Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 ) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
NICE UPDATE...
waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: _mahi_

amazing dear๐Ÿ‘
i m in love with your story๐Ÿ˜ณ
beautiful concept
riya as arjun's secretary๐Ÿ˜ฒ
and sameer his older brother๐Ÿ˜ƒ
waah.. i like it!!!
awww i was emotional when arjun told her about his past๐Ÿ˜ญ
hopefully they will keep having their lil nok-jhoks as i love them..๐Ÿ˜‰
do continue soon dear
and congratulations on becoming a senior member ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was great! arjun shared his story abt his wife with riya! how nice of him! he is slowly letting riya into his life i guess... and riya also apologised to him! now i am hoping there will be some understanding in between them! please update soon! can't wait to read more abt arjun and riya's scenes!
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CHAPTER 6

first very sorry guys for late update but i'm back with chapter 6 do read it and plz dont frget to leave comment's i want to know how much peoples do like hamsafar ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

in morning arjun call riya in his cabin .riya come to cabin and ask yes sir
arjun : aaj shaam ko humein ek party mein jaana hai get ready in evening...
riya : no sir i can't come
arjun : shockley par kyun
riya : ab...wo...sir mere sarr mein bohat dard ho raha hai i can't come .
arjun : to tum office kyun aayi come on go and rest
riya : but sir office ka kaam
arjun cut and say wo mein kisi aur ko kehdunga
riya : ok sir agar aap itna keh rahe hain to mein chalti hoon.

arjun was going in his car to party and riya's home come in that way arjun stop the car and say in his mind aaj subha riya ki tabiyat kuch thike nahi thi mujhe jaake usse milna chahiye.he go inside the home riya's mami open the door arjun ask for riya how she is aaj subha she was not well riya's mami tell him that in morning she was alright . when arjun thought she speak lie to him he got angry and ask can i meet her .he go to the room where she was and got shocked when he see her with her father.riya also see him and come to him saying sir aap yahaan aap samajhte honge mene aap se jhut bola but usske liye bhi ek waja thi mere babu ji ke health btw sorry for speaking lie.arjun become cold and say her jo jhut kisi ki bhalayi ke liye bola gaya ho wo jhut, jhut nahi hota ...

riya smile and say thanks sir aap ne mujhe samjha
arjun : acha agar ye baat hai to phir thanks to you too
riya : thanks to me why???
arjun : tum ne bhi to mujhe samjha
both smile while stairing at eachother.riya tell him to go in party and i'll come with you too...
arjun:ok mein bahar gaari mein wait karta hoon...
arjun in sitting car thought aaj tak mene kabhi kisi ko ghalat nehi samjhe to aaj kaise khair acha hua mene sab dekh liya warna ek baar phir anjaane mein mujhese riya ka dil dukh jaata...
suddenly riya come and sit in car and say chalein.they arrive in party and go inside.

arjun and riya to and meet to mr.bakshi and intro them eachother riya it's mr.bakshi hamare business partner jin ke liye hum yahaan aaye hain .mr.bakshi nice to meet you mr.arjun and lagta hai aap apni wife ki bohat care karte hain.they got shocked suddenly arjun say arre nahi nahi mr.bakshi she is not my wife she is my secretary and my friend.mr.bakshi sorry them for saying them husband-wife and leave...
arjun : ye business person's bhi na innka business ke presure ki waja se dimag ghum jaata hai.
suddenly riya laugh loudly arjun ask kya hua tum why are you laughing
riya : sir lagta hai business ke presure ki waja se aap bhi thore funny hogaye hain
arjun : what???while laughing too...
riya : chalo acha hua kam se kam aap ki pehli baar hanste hua to dekha...

ok guys now it's time to do comment's

Saba๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy me first ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
nice update saba ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
well Mr. Bakshi is a fortune teller haan,would be husband wife toh hai na!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
very nicely written loved it & continue soon dearie ๐Ÿ˜Š



Edited by KiSha13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear loved ittt ๐Ÿค—

waitng for d nxt prt tnku 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaar arjun and laugh...too good:)
guess the love is already bloomed..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Saba dear

Loved it ...
Mr bakshi rocks wen he said : ap aur apki Wife ...yayyy


Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow arjun laughing
amazing
dnt know when we will get to see laughing arjun in the show ( not in fb's)
it is very interesting
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear! continue soon!
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