FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158) - Page 60

What a wonderful wonderful update! Arnav's anguish in his letter was palpable and your heart went out to the little boy missing his mom and wondering what went wrong with his wonderful life! Love the connection he feels with jalebi - enough to pour out his soul to her!

Loved the little touches like the envelope, the tear smudges on the letter - brilliantly done!

Couldn't imagine how painful must it be to Arnav..

my heart ache for arnav... its really unbelievable how connected they do feel (i knw its a storyso all credits go to u)

Originally posted by: inajnar

The update was moving...and I can say the flow of your story is just so perfect...

At the risk of sounding like an ignoramus , I ask you...how do you do the letters*the pics that is) ..some software mumbo- jumbo ?

that was a beautiful update ! the pain Arnav is going thru in the absence of his mother is beautifully described.The words used in the letter that he wrote was heart wrenching.I like your way of presentation.I like how the letters look real with different handwriting and the smudges when tears fall on it.It has a very nice feel to it and makes the story all the more interesting.
Jalebi can make anyone smile ,so will this Jalebi make A smile...
Great update!

part 14
nice part...
that was so emotional...
poor Arnav and Anjali...
cont soon dear...

read the whole story in one go!!!!!!!!!!!
really...its too good!!!!!!!
another FF in my stalking list!!!!!!!!!!!
continue ...
w8ng for next!!

Amazing Chapter 14!

Absolutely brilliant update...👏👏 I had tears in mahh eyes reading Arnav's letter... It was awesome...👍🏼👍🏼 Loved it...❤️

Do update soon...😊 Will be eagerly waiting for it...😊

i loved this chapter!!! the way u have expressed arnav's condition...is just mindblowin...n their relationship took a step ahead today...👏 btw just wanted to know...is arnav diabetic in this ff???