RES. to be edited when I read the whole thing. :P
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hey liya! #Waves
prologue- what interested me was the intrigue quotient in this story. It attracted me to the story
Chapter#1- SO! Khushi is missing? that is highly interesting. HIGHLY. and what I loved was how Arnav... there was an undercurrent of guilt in this chapter!
Chapter#2- OHMAYGOSH! what a cliffhanger. I was in this wierd freeze thing when she jumped over. Oh shit! Like really. What I loved was how NK was devoted to her, even if she didn't love him back. I felt bad for the guy. Like really bad
Chapter#3- There was this strange feeling of wanting to cry for Khushi in me. I feel for NK. I really do. I pity all your characters. and then... there was this thing of wanting to jump into the lappy screen and... just... SAVE KHUSHI. :D [phew! It took me quite a lot of detective-giri to find this chp.]
Chapter#4- so- a back to the past? well! now I'm even more excited! it will be interesting. what had Shashi Gupta planned? Khushi didn't look 'mentally unstable' to me... in this. Wait. Her parents... her family... they did that to her?
chapter#5- AHA! Arnav the playboy, hunh? I had my suspicions right from the start! Martita hunh? interesting.
so there you go Liya! All the stuff I would have said... had I been reading it from the start, and not five chapters later. :P does Capitulo mean chapter?
In love with this one Liya. It is a refreshing change... full of white and black... but not letting go of the shades of gray.
I love you Vitaaa!!! ( I started reading your slambook, LOL!)
-V
PS- I'll be commenting from my PMs account at times, okay?
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