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Posted: 11 years ago

This comment has been in my draft folder forever. This is the first story I read on this forum. And I had saved this comment weeks ago to post it later when I had some time on my hands. Lot of stuff was going on in my life and never got around to even posting it over here.

Anyways.

I am drained. Completely.

What a story! I dont think I can ever get enough of this.

I personally preferred the way you finished the story without the Epilogue. But the Epilogue is also well written. I love this Khushi. She seems very familiar to me. I dont know if I am saying this out of loyalty to the first story I loved on this forum, but she does seem like the kind of person I would want to be friends with. She is loyal in a twisted sort of way. A quality thats very rare in this world we live in.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter One:


Wow! Interesting!


We know the woman is Khushi. But who's the male? I don't think it Arnav... I think Arnav is her husband...


So is Khushi cheating on him?!


Politics, huh?


Can't wait to read more :)
Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter Two:


Yippe!! I knew that Arnav couldn't be the man from chapter one. Also I didn't find him the get cheated on and not find out types :P


Seems like they're in this together! And in love!?


Loving this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter Two:


Hmm... Khushi seems to have a past.


Also she seems more ASR types in this.


Arnav is always incomplete without his guilt :P


Damn, NK too?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter Four:


I knew! I just knew that NK didn't want that from Khushi. Lol jalebis ^_^


Love how Khushi knows who she is and what she can do. Anna's characters is quite intriguing as well. :)


Hmm, ASR seems to want his wife... Well truly be his wife and open up, be able to trust him, lean on him, etc etc.


Khushi Kumari Gupta/Singh Riazada. The number of selfless acts she's done compared to anything else I longer than her name.


Shashi Gupta needs a reality check. His daughter is marrying who appears to be the shadiest man in Delhi and that's fine. But he can't see it when his so called second daughter practically gives herself away for him. He doesn't seem like such a smart politician.


As for your note, it's human to err. It's not real if the human is just too perfect. Khushi may be selfless, but she has her share of flaws as well.


Thanks for the amazing story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@arisai: Nyc story!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
when I read this story...
i was speechless...breathless...and i don;t know what...
i mean...
good story..!!
but a harsh plot..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago


The storyline was brilliant and you did justice to all the characters in the story.while I felt that arnav would never choose his family over his career and neither khushi would accept him back in her life for all the things she had to go thru because of him.
Amazing work dear 😊
Edited by chenis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just came across this ff...but got totally intoxicated😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
read in a go . its amazing
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