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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aamir18

Thank you so much for this comment dear 😊 If there's one thing I can assure you, it's that I may be the biggest feminist on IF. So there is no way I like writing about a weak Khushi. But the harsh reality is, the ones close to our heart hold the power to destroy us. And some women are weak in this sense... esp women who are so blindly devoted to their families and loved ones.


Khushi will not be weak by the end of this FF. I have something planned 😃 These first updates are painful and hurtful, I know, and for a few more updates, I'm going to pursue the same patterns. But the ride will indeed be fruitful! I promise! 😆 Thank you so much dear for the comment 🤗



Thanks for replying! I totally understand your POV as well, these things happen, but i got momentarily hurt to see Khushi like that. Don't get me wrong, I love your story! I am glad to hear that Khushi would not be weak in a few more updates, and she better kick arnav's ass real hard 😆 (I'll be waiting 😉) Continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely story and what most I like about u is u r gonna continue it even if u have 2 readers.

In this story Arnav is no where around redemption what he feels is sympathy or even less pity for the girl whom he once used to hate and wants her to become her former self so that he can again start hating her and not even feel sorry for what he has done. This is very different and one of its kind in that sense. Arnav took Khushi as his maid, that was really rediculous. I wish u to show Khushi's POV on their relationship or whateve they have. I mean how is it possible to take so much of physical, sexual and emotional abuse and still be quite, for she was once a woman who used to fight when something wrong was done to her. I think fighting both Shyam and Arnav at the same time got her to this state.
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In response to above comment..
2 readers...well i dont know about the other one but i will be the one of them for sure...i am litrally hooked to this one...
Speaking of ur last line,i agree to it...wish khushi cud get some superpower to punch those two morons on their gut...the scene wud definately rockk.
Edited by sarun22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i hate this Arnav 😡
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A/N: Okay, so yaaay! I've updated pretty soon 😃I was thinking about updating for Valentine's Day, but obviously asli zindagi decided to be awful and hate me. Also, I want to dedicate this update to sarun22, who has so very kindly been patient for these updates and left such wonderful comments. Thank you so much dear. I really appreciate it. Also, just as a note guys, I have like 60 people on my PM list but never see them like the post or comment. Please, it's a lot of hard work to write a FF, so I would really appreciate anything from your side... just to know the work is being appreciated. Please do at least try to leave some form of a constructive comment. On that note, I hope you like this update! 😊 And if you do, please do comment! Lots of love, Zee.

Also. THIS IS NOT PROOFREAD. I'll read through it later tonight 😃


~Serendipity~
"an accidental discovery"

Chapter Nine: Hindsight
1,119 words.
The week in New York was flying fast, and Khushi had never felt truer to the essence of her name. For several hours a day, Arnav would leave her at the public library while he completed his office work in a nearby coffee shop, permitting her to liberally read the thousands of books available on the limitless shelves. With the help of her little English to Hindi dictionary and the generous Indian librarian she befriended, Khushi assembled a small pile of books to read everyday--- ranging from Manga to sci-fi novels to news articles from World War II. She cried as she read the Little Mermaid and laughed as she read The Trumpet of the Swan. She immersed herself within the arguments between Umbrige and Potter. Crinkled her nose at Bella Swan's ignorance and nearly choked when Prim was blown to oblivion.

Khushi fell in love with the surreal novels and their idealism. Stories about control and affection and resolve. About strength. They filled the void of what had gone lost.

In the evenings, Arnav would drag her to the listed programs Anjali scheduled in her daily emails. She fell hopelessly in love with New York City, wandering through the streets sipping hot cappu-- capuchiionos... as if she was just another character in the world of her fairytales. The Statue of Liberty. The Empire State Building. Hudson River. The drag queens and the children in designer clothes. Khushi sensed her smiles widening at every new place she visited, and for once she didn't want time to end. She craved to live for every moment.

Two more days. Two more days and Khushi Kumari Gupta would be required to leave the city of her dreams. She would be held captive once again within the confinement of her reality.

The cutting reminder that a wh**e of her stature could never be worthy of becoming a princess.

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Arnav's time in New York had proved beneficial. Not only was he able to seal an important deal with a famous New York City consultant, he drafted the contracts and reviewed the clauses which he had kept postponing in India for months. He had met with a lawyer and prepared the documents for his divorce as well, with only two months remaining to their matrimonial settlement.

Khushi had not been a nuisance, fortunately. She spent the entire day in the west side of the library, with her head shoved within her strange array of books. In the evenings, he accompanied her to events and attractions she could not understand, yet still tried to appreciate. The forgotten smiles had returned. The natural rosy tinge of her cheeks began to reappear once again.

Arnav felt the scalding heat rise within his chest every time he stole a glance. Hatred, he chided. Pure hatred for her caustic spirit. He repeated it to himself as he tried to coax himself to sleep, the glint of those hazel eyes the last thought before exhaustion overcame him.

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Khushi woke in a gloomy temperament the next morning, disappointed about her penultimate day in the big city. She convinced herself not to dampen her spirits, and make the best of this time as she had promised herself she would do. Forcing a smile to her lips, she bounded out of bed and scampered to get ready, knowing fully well that Arnav would be expecting her downstairs by 8:00

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When Khushi stepped onto board the crowded subway, she was startled to see that they were not headed in the usual direction of the library. A small frown spread across her face, for the newly avid reader had truly been looking forward to completing the next edition of the Harry Potter series.

'No Khushi, No. No frustration', she whispered to herself. This definitely called for a new adventure and a different experience, something to cherish in the coming months of despair. She keenly grinned to herself as crowds of people pushed themselves on and off the train cars. Hesitantly, she turned to take a glimpse of her perpetually irritated husband, not surprised to see him immersed on his phone with the infamous Bluetooth attached to his ear. She shook her head and giggled silently, the inquisitive glance he passed going disregarded.

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Coney Island was like a dream world. One like the princess Cinderella would reside in. Khushi nearly started clapping as she saw the expanse of the warm sand and the ocean, gasped as she saw the enormous, thrilling roller coasters and rides. She followed Arnav soundlessly as he walked onto the beach, copying him as he removed his sandals and yelping in pain as her bare feet touched the scalding sand. He didn't turn to check if she was all right, walking farther towards the ocean and settling into his folding seat to read his book and watch the crashing waves.

Arnav did turn around eventually, to toss Khushi a used, hotel towel to sit on, but he was surprised to see that she wasn't behind him. Panic set in. Unfamiliar and foreign. He impatiently scanned the expanse of the beach searching for the bright pink skirt she was wearing, only to suck in his breath as he saw her testing the ocean enthusiastically. She was exquisite in every sense, and for once, thoughts of her goodness ran through his mind.

Thoughts of her innocence.

Arnav watched as his wife continued into the ocean water, testing how deep she could go before the waves alarmed her. The other bikini clad swimmers watched in confusion, as the waves would wash against Khushi's ankles, and she would scream and run back to the dry shore, only to go retreat to the testing waters once again. The wind whipped her long, loose hair around her ruddy face, her nose turning pink from the chill of the ocean and the sound of her laughter tinkling in the air as she threw her head back in laughter.

What had he done back in Delhi? He had stripped Khushi of her very spirit. He forced the thoughts of his sister to occupy his fickle mind, and he focused once again on the hatred he felt for her. How he'd make her pay.

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The day in Coney Island gave birth to feelings Arnav had concealed deep within and forgotten. The scalding heat he felt in his chest turned to pleasurable warmth as he saw Khushi licking her fingers free of sticky cotton candy. The constant frown turned to a small chuckle as he saw her screaming on the giant roller coaster she timidly decided to ride. The indifference turned to annoyance as the young security guard kindly offered her a tissue when she vomited after a peculiarly nauseating ride. The loathing turned to something else as she rested her tired head on his shoulder on the subway.

He didn't want to discover that something else. But that night, as he rested on his pillow for the night, something told him that perhaps, just perhaps, he didn't truly hate her. He blocked the muddled commotion to the best of his ability, reassuring himself that only a day of this nonsense was left.

Hatred would overcome all else and he would manage to ruin Khushi... just as he had planned.

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CHAPTER TEN: B E L L E


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Don't throw chappals 😆 Please comment naa. 😳 Thanks!


Edited by aamir18 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Khushi's adorable and too innocent! Despite the spasms of affection Arnav is getting he's still evil- to give respite from her depression and build up her spirit only to stab at it again takes cruelty to another level. Hope Khushi does survive through whatever he throws at her...don't care about him at this stage
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update ...glad to see kushi enjoying her life even though it is for a limited while
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Wow we got such a quick update, I love you and thank you very much.

Love the fact the word count for each update is increasing, again love you for this and thank you very much.

The update was amazing and simply superb as it was focused more on Khushi,

I'm loving the fact Khushi is enjoying her self even though she is in the library most of the time and bless she is so innocent getting emotional over certain books she has read.

I'm glad Arnav is still taking her out to explore New York even though it is Anjali's doing.

So Arnav has got the divorce papers ready, honestly nothing this man does shocks me anymore.

Wow Arnav was actually worried when he thought Khushi had gone missing on the beach, so he does feel some emotion.

It is nice to read that khushi's laughter does still affect him but it's a shame his ego and cruelness won't change.

So Arnav has admitted to himself that he does not hate her as much as he had thought but it's a shame as he still wants to make her pay.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Wow I read the update before you sent me a PM, so happy with my stalking skills lol.

Thanking you in advance for the PM xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really really love it story.so real
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Someone pinch me plz...was that really my name you did mention...no one ever did that to me.
Thanx a tonne dear,i really feel overwhelmed to receive such a dedication from you. I am glad u liked my comments...
Coming back to the chapter...i liked it immensely given that you gave khushi this time to enjoy,to forget her sorrows and to be her chirpy self. Her habits that you describe just makes her realistic yet dreamlike be it reading potter or bella with her style...dancing with waves..her childish demeanour,care free attitude beautifies her character...hope so arnav does realize this beauty. But wait...u did mention that he is going to finalize the divorce thing...ummm i think its good that khushi will be able to get free from his clutches but since she loves her husband it will break her too...but plz make her strong she had already suffered alot, it seems like we are soon to witness the third guy from the banner makes his entry...wud love to see arnav's repentance n guilt and above all his realization for losing khushi n giving her pain ...i want him to grovel n beg thats his only retribution...make him suffer equally. But it was good to see him acknowledge that his hate was not as genuine as he thinks it be.i feel sad that their trip had to end...but i know u will do full justice to the ff willbe eagerly looking forward to it
Thanx for the beautiful update...n sorry my like doesn't shows in the post bcoz my like button becomes disfunctinal at times but surely i will comment...will be less active for a month exam time but plz pm me i will surely read this one.
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