*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 82

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the end... Absolutely awesome๐Ÿ‘.
Ek Epilogue toh banta hai na...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely ending ๐Ÿ˜Š Bed to bed Superb FF ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Gonna miss it :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Edited my comment on page 120:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Angel

Oh How Sweet...I am gonna miss this story alot โค๏ธ


Thanks for liking! I am going to miss your comments too๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: Chandu2000

A very unique and beautifully written ff !!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks a tonne!๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Thankyou Tina๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Meerah14

That was an awesome ending...


Thanks yaar๐Ÿ˜ƒ


STILL CAN'T BELIVE ITS END๐Ÿ˜ญ
YIPEE THEY MARRIED๐Ÿ˜ณ
ARNAV BROUGHT KUSHI TO RM FOR MAKING HER LOVE IN THT BED*HAAYE KYA PYAAR HAI*๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
START FROM BED ND END WITH BED๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
ARNAV ANGER IS JUSTIFIED HW CAN ANYBODY DISTURB THE PERSON ON HIS FIRST MRNG AFTER HIS WEDDING๐Ÿคฃ
YA BED CREAKED AGAIN๐Ÿคฃ

WILL WAIT FOR UR NXT MINDBLOWING STORY,COME BACK SOON๐Ÿ˜ƒ

He he! Thanks a lot! I will miss your sweet comments! Take care! I will try to come back soon! Thanks for your love and support!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lol hahha awww bless now thats what you call a shot gun wedding well in a few days
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res

Bada mazaa ayaa padh ke.

I have read many FFs, written a few myself. But NOWHERE and I mean it... NOWHERE have I seen Arnav and Khushi meeting the way they did in your story. Bas! ๐Ÿ‘

From one broken bed to one creaking bed it was one masaledaar journey!

Arnav was such a jerk throughout. I felt like hitting him on so many occasions. My poor Khushi, broke her heart so many times! Stupid jerk! Wants to make out, sleep with her, claim her as his but shaadi ki baat karo toh banda jerk main transform ho jaata hain! All the care, concern, love and affection he feels for her and she for him just disappears!!! I felt like telling KKG to dump ASR and seriously marry NK.

But I never did coz Arnav Khushi hamesha, in spite of a Shyam and despite Mami's and La's manipulations.

Ab sasuma ne hi chunri ke form main aashirwad de diya, toh bas baat khatam! And I liked the interaction between Arnav and Khushi's father. The way he asks for Khushi's hand and the way her father accepts. It was cute.

And you maintained the sexual tension between them from start to the end, even after they had done it once โญ๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Anjali's giggles, her husband's support, Payal, Aakash, Buaji, Amma, Babuji sab kuch padh kar bada fun aya ๐Ÿ˜†

PS: The SR bed was a cupid of sorts in this ArHi love story. May your ArHi continue to bless that bed repeatedly ๐Ÿ˜‰ โ˜บ๏ธ
PPS: Btw, loved all the banners and pics you inserted ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow simply amazing update...
thanks for the pm...
awesome ending...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: sincereme

Amazing Update...
Beautiful journey of entwined souls from one broken end to another...๐Ÿ˜‰
Perfect ending... They came all the way from sheesh mahal to Raizada mension to celebrate their first night on their bed... Loved it...
Do continue your writing...
Will wait for your next story...



Thank you for liking the journey!๐Ÿ˜ƒ Will write again hopefully
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww wiwy, the bed the bed... i want it to break and break some more. lovely running away with wife strapped to him... very romantic our buildering boy...

thoroughly enjoyed your romp through the romance of kkg and asr.

now, enough skiving, start the next one, madam ji.

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