I'll Be Ur Destiny At Every Step U Take (AR.FF) 19/04/18 prt24 updted - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nilusoni

nice

continue soon
plzzz pm me for next part


thanks onceagain dear...
will pm u for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice start.. looking forward to read more of ur work :)
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Originally posted by: anishaalluri

nice start.. looking forward to read more of ur work :)






































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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
beautiful start.
love it.
it's really sad that this story inspired by a true incident...
hope Armaan will help Riddhima...
and wish your friend also gets her Armaan...
cont soon.
pls pm me next you update.
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#35

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

beautiful start.

love it.
it's really sad that this story inspired by a true incident...
hope Armaan will help Riddhima...
and wish your friend also gets her Armaan...
cont soon.
pls pm me next you update.


thanks dear...
ameen to u'r words...
will pm u for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36


I'LL BE U'R DESTINY AT EVERYSTEP U TAKE

PART-1






armaan still kept his eyes on that lady...she was looking so beautiful n innocent while sleeping...when airhostess came n was abt to wake that lady armaan went to her n said
ar- let her sleep please...
airhostess- but sir shayad inhe kisi cheez ki zaroorat padey...
ar- agar zaroorat padegi toh ye khud aapse maanglegi...( very politely) but still let her sleep...
airhostess-ok sir...
but before she went, she turned back n asked armaan
airhostess-sir can I ask u something?
ar- ji bilkul( smiles at her)
she smiles back n asked him
airhostess- kya aap inke saath hain?
ar-( looked at the lady ,smiles) agar saath hota toh ye aisi haalat mein nahi rehti...
airhostess-( smiles at armaan) I wish inko aapka saath jaldi miljaaye...
she went saying that left smiling armaan behind...
armaan in his mind
ar-what's wrong wid me...ye main kya sonch raha hun?kyun mai chahta hun ki mai inke saath rahun? for godsake ye. mujhe abhi mili hain? y is she affecting me...? kyun mera dil tadap raha tha iske aansun dekhkar...kyun mai achanak se yeh chahne laga hun ki mai iske saare takleef saare dard mita dun... kyun?

with his" kyun's" he went back to his seat ...



aftersome time armaan n ridhima r in mumbai airport...
armaan looked at RIDHIMA for the last time, whereas ridhima wasn't aware of his gaze...she silently took her luggage n went outside to hire a taxi as no-one is coming to receive her...
armaan went to his home...throughout the journey her face was constantly on his mind...he was thinking abt her...
MALLIK MANSION

armaan came home n directly went to his room ...he sat on his bed, took a deep breath n Said to himself
ar- huh...relax armaan...but woh itna ro kyun rahi thi...
Voice- koun roraha tha bhai...
armaan turned back ,smiled at the person n hugged that person...
ar- DAD...
raj- kaise ho bete
ar- theek hun dad...aap kaise ho aur mom?
raj- i'm fine beta aur tumhari mom bhi bilkul theek hain...woh apne ek frnd se milne gayi hain... she'LL be back soon
ar- ok...( smiles)
raj noticed armaan n asked
raj- so.
ar- so...( confused)
raj- oh come on buddy apne dil ka haal apne dad se toh nahi but apne best frnd se toh keh sakte ho...
raj n armaan are very much fond of eachother... dey r best frnds... armaan shares everything with him...
ar- kya bataun dad...i.'m i'confused...
raj- wo ro kyun rahi thi?
ar-( looks at him n said) I dnt knw dad...but jab wo rorahi thi tab main apne dil ko sambhaal nahi paaraha tha...uske ek ek aansun mere dil ko bahot tadpaarahein they... aisa lagraha tha jaise koi mere dil se meri dhadkan door karraha hain...i dnt knw what went wrong wid me dad...ek complete stranger se itni attraction kisiko kaise hosakti hain
raj smiles at his son put his arm around armaan n said
raj- betey ye dil bahot naazuk hota hain...hum chahe kitna bhi issey sambhaalne ki koshish karey ye apni hi karta hain...
par main itna zaroor kehna chahunga ke tumhe uss ladki se pyaar hogaya...
ar-WHAT?pyaar aur woh bhi sirf ek nazar mein...dad ye koi ffilm nahi hain ke pehli nazar mein pyaar hojaaye...
raj- mujhe pata hain beta ki yeh film. nahi hain...par aisa kisne kaha ke pehli nazar waala pyaar sirf filmo mein hota hain..?
pyaar bata ke nahi hota hain beta...hum chahe jitna bhi apne dil ko control kyun naa kare...par iss dil pe kisika zor nahi hota...
haan ab chahe tumhe meri baatein wierd lagey...par jab tum pyaar ko. mehsoos karogey, jab tumhe harpal tumhare pyaar ka ehsaas hoga jab tumhe meri baatein sahi lagegi...
he patted armaan's shoulder n went from his room...whereas armaan was again in his deep thoughts of ridhima...


GUPTA MANSION
ridhima was abt to ring the bell when she heard shashank n padma talks...
tears were rolling down from her cheeks... she ccould not able to control her tears more n went from there. crying...
she sat on a bench of the park n kept on crying n crying...
ri- kyun bhagwaan ji kyun? kyun aapne mujhse saare rishtey cheen liye...?kyun mujhe akela choddiya sabne? kyun meri saari khushiyan cheenli mujhse kyun?...
she cried her Heart out...
ri- ab mai kahan jaaungi...? kaise katungi apni zindaagi...?
kiske liye jeeungi...?
she cried out... when suddenly she got someone on her. mind who can help her
ri- haan ( wipes her tears) wahi meri madat karsakte hain...
she dialled the number. n
rid- hello
otherside- ...
rid- mujhe tumhari zaroorat hain ...
otherside...
rid- kya main kuch din tumhare paas rehsakti hun?
otherside...
rid- thank you..
otherside...
rid- mai aakar sabkuch bataungi...
otherside...
rid- ok...bye...
she hangs up the call n took her luggage, hire. a taxi n went to that person's home...


done guys
please read n leave u'r valuable comment's here
love ya
HUMERA
Edited by roofiya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
nice part..
love at first sight for armaan not bad yaar..
bichari ridz man..hope she will b back to normal again..
wanna read moreee
AR ko jaldi milao plzz
cont soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
haye... i loved it...
armaan staring at ridhima and taking care of her as much he cannn...


and here ridhima called muskan ...
chalo dekhte hain armaan kitna shocked hoga dekh ke ridhima ko jab vo job par aayegi uske pass...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
ar-( looked at the lady ,smiles) agar saath hota toh ye aisi haalat mein nahi rehti...i luv this line, armaan is so cute
amazing start
update soon can't wait for armaan and riddhima to meet again
Edited by aish-au - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
also thanks for the pm
sorry cudn't reply to u r pm u as i out wid my family
Edited by aish-au - 10 years ago
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