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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm so blown away with your appreciation! 😳 THANK YOU! So so so very much! I'm so sorry I made you cry!

Originally posted by: rainyday3000

One is the most emotional stories I ever read on IF...I cried reading almost all the updates especially the last 2...can't wait to read more!!!

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Thank you so very much Hina! For the beautiful, thoughtful comment and the likes you've put on other comments! πŸ€— I am so flattered! Don't worry. The redemption will not be an easy one 😳

Originally posted by: Hina69

I so agree with her!

He wants her to be like before just to torture her more...thats pathetic!

He needs to learn a lesson soon..

Plz make her strong and let her fight back without him!

Intense and painful Update!!!!!

Pls update soon and pls pls pls make it long as your updates are quite short!...Hehe greedy me...!

Thanks for the PM dear xxx

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Posted: 10 years ago
I LOVE YOU. Your comment is freaking awesome. Keep being amazing and thank you SO SO SO much. Ugh. I have the bestestest virtual friends, ever <33333

Originally posted by: LazilyAnonymous

BiZeewaaa πŸ€—


Loved the part. Arnav may think he is being nice to her but he needs his Harvard self to check his dictionary.

If this is what he defines nice as...then


NewYork?? This will be an interesting trip. It will either change their relationship for the better or for worse. And I am hoping it is for the better.

It broke my heart to read about Khushi's pain. She doesnt belong anywhere. Not at her sasural nor at her maikaa!!! She is so strong emotionally. Doesnt deserve this at all.

I am kind hating this ASR. He loves her somewhere deep inside his heart, I know that. But he is blinded by hatred. I wonder if Arnav will find the truth before the trip and he will try to fix the relationship during the trip. But I dont think that will happen.

I wonder when Arnav will use his Harvard brain and find out the truth 😑

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Posted: 10 years ago
Faiqa, YOU are my fave. A redemption is DEF coming his way πŸ€— Love you!

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Awesome Zee.u r my fav

Are u planning a redemption for this guy.Ok lets see how are you going to unfold?

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am so sorry I didn't get it up by then 🀒 I suck. LOL. But I will most probably have it up and going today 😳 Thank you for sitting tight! <3

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Hope you have had a lovely vacation?


Are you back to home sweet home?

I am giving you 24 hours to recover from you tiredness and jet lag and then I need my dose of this story so I shall be hoping for an update by Wednesday/Thursday lol.

Please please update soon xx


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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my goodness! Thank you so much for the love and appreciation! 😊 I wish I had more readers, but I'm a relatively newer writer on IF... and with my schedule it become hard to update consistently. I hope, if people enjoy the story once it picks up, they will share it with friends and buddies πŸ˜› But until then, I'm happy with the number of readers I got! Thank YOU so much for the comment and thank you for reading 😳

Originally posted by: bc1972

What a lovely story! You are an amazing writer. Wonder why more
Ppl haven't read it yet. I myself just discovered it. It needs a little advertising - but don't know how to do that on the forum.

Can't wait to read what happens in NY!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just came across this FF ..read all d parts in one go and im blown away!!!
Such a Brilliant piece of work and beautifully writtenπŸ‘πŸ‘
Cant wait to read more..plz cont soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaaay! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! I am so flattered. 😳 Thank you so much for this heart warming comment!

Originally posted by: zaniax

Just came across this FF ..read all d parts in one go and im blown away!!!

Such a Brilliant piece of work and beautifully writtenπŸ‘πŸ‘
Cant wait to read more..plz cont soon :)

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A/N: OKAY. Yes. I know this update is like, way too late. I'm so so so sorry. But, I had been to India and then had to go back to school the next day. Then classes got to me, etc. etc. Now, this isn't a LONG update (DONT HATE ME), but I did LOVE writing it. I don't know exactly why πŸ˜†. I'm a weird soul, forgive me. I hope you enjoying reading this! If you do, please leave me a comment or a like 😳 Back to Calculus! πŸ˜†

EDIT: Also. I know I didn't reply to all comments. I'm so sorry. I read through all of them though and I love every person who takes the time to write anything at all. Even if it's 'you suck' πŸ˜† So thank you so so so much. All of you guys <3


~Serendipity~
"an accidental discovery"

Chapter Seven: Jest

Devi Maiyya Madad. Devi Maiyya Madad'

As the plane descended into JFKs International Airport, Khushi's nervous chanting grew louder... the color draining from her face and her nails ripping through the material of her armrest. The woman sitting next to her pat her shoulder reassuringly, comforting her that the aircraft was safe and the expanding bubbles in her ears were completely normal. Arnav had asked to exchange her first class seat for a ticket in economy class, conveniently sparing himself from the embarrassment of being seen with an uneducated woman dressed in a middle class cotton salwar. Khushi had not argued with him, though she was desperately afraid, anxious that he would take out his anger by abandoning her on the streets of a foreign country.

He had done it before. He could easily do it again.

As the plane came to a stop, and passengers began moving about to remove their luggage, Khushi froze, nervous about what to do and where to go. She hurridely tried to undo the seat buckle, but could not understand how to open the clasp, the kind woman who had been sitting next to her already moving down the aisle to exit the aircraft. As the plane began to empty, the elderly and pregnant stragglers exiting, Khushi began to tear up... nervous the plane would depart and take her to another country where she would go missing forever.

'May I help you, miss?' The deep voice interrupted her thoughts, and Khushi desperately nodded her head, lifting the seat buckle and indicating that it wouldn't open. The steward observed her intently and chuckled eerily, instantly sending Khushi warning signals that something was wrong. As he reached for the clasp, she felt his hand linger on the exposed skin at the cut of her kurta, moving downwards with calculated persistence. He looked into her eyes with a crude smirk, and as soon as Khushi heard the clasp of the belt being undone, she staggered out of her seat and fell into the aisle, tumbling backwards as the steward stepped forward to hold her. Gaining an unsteady balance on her feet, she sprawled her hands across his chest and pushed him back with all the force she could muster, trembling when his sneer refused to diminish.

'KHUSHI!'

She nearly collapsed in relief as she heard the familiar voice behind her, spitting venom in disgust. Khushi had never known that voice could bring such comfort and alleviation... could actually stop the stubborn tremors of angst and fear. She turned to see Arnav standing at the exit of the plane, his stance rigid and his expression unforgiving. She didn't care. Scurrying to hide behind him, Khushi thanked devi maiyya profusely, oblivious to her husband's embarrassed apology for the uneducated maid's misbehavior. Arnav pushed a few notes into the steward's hand, unaware of the man's ludicrous stares and Khushi's respective agitation, grabbing her hand to fiercely drag her out of the aircraft.

Ar--Arnav Ji. Woh---woh aadmi hum---humare saath"

"SHUT UP KHUSHI. JUST SHUT UP. Stop dreaming that every man is out there to get you. You're not a catch, all right? So kindly shut the f**k up"

She could not say she was surprised by his reaction. She had grown accustomed to not being trusted. So Khushi followed him like a silent shadow, wrapping the sweater tighter around her body as she studied the delicate pattern of stars on her jootis -- not once observing the myriad of lights and sounds that sped outside her taxi window.

Life was temporary. So was happiness.

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As Khushi lifted the heavy comforter over her head , she tried to silent the noises that refused to cease outside her window -- the horns and the laughter, music and dance, melodies of life. Arnav had booked her a separate room immediately upon reaching their hotel, claiming that she was a maid and his wife was waiting for him in the lobby. She didn't complain. But as the foreign sounds blared from the lively streets, she could not help but bite her lips in anxiety, wishing she was secured back at her poolside. She missed the sound of the gentle waves lulling her to a deep slumber.

At the thoughts of the calm water and chocolate eyes, she succumbed to her exhaustion and fell asleep at last.

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Arnav had been mortified the minute he walked through the honeymoon suite door. Rose petals were strewn on the bed alongside the 'Do Not Disturb' place card. A glass of milk perched on the dresser. Champagne and strawberries lay aside a hot tub peculiarly large enough for two. The room smelt strongly of lavender and jasmine and was lit only by scattered candles. He nearly cursed when he opened the bed stand to a collection of condoms and a list of charges for the po*nographic films available through the hotel.

His sister was out of her mind. He could only imagine the confusion of the American staff at her filmy Bollywood demands. Rose petals and milk? He buried his head into his palms, thanking god for deciding against sharing the room with Khushi. Arnav had been uncertain, with her strange behavior at the airport, but had convinced himself he was being unnecessarily dramatic. He had done the right thing.

Having never shared the intimate relationship between a husband and wife, Arnav could not even think to imagine the tension of sharing the suggestive environment that was this hotel room. Everything screamed passion and sex--- nights of love and togetherness.

His eyes skimmed the movie list in his drawer. Chuckling softly, he imagined Khushi's supposed reactions to those titles. She would surely think 'Big Black B****' was about rotting chicken bones. And as he tossed the condoms into the waste basket, he couldn't help but think she would assume them to be strawberry flavored balloons.

The smirk spread coyly across his face. His wife surely was something else.
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CHAPTER EIGHT: D E S T R U C T I O N

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DUN. DUN. DUN.
Don't throw chappals πŸ˜† Please comment naa. 😳 Thanks!

Edited by aamir18 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy I am first!!! πŸ˜ƒ LOL Bizee, I dont need PMs to stalk you 😈 🀣


First things first, Nice banner/videosig/whatever-you-want-to-call-it πŸ˜› Suggestive, guttery and awesome πŸ˜‰ 😳 πŸ˜† Tu na besharam ki besharam hi rahegi 🀣

The first like made me crack up laughing. Devi Maiyaa Madad Kar .. I love my SankaDevi. I missed her.

But then my moment of happiness was gone when I read how Arnav was embarrassed with her middle-class behavior. That is NOT done ASR. 😳 😑 I feel like whacking him on the head. I never though I would live the day to say, I hate ASR. You made the impossible occur. You better make me love him back but it won't be easy 😳 My mom just told me today, a man who can hate with intensity loves with the same intensity. Arnav...please love Khushi before it is too late...

I wanted Arnav to beat the man up but thats okay. He will soon regret all his actions and I will be there, laughing at him and saying, he doesn't deserve her. 😑

Life was temporary. So was happiness.

This line tore me apart. That statement is so damn true. Nothing is permanent...not you, and certainly not happiness. Can I hug Khushi? She makes me want to hug her and make her laugh. We can even watch SalmaanKhan movies together ❀️ Don't mind my ranting, I write without a filter πŸ˜†

His eyes skimmed the movie list in his drawer. Chuckling softly, he imagined Khushi's supposed reactions to those titles. She would surely think 'Big Black B****' was about rotting chicken bones. And as he tossed the condoms into the waste basket, he couldn't help but think she would assume them to be strawberry flavored balloons.

This made me crack up. That really would be Khushi 🀣 Bones and Balloons 🀣 Where did you come up with this? πŸ˜†

And Yes, Khushi is just something else. I loved this moment of softening Arnav. Him saying HIS WIFE and also CHUCKLING SOFTLY with love, not hate (I hope). Made my day Bizee.


BTW: You need longer parts

BTTW: Arnav better regret soon and repent. I want a really good repentance from Arnav. 😳 And I want Khushi to not forgive him quickly 😳

Continue Soon πŸ€—

Beautifully Written ❀️


Edited by LazilyAnonymous - 10 years ago
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