Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 ) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz saba do continue soon
waiting😭
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CHAPTER ONE

Riya was going on road tensed and in hurry and reach on bus stop
she ask a man standing beside her
bhai sahab kya baat hai 08:00am baje ki bus ko itni der kyun lag rahi hai aane main
are madam wo toh nakal chuki hai
riya get shock and say kya bus chali gayi ab mein office kaise pohnchungi


she smile and say ek kaam karti hoon walk karke chali jaati hoon itna dur nahi hai
she was walking on road's path it was too hot .riya was crossing road suddenly a car hit her and she fell down
arjun come out and say pagal ho kya ya phir andhi ho
riya :excuse me mr. andhi mein nahi andhe shayed aap ho
arjun :mein...mein andha hoon


riya : haan aap andhe ho aap ko dikhayi nahi deta kya ya phir aap ko sahi se gaari nahi chalani aati...
how dare you he put his finger poing on him mujhe gari nahi chalani aati yells arjun angrily
riya : and how dare you to say me pagal and andhi huh..???
arjun calm down and say ok ok sir mat khao ab raasta choro mein
aap raasta choro mein yells riya


arjun angrily say : you... finger point on her
riya too put her finger on him
arjun put his finger down . he go inside and start the car
inside the car sameer ask arjun kya hua
arjun kuch nahi bhai ek larki thi shayed pagal thi wo toh shukar hai mene car time pe rok li warna aaj to sidha bhagwaan ke paas hoti
sameer was smiling remembering that girl who was fighting with arjun


and shocked that how arjun was shut up infront of that girl even he hate girls that was like a surprise for him
riya also move to her way
riya : bohat late ho chuka hai agar office nahi pohnchi toh yeh job bhi jayegi
riya arrive to that office and sit waiting for her turn
after 2 hour's a girl who was sitting on reception call miss riya mukharjee it's your turn


riya was excited and nervous for the interview she was moving slowly and excitelly and from the other side arjun was comming.when they come near suddenly the got clash (takraao) between them
ohhh i'm really very sorry mene dekha nahi i'm sorry say riya
it's ok answer arjun


when they both see eachother they was shocked
riya put her finger point on him and say tum...
arjun too put his finger point on her and say tum...!!!
do comment's like you have done for ch scatches
saba
Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
wow ariya ka pehla scene that was awesome really😉
loved it😛
do continue soon waiting for your update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys why no comment ?
no one like my concept?
Why?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a great start ☺️
do continue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice.
Continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hi... its great... please continue... waiting to know how Arjun will react when he interviews Ria...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

intersting concept and intro
rathore rawte bro woww yrr
loving it
cont soon
pm me

thanks 😃
Edited by saba.ali81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awww 😛
that was a great concept i also want something like this
thanks for shearing
and do pm me the next update...😃
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