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Posted: 10 years ago
😲😲 Yes, double shock at your double update, and for u recommend my OS? I seriously had to rub my eyes! Thank you 😳
The update was...dreamlike! Arnav is so struck by her beauty! Nice! Keep continuing like this!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG I love you for this, I honestly thought you had sent the previous update PM again but then I saw the double update note I did a happy dance and screamed really loud out of happiness scaring my poor family in the process, lol.

Thank you so much for the double treat and we got a slightly longer update as well, I love you very much please ask the person closest to you to give you a big fat juicy kiss as gratitude from me, lol.

Wow the update was amazing and simply superb, I have to admit it's the best update so far.

Wow Arnav's reaction when he saw Khushi was as expected, completely awed, awe struck and totally mesmerised.

I'm so glad he put the hate behind him and just for the night he treated Khushi like a wife so for this one update I will not hate him,

I loved the part where Khushi was looking in the mirror and was shocked to see how beautiful she looked and she imagined herself to be the princess she had always dreamed.

So we did get a glimpse of a jealous and possessive Arnav as he hid Khushi from other men, love it.

Wow they even shared a dance and Khushi was so amazed to see this side to Arnav and the song choice was perfect.

So Khushi is scared of Arnav and that's why she has given into his each demand, so sad.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM xx

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aamir18

Ab dekhiye, aapne request kiya aur update aa gaya πŸ˜† Belated birthday gift 😳


Thnx Zee, yes this man needs that to come down on his knees for this woman who he is treating like so badly but what can I do , I love him equally , can't scold at him that much.

Zabardast and beautiful update.Such a lovely gift .Thank you.

Now I going back to read again😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for double update and PM. Arnav is completely smitten by her beauty. Kushi is just puzzled with his behavior but in one corner of her brain scared and in another she is enjoying and hoping all this won't fade away. I am just scared to know what Arnav planned to ruin her when they return.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 9
awesome well written feeling extremely bad for khushi
chap 10
loved khushi last day in abroad. Beautiful. Very good description of khushi feeling and emotions.
chap 11
i so wish that Arnav comes to know the truth today.khushi was looking very beautiful indeed. Fantastic update soon
Edited by raniluvsasr - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i really feel bad for khusi yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just got caught up with the story. Read the last four updates now. Waiting to find out if the last night in NY will somehow end up changing their situation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoa...
Another update just in less than 6 hrs gap...
I hate this arnav ...what does he thinks of himself to treat khushi as a maid when in salwaars n to make her his wife...no i wouldn't call that but 'escort 'when in designer clothes ,this is ridiculous. Just because she is naive n tangible he can't mould her to his liking..
She is a living creature afterall.
But the way u described khushi was ethereal...but alas it is from devils pov...
Will wait to see where the story is heading. And which song u have incluced in the last para..i liked the lyrics.
Edited by sarun22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice and slow flow..i dont know wht destruction in for kushi..but i want to know soon..update soon buddy.
your song shattered had become my fav:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like button playing truant!
Lovely set of updates. Khushi being apprehensive of Arnav's reaction is quite understandable! Khushi wanting to opt out of the party yet bound by the love and care of Anjali is quite understandable! What is not understandable is Arnav hating Khushi but still attracted towards her is unable to control himself! Is he not the heartless monster who deems it fit to play with her emotions like a football!

Loved the updates. Waiting to read the next!


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