~~Unspoken Destiny~~ #2 [KR + SS] - Page 6

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

wohi karing but end is troubling me...

jitna likha utna toh update kardo
plz

Originally posted by: sapnaarsha

jitna likha utna toh update kardo
plz

aise kiya toh suspense ki dhajya udh jayegi...

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

aise kiya toh suspense ki dhajya udh jayegi...

hume itna mat tadpao plz

mera ek question:

shart hai kya??

i have a feeling...

that it is like rey has to make kriya hate him...

vaise loved it...

lekin mereko frankly aisi wali broken kria nhi pasand...

sharon ne kyun thappad maara btw????

di aap bohot questions poochte ho...

Res

Hayee

unres

sowwie kal mein chali gayi thi...

Nini aarahi thi...

Ok cuming to the update...

Hatts off sweetheart...

Awesomee update dear...


beautifully portrayed kria's part...her feelings for rey...

Loved it...


hehe...roflll doctor bechara fass gaya...dnt know what to answer...rofll
And like other i won't ask why swayam and sharon are doing...i know it very well...

Even the end were sharon console's swayam...really good...

You have surely improved a lottt

I SO KNEW IT...yehi honewala hai...hell mahn...dammit that bloody shart

arrghhh

why universe ji why...saare devil ko hi mere friends kyu banaya hai...why...
Ek toh itna acha likhte hai then EK DO MONTHS tak gayab...for tadpofying me...

Tujhe koi haq nahi muje aise tadpane ka...samjiii

I swear agar iska update jaldi nai mila na...toh i KILL YOU...and ha mein mazak nai kar rai...i seriously mean it...i do it pakka...

Now Nov dec or jan?

Thanx 4 d pm

pehle toh sorry mish maine pata nahi kaise yeh ff miss kardi teri...
and agar tu mujhe pm nahi karti toh shayad main itna achi story padh nahi pati kabhi bhi...

thanku fr that...😊

now coming to story...

WOW!!! mish kya likhti hai tu yaar...😊

mid blowing...(bowing in front of u...)👏

seriously itne highly packed intense emotions...

be it rey, kriya, swayam or sharon...everyones emotions are perfectly portrayed... (thumbs up for that)👍🏼

now last part tujhe acha nahi laga are you serious????😕

i loved everything and jo mujhe sabse zaydaacha laga woh hai rey ka kriya ko hosh mein laane wala sequence that was beautiful... 😳tears rolled down my cheeks...😭

and now whats d mystery behind rey and smriti's SHART???😕

kya hai jaldi update karo... mujhe jaanna hai fatafat se...

really loved it to the core...❤️

update soon...

and do pm me next time...

and sowwiee once again for this much late...😔

Wow. . .
At last u updatd. . .
Nice update. . .
Bt,m hell confusd. . .
Phle rey achanak kriya ko swayum k pass chodke chala gaya,
phir swayum and smriti scolding kriya,
phir kriya trusting rey,
phir sharon slapping kriya,
phir rey smiling at kriya,
phir swayum crying vry badly and sharon consoling him. . .
Yaar ho kya raha h?? , .. .
Aakhir chakkar kya hai?? . . .
Haiyye mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aaya. . .
Pura dimaag ghum raha h?? . . .
M totaly CONFUSD. . .
Yaar jaldi se nxt part update karo and
do pm wen update. . .

Congo 4 d new thread ..!
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Update soon ..!