well i wont say i was completely desepointed with how you ended the story, its a loose end. and may be you could start another track.
the fact is the way i see it is that life very rarely gives you a choice of having a happily every after. actualy it never does. the only place that every body can live a happily everaftter is in a story. you can have the perfect ending in a story so i always believe one should never wast it.
and yes i would like to think that Arnav gave up politic to be with his family. however late, to spend time with his son to share moments of pride and joy in how he has turned out. to have the family he probelly craves for everyday. for khushi to have the love of her life with her. to be held in his arms every night. or share a look over a cup of coffee. for yamir to see his parents together, play catch with his father, take his father advise of the choies he makes in life.
power is fine, what use is it if you cant share the joy of achivement with anyone. for me in your story Arnav is the bigest looser. and that is sad.
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