I'll Be Ur Destiny At Every Step U Take (AR.FF) 19/04/18 prt24 updted - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Prizi

Really touched armaan's every line...

Ab mere chotu se dimag me bahut ques hai..lyk shanky and padma kya baat kar rahe the????? And ridz kisse baat kar rahi thi...

Cont soon


thank you...
apne chotu se dimaaq ko rest karne do...
sab kuch pata chaljaayega...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -Mith-

Humzieee... 🤗
Shorry 4r bein late baby... 😒
Love Lovee Loveee it mere sher... 👏
Kya baat hai babu, u toh rockin ni... [B-)]
Ab jaldi se update karde next part... 😉
Love you... 😳


mithey mere cheeteh...
iss baar maaf kardiya
agli baar time par aaiyo...
hmmm me toh always rock dear...hahaha...
love u too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

amazing ff

pm me the next update plz


thank you...
will pm u for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: PreetLuvKSG

Awsome... 👏

Update soon plzzz...


thank you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: mohit_aggarwal

nice part..

love at first sight for armaan not bad yaar..
bichari ridz man..hope she will b back to normal again..
wanna read moreee
AR ko jaldi milao plzz


thank you dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Omg I just found this ff
Must say its awesome
Cont sooon
And next time do pm me plzzz
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Jenny_sms

Omg I just found this ff

Must say its awesome
Cont sooon
And next time do pm me plzzz
Tc


thank you dear...
will pm u the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68



Part 2


ridhima went to that person's home ...ridhima rang the door bell n the person opens the door...

person- ridzi( hugs her) kaisi hain tu? tu india kab aayi? tu akeli aayi hain? tera husband kahan?
ridhima cuts her in between n said
ridz- relax relax muskaan
yes the person is none other than muskaan...
ridz- tere saare sawaalon ka jawaab tujhe milengey par mujhe andar toh aane dey?
muskaan- ohh haan...aana andar... tu kuch legi?
ridz- nahi muski...i'm fine ( smiles fakely)
muskaan notices that ridhima is not herself...she's smiling but. her smile is fake...
muski- kya hua ridzi? tu itni udaas kyun hain?
ridz- arey...( smiles) kahan? dekh mai smile karrahi hun
muski- ye toh mujhe bhi dikhraha hain ki tu kitni zyaada khush hain...dekh ridzi sach sach bata ki kya hua hain.?tu meri best frnd hi nahi balki meri behan hain...aur apni behan se kuch chupaate nahi hain...
ridz- muskaan tu
muski-please ridzi main tujhe aise nahi deksakti...bata mujhe kya hua?
now ridhima wasn't able to control her tears she started sobbing...
ridz- muskaan...woh...papa ne bhi mera saath choddiya...
she started crying badly
muski- matlab?



flashback

ridhima was about to ring the door bell when she heard shashank n padma talking...

padma- shashank aap kyun aise bolrahi ho...ridhima ne kiya kya?
shashank- kya kiya? divorce lekar aarahi hain woh
padma was totally shocked
padma- KYA?
shashank- haan aisi ghinoni harkat ki tumhari beti ne ki main kisiko mooh dikhaane layaak nahi raha...ridhima mere liye marchuki hain padma...bhool jao ki hamey koi aulad thi...bhool jao ki hamari ek beti thi...aaj ke baad iss ghar mein ridhima ki baat koi nahi karega...naahi ussey iss ghar mein koi jagah milegi...samjhi tum padma...
padma was so shattered that no word was coming in her mouth..

flashback ends...


ridhima was crying so much...muskaan hugged her...
muski- bass ridhima chup hoja please...dekh main hun naa tere saath...chaahe kuch bhi ho main hamesha tere saath rahungi...
ridz-sabne mujhe choddiya muskaan...koi nahi hain mere paas...sabne choddiya mujhe...
she was crying her heart out...
muski- nahi ridzi...tu akeli nahi hain main hun tere saath...please rona band karde...please ridzi...

ridhima stopped crying n she kept her head on muskaan's lap muskaan caressed ridhima's hair which calms her n she slept on her lap...
after sometime when ridhima was in deep sleep muskaan makes her sleep on the bed properly n pulls a comforter on her...


evening 5 pm

ridhima wakes up n saw that she was in room n muskaan was no where to seen...
muskaan came in with a broad smile on her face
muski- arey ridzi tu jaag gayi main aane hi waali thi tujhe jagaaney... chal ab phataphat se ready hoja hum bahar jaarahe hain
ridzi- kahan?
muski- ek aisi jagah jahan par sukoon hi sukoon milegi...
ridzi- par muski mera mann nahi hain... tu jaa main yahin theek hun
muski- main kuch nahi sunnewaali...tu chalrahi hain n dats final
ridzi- par muskaan
muski- par war kuch nahi tu jaldi se ready hoja nahi toh main tujhse baat nahi karungi samjhi...
ridz smiles n said
ridz- ok...main chalungi teri saath
muski- ye hui naa meri besti waali baat


ridhima got dressed in simple plain pink Churidhar ,her hair half open. with lil makeup on her face...she. was looking gorgeous...

muskaan n ridhima went to a nearby park which was surrounded by children... who were enjoying playing...
muski- dekh yahin wo jagah hain jahan mujhe sukoon milta hain...tujhe pata hain ridzi main yahan har roz aati hun taaki mujhe sukoon miley...in. cute sr bachon ki smile dekhkar mera mann aur bhi khush hojaata hain...
ridhima was admiring the kidz who were laughing, playing ...
muski- tu yahin par ruk main garma garam chai laati hun yahan ki. chai world ki best chai hain...
muskaan went to bring hot tea whereas ridhima sat on a bench lost in het thoughts...


armaan was playing with some kidsq as he loves to spend time with kids...it was his daily routine...he was looking dashing in blue jeans with white shirt...
he was playing football with kids when his gaze fell on ridhima...
he was lost in her ...
kids were looking at armaan who was looking at armaan...
one of the kid.
bhaiyya( shaking him)
armaan came back in his senses n looked at the kid...
bhaiyya aap. kahan khogaye...
ar- tum loag mera ek kaam karogey
kids- kya?
ar- woh jo wahan par ladki baithkar hain( pointing his finger at ridhima)
kids-haan
ar- uss ladki ko tum mein. jo hasaayega naa usey main icecream treat dunga
kids- wow...sachi mein
ar- haan...
kids- ok
n dey all went towards ridhima n
girl- hi didi
ridhima smiles n said
ridzi- hi
boy- aap itney sad kyun ho?aapko aapki. mumma ne daanta
hearing dis ridhima got tears in her eyes...
girl- offo( to the boy in his ears) hamey inhe hasaana hain daffar tuney toh didi ko rulaadiya
boy- haan...ab. didi ko kaise hasaayengey?
girl- ( wipes ridhima's tears n kissed her cheeks) ab rona nahi aayega hain naa didi
ridhima smiled. n kissed her cheeks
ridz- bilkul nahi aayega mujhe itna acha gift jo mila
boy- aur mujhe.?( pouts)
ridz smiled n kissed his cheekss
ridz- khush.
kids- bahot khush
they both draggedridhima to play with them n ridhima started playing with them...
she forgot all her. sadness n was enjoying with kids playing n laughing...

armaan smiled brightly puts his hands in his jeans. pocket n said
ar- thank you god( looking at the sky) finally aapne mujhe mere jeeney ki wajah ko mere saamne laake rakhdiya
ab chahe kuch bhi ho main iss wajah ko kabhi dard nahi dunga
iske saare gham mitaadunga ...isko har khushi dunga jiski ye haqdaar hain...i promise
he saw at ridhima who was. enjoying with kids. n smiles...


done guys
please read n leave u'r valuable comments
love ya
HUMERA
Edited by roofiya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
res
haye armaan finally maan gaya... hayee...


and loved that he bride children t do sos ooo sooo gud thing... i loved armaan turly
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Res
Un res


Awesome yaaar
Loved it
Awww loving muski n ridz frnd ship bond
The way armaan bribe the kids
Amazing
Update soon
Tc
Edited by Jenny_sms - 10 years ago
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