khushi and she was not happy about it. Liked how she acknowledged that she had allowed Arnav to play the elder for a very long time and that now is the time for her to take her rightful position.
Loved how Anjali took charged after Arnav revealed the truth to the Gupta's and Raizada's.
It was really fabulous how Khushi had a dialogue with her real parents about Arnav and the way the approval came. It was nice the way Khushi confessed her love to Arnav and him realising she too had loved him for the last two years.
Now that the wedding scene is about to commence, are we going to see Arnav going to sleep with his wife in the Gupta's house? How is he going to survive the next one week away from Khushi?
Just a request, Would love to see a modern Anjali, career minded and ruling the world.
In one of the chapters when Abhay and Khushi were discussing about Abhay getting married he referred to if Anjali was free he would. Would we be seeing an Abhay and Anjali union or is that wishful thinking?
Eagerly awaiting the next update.
Thank you.
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